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[=Requiem Universus=], is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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[=Requiem Universus=], is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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* ShoutOut: While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange-clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.]]
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the [[Franchise/{{DragonBall}} Solar Flare]] and screamed: "Never underestimate the power of old anime!"
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the [[Franchise/{{DragonBall}} Solar Flare]] and screamed: "Never underestimate the power of old anime!"
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange-clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.]]
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the[[Franchise/{{DragonBall}} ''Franchise/DragonBall'''s Solar Flare]] Flare and screamed: screams: "Never underestimate the power of old anime!"
** While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange-clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.]]
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the
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* {{Infodump}}: This is the main purpose of the Omakes: The first set is on the background info of {{Creator/SaintInfernalNeos}}'s Omniverse and Yhmos's Homeworld. The second set covers The Star Hunters. The third set [[spoiler:is a holy book heavily implied to have been written by Argo after the events of the story that summarizes future events.]]
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* {{Infodump}}: This is the main purpose of the Omakes: The first set is on the background info of {{Creator/SaintInfernalNeos}}'s Omniverse and Yhmos's Homeworld. The second set covers The Star Hunters. The third set [[spoiler:is a holy book heavily implied to have been written by Argo after the events of the story that summarizes future events.events that will take place in the story.]]
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* {{Infodump}}: This is the main purpose of the Omakes: The first set is on the background info of {{Creator/SaintInfernalNeos}}'s Omniverse and Yhmos's Homeworld. The second set covers The Star Hunters.
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* {{Infodump}}: This is the main purpose of the Omakes: The first set is on the background info of {{Creator/SaintInfernalNeos}}'s Omniverse and Yhmos's Homeworld. The second set covers The Star Hunters. The third set [[spoiler:is a holy book heavily implied to have been written by Argo after the events of the story that summarizes future events.]]
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I just binged this fic, and I do not remember this happening.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: PoH. Yes, [[AxCrazy THAT]] [[Sadist PoH,]] who helps rescue Kirito and even TakesTheBullet for the others. Granted, he tries to play it off as an EvilVersusOblivion scenario.
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* FusionDance: Asada Shino and Hecate, of the [=Mixed Form Shapeshifter=] variety.
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* FusionDance: Asada Shino and Hecate, of Hecate ultimately merge in the [=Mixed Form Shapeshifter=] variety.
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* HigherTechSpecies: The Star Hunters mostly.
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* OriginalCharacter: Yhmos and the other alien characters.
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* OriginalCharacter: Yhmos and the other alien characters.characters were created for this story. .
*ReadTheFreakingManual: Kazuto has so many HowDoIShootWeb incidents that it becomes a running gag for someone to tell him to completely read the manual for his powers.
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** SuperSpeed: Asuna
** [[PowerGivesYouWings Flight]]: Suguha
* TalkingWeapon: Hecate can be considered this after being given life.
** [[PowerGivesYouWings Flight]]: Suguha
* TalkingWeapon: Hecate can be considered this after being given life.
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** SuperSpeed: Asuna
Asuna gains speed in real life comparable to her impossible Lightning Flash speed in SAO.
**[[PowerGivesYouWings Flight]]: Suguha
{{Flight}}: Suguha can fly via PowerGivesYouWings.
* TalkingWeapon: Hecatecan be considered this talks to Sinon after being given life.
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* TalkingWeapon: Hecate
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* WeaponWieldsYou: What Hecate does to Shino before they end up in a FusionDance.
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* WeaponWieldsYou: What Hecate does decides that it knows how best to use its abilities and so directs Shino in its own use. This is before they end up in a FusionDance.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: PoH. Yes, [[AxCrazy THAT]] [[Sadist PoH,]] who helps rescue Kirito and even TakesTheBullet for the others. Granted, he tries to play it off as an EvilVsOblivion scenario.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: PoH. Yes, [[AxCrazy THAT]] [[Sadist PoH,]] who helps rescue Kirito and even TakesTheBullet for the others. Granted, he tries to play it off as an EvilVsOblivion EvilVersusOblivion scenario.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: PoH. Yes, [[AxCrazy THAT]] [[Sadist PoH,]] who helps rescue Kirito and even TakesTheBullet for the others. Granted, he tries to play it off as an EvilVsOblivion scenario.
