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'''''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: LetsPlay/{{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}} "fame" become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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* GreenEyedMonster: ChipCheezum, though only in chapter 1.
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* GreenEyedMonster: ChipCheezum, LetsPlay/ChipCheezum, though only in chapter 1.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Much like ''{{Seinfeld}}'', each chapter (besides chapter 5) is written in all caps and starts with the word "the."
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Much like ''{{Seinfeld}}'', ''Series/{{Seinfeld}}'', each chapter (besides chapter 5) is written in all caps and starts with the word "the."
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** MindScrew: Chapter 5, in an interesting disconnect, is actually the best written chapter of the story [[spoiler:until LetsPlay/ProtonJon comes in near the end to "fix" everything]].
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Yep, I\'m a real person. Go figure.
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** A person called "thornbrain" tries to kill slowbeef and Diabetus in order to take their position of best retsupuraers in the world.
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** A person called "thornbrain" "[[LetsPlay/TheStrawhatNO thornbrain]]" tries to kill slowbeef and Diabetus in order to take their position of best retsupuraers in the world.
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lol, i like rp and all, but come on
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'''''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: LetsPlay/{{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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'''''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: LetsPlay/{{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}} fame "fame" become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: LetsPlay/{{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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->"So, correct me if I'm wrong, but from what I can get from what he's written, this is about two gay guys traveling across the country killing dudes trying to kill them because it's cloudy outside and they're both scared of the dark. Apparently they're based off two dumbfucks on le grande internet, making fun of other dumbfucks on the internet. Riveting. Did I mention the gay, by the way? Also, don't actually correct me; I seriously don't give a shit."
-->The fanfic's replacement author basically summing up the plot.
'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
-->The fanfic's replacement author basically summing up the plot.
'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this:
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* HeroicSacrifice: Either sirronlionheart or ElectricalBeast perform one of these to save slowbeef and Diabetus in Chapter 2.
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* SuddenNameChange: In Chapter 2, sirronlionheart pulls a HeroicSacrifice to save slowbeef and Diabetus. However, in Chapter 3, it is mentioned that ElectricalBeast is the one who saved them.
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* SuddenNameChange: In Chapter 2, sirronlionheart pulls a HeroicSacrifice to save slowbeef and Diabetus. However, in Chapter 3, it is mentioned that ElectricalBeast LetsPlay/ElectricalBeast is the one who saved them.
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* DeathByCameo: BillyMC appears briefly in Chapter 2, only to get killed after slowbeef accidentally runs him over with his car.
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* DeathByCameo: BillyMC LetsPlay/BillyMC appears briefly in Chapter 2, only to get killed after slowbeef accidentally runs him over with his car.
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** "WWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTTTT" the voice bumboozlled.
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** "WWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTTTT" [[BigWhat "WWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTTTT"]] the voice bumboozlled.
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* DeathByCameo: BillyMC appears briefly in Chapter 2, only to get killed after slowbeef accidentally runs him over with his car.
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* {{Retirony}}: With his dying breath, [=BillyMC=] laments that he was only five dollars away from buying a Nintendo 64.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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-->The fanfic's replacement author basically summing up the plot.
'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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* GrandfatherParadox: Averted. After slowbeef somehow sends Diabetus back in time, Betus considers becoming slowbeef's father, but ultimately decides against it because he feels that having a family would interfere with making videos.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed. About halfway through the last chapter, a different person takes over writing the fic, though it's hardly noticeable aside from a few instances of LampshadeHanging.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Plenty from both authors. The first author stops the plot to discuss such things as why people call driveways "driveways" even though people park on them and animes that he dislikes. The replacement author mostly just insults the previous author.
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* GreenEyedMonster: ChipCheezum, though only in chapter 1.
** A person called "thornbrain" tries to kill slowbeef and Diabetus in order to take their position of best retsupuraers in the world.
** A person called "thornbrain" tries to kill slowbeef and Diabetus in order to take their position of best retsupuraers in the world.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: slowbeef and Diabetus.
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* MacGuffin: slowbeef and Diabetus' "destany."
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* MacGuffin: slowbeef and Diabetus' "destany."" While destiny is more of a concept, apparently a destany is a tangible object, as [[spoiler: the story ends when the two protagonists find theirs behind a door they unlock.]]
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. In the story, {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so.