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The fanfic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11926873/1/Requiem-Universus here.]]
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The fanfic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11926873/1/Requiem-Universus here.]]
]] After a long hiatus to focus on his other works, Creator/SaintInfernalNeos recently declared it a DeadFic and is opening it for adoption.
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* BadassPrincess: Elysium of the Star Hunters.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: When Kirito or his [[BattleHarem Anchors]] use Cosmic Power there eye's turn to 12-pointed [[EyeColourChange blue-white]] stars.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: When Kirito or his [[BattleHarem Anchors]] use Cosmic Power there eye's their eyes turn to 12-pointed [[EyeColourChange [[EyeColorChange blue-white]] stars.
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* ParentalSubstitute: By complete and total accident, [[spoiler: Yhmos]] became this for Yui (and the other MHCPs) rather than Kirito and Asuna.
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* ParentalSubstitute: By complete and total accident, [[spoiler: Yhmos]] became this for Yui (and the other MHCPs) [=MHCPs=]) rather than Kirito and Asuna.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: At the end of Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: Face to Face with a Cosmic Entity[[/note]], Yhmos and the MHCPs lure Kirito into VR to try and take his powers back...only to realize that they have NO WAY of actually taking them back or forcing Kirito to hand them over. [[LaughThemselvesSick Kirito's reaction sells it.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: At the end of Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: Face to Face with a Cosmic Entity[[/note]], Yhmos and the MHCPs [=MHCPs=] lure Kirito into VR to try and take his powers back...only to realize that they have NO WAY of actually taking them back or forcing Kirito to hand them over. [[LaughThemselvesSick Kirito's reaction sells it.]]
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* WeaponWieldsYou: What Hecate does to Shino before they end up in a FusionDance.
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* WeaponWieldsYou: What Hecate does to Shino before they end up in a FusionDance.FusionDance.
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->'''Kirito:''' Okay, this should be simply enough. There is no way I can screw this up, so let's see…Illuminate the Room!\\
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->'''Kirito:''' Okay, this should be simply simple enough. There is no way I can screw this up, so let's see…Illuminate the Room!\\
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* AccidentalHero: Yhmos' attempt to possess Kirito ended up backfiring and caused SAO to end early(Before the 74th Floor Boss Fight to be exact), and killed Sugou ensuring many were saved from death and experimentation.
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* AccidentalHero: Yhmos' attempt to possess Kirito ended up backfiring and backfiring, caused SAO to end early(Before early (Before the 74th Floor Boss Fight to be exact), and killed Sugou Sugou, ensuring many were saved from death and experimentation.
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* CatFight: Between Asuna and Suguha in chapter 5. [[note]]Chapter 5: Complicated Relationships[[/note]]
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* CatFight: Between Asuna and Suguha in chapter Chapter 5. [[note]]Chapter 5: Complicated Relationships[[/note]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: At the end of chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: Face to Face with a Cosmic Entity[[/note]], Yhmos and the MHCP lure Kirito into VR to try and take his powers...only to realize that they have NO WAY of actually taking them back or forcing Kirito to hand them over. [[LaughThemselvesSick Kirito's reaction sells it.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: At the end of chapter Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: Face to Face with a Cosmic Entity[[/note]], Yhmos and the MHCP MHCPs lure Kirito into VR to try and take his powers...powers back...only to realize that they have NO WAY of actually taking them back or forcing Kirito to hand them over. [[LaughThemselvesSick Kirito's reaction sells it.]]