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'''Retsupurae's journey to find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. In the story, The plot is very inconsistent, but it can basically be summed up like this: {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so.
so. However, once they arrive at the home of the people they are going to make fun of, it turns out to be a trap set up by a mysterious man who wants to take over Retsupurae. slowbeef and Diabetus then go on a journey to find their destiny (or "destany"), but what exactly their destiny is is never revealed.
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* MacGuffin: slowbeef and Diabetus' "destany."
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler: The mysterious man is never defeated. The story just ends with slowbeef and Diabetus finding their destany.]]
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* InformedLocation: slowbeef is stated to be from New York (in reality, he's from New Jersey), while Diabetus is stated to live in Kansas (in reality, he lives in Alabama). Also, slowbeef and Diabetus apparently live together in this fic.
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'''Retsupurae's Journey to Find Themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. In the story, {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so.
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'''Retsupurae's Journey journey to Find Themselves''' find themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. In the story, {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so.
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* AllLowercaseLetters: The title of the fanfic, except for the first word.
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** Possibly the author too, based on copious amounts of HaveIMentionedThatIAmHeterosexualToday.
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* SaidBookismSaidBookism: This, combined with RougeAnglesOfSatin leads to such gems as:
** "uh they always do that moron. the voice retarted.
** "WWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTTTT" the voice bumboozlled.
** "TELEPORE!" the man britished.
** "uh they always do that moron. the voice retarted.
** "WWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTTTT" the voice bumboozlled.
** "TELEPORE!" the man britished.
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* YeOldeButcheredEnglish: The people in the first Let's Play video basically add "-eth" after every word.
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* MinorInjuryOverreaction: sirronlionheart gets killed after accidentally pricking his chest with a thumbtack.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Either sirronlionheart or ElectricalBeast perform one of these to save slowbeef and Diabetus in Chapter 2.
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* SuddenNameChange: In Chapter 2, sirronlionheart pulls a HeroicSacrifice to save slowbeef and Diabetus. However, in Chapter 3, it is mentioned that ElectricalBeast is the one who saved them.
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'''Retsupurae's Journey to Find Themselves''' is a fan fiction story written by Gactivefy. In the story, {{slowbeef}} and Diabetus of {{Retsupurae}} fame become bored with making fun of people on the internet. Diabetus suggests that they make fun of people in person instead, and they go on a journey to do so.
It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8154383/1/Retsupurae-s-journey-to-find-themselves here]].
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!!'''This story contains examples of the following tropes:'''
* ArmoredClosetGay: Proteus refers to making videos as "gay in more ways than one," and states that he'd rather be at home having sex with his girlfriend. According to the author, he is "trying to hide his homosex."
* DisproportionateRetribution: Diabetus responds to slowbeef asking him if he's sure he's okay by punching him in the face.
** slowbeef later returns the favor by kicking Diabetus for asking where they are going, which causes Diabetus' kidney to rupture and somehow sends him back in time to 1922.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Much like ''{{Seinfeld}}'', each chapter (besides chapter 5) is written in all caps and starts with the word "the."
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Nonhuman example. After Diabetus rings Rijno and Darknessthecurse's doorbell in chapter 2, slowbeef pulls out a gun, shoots the door in half, karate chops the halves into quarters, and then lights the quarters on fire with a lighter.
* TrollFic: Either this, or the author's first language is one other than English.
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It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8154383/1/Retsupurae-s-journey-to-find-themselves here]].
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!!'''This story contains examples of the following tropes:'''
* ArmoredClosetGay: Proteus refers to making videos as "gay in more ways than one," and states that he'd rather be at home having sex with his girlfriend. According to the author, he is "trying to hide his homosex."
* DisproportionateRetribution: Diabetus responds to slowbeef asking him if he's sure he's okay by punching him in the face.
** slowbeef later returns the favor by kicking Diabetus for asking where they are going, which causes Diabetus' kidney to rupture and somehow sends him back in time to 1922.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Much like ''{{Seinfeld}}'', each chapter (besides chapter 5) is written in all caps and starts with the word "the."
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Nonhuman example. After Diabetus rings Rijno and Darknessthecurse's doorbell in chapter 2, slowbeef pulls out a gun, shoots the door in half, karate chops the halves into quarters, and then lights the quarters on fire with a lighter.
* TrollFic: Either this, or the author's first language is one other than English.
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