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* {{Glamour}}: Upon being gaining his powers, Kirito notices that his body is perfectly healthy with some muscle. However, everyone else still sees him as thin and skinny as someone who was in a 2 year coma would expect to be. Same happens with Asuna, Lizbeth, and Silica when they become Anchors.
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* {{Glamour}}: Upon being gaining his powers, Kirito notices that his body is perfectly healthy with some muscle. However, everyone else still sees him as thin and skinny as someone who was in a 2 year 2-year coma would expect to be. Same happens with Asuna, Lizbeth, and Silica when they become Anchors.
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* HowDoIShootWeb: Upon discovering his powers, Kirito makes a few mistakes trying to figure them out resulting in strange and unpredictable consequences such as the situation in the quote on top of the page and turning his phone and Sugu's plush toy sentient. Its more or less become a running gag where he messes up and someone else tells him to read the manual.
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* HowDoIShootWeb: Upon discovering his powers, Kirito makes a few mistakes trying to figure them out resulting in strange and unpredictable consequences such as the situation in the quote on top of the page and turning his phone and Sugu's plush toy sentient. Its It has more or less become a running gag where he messes up and someone else tells him to read the manual.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: When discussing how to handle the Star Hunters, Yhmos advocates eliminating them outright. When Kirito protests and advocates a more diplomatic approach to resolve things peacefully, Yhmos claims he's too soft and that the Star Hunter's would be so Hellbent on killing him that they wouldn't listen and have zero qualms to use any means necessary to do so regardless of collateral damage or uninvolved bystanders getting caught in the crossfire. Considering that [[spoiler: The Star Hunters decide to lure him out by causing a huge black out across 4 entire prefectures(on New Year's Eve), Elysium outright refused to listen to or believe Kirito's explanations and actually killed him(temporarily) and that Moria has proven completely capable and willing to harm uninvolved civilians and wipe out the Earth just to kill him]] he turns out to be right.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: When discussing how to handle the Star Hunters, Yhmos advocates eliminating them outright. When Kirito protests and advocates a more diplomatic approach to resolve things peacefully, Yhmos claims he's too soft and that the Star Hunter's would be so Hellbent on killing him that they wouldn't listen and have zero qualms to use any means necessary to do so regardless of collateral damage or uninvolved bystanders getting caught in the crossfire. Considering that [[spoiler: The the Star Hunters decide to lure him out by causing a huge black out blackout across 4 entire prefectures(on Prefectures (on New Year's Eve), Elysium outright refused to listen to or believe Kirito's explanations and actually killed him(temporarily) him (temporarily) and that Moria has proven completely capable and willing to harm uninvolved civilians and wipe out the Earth just to kill him]] he turns out to be right.
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* ParentalSubstitute: By complete and total accident, [[spoiler: Yhmos]] became this for Yui(and the other MHCP) rather than Kirito and Asuna.
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* ParentalSubstitute: By complete and total accident, [[spoiler: Yhmos]] became this for Yui(and Yui (and the other MHCP) MHCPs) rather than Kirito and Asuna.
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* RealityWarper: %Ordering Reality to do something %Comes with the powers Kirito got from Yhmos. Of course its not the most reliable way to use them. It's better to craft a [[FunctionalMagic Mystery]].
* ShapeshifterBaggage: In chapter 12 [[note]]Chapter 12: Divinity - Humanity[[/note]], Hecate somehow compresses all the extra metal they aquiered earlier. Shino states that [[LampshadeHanging “That…makes no sense.”]] Even compressed she should still be weighing a ton. Hecate says not to try to apply earth-logic to it. [[HandWave She's just that high-tech.]]
* ShapeshifterBaggage: In chapter 12 [[note]]Chapter 12: Divinity - Humanity[[/note]], Hecate somehow compresses all the extra metal they aquiered earlier. Shino states that [[LampshadeHanging “That…makes no sense.”]] Even compressed she should still be weighing a ton. Hecate says not to try to apply earth-logic to it. [[HandWave She's just that high-tech.]]
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* RealityWarper: %Ordering Reality to do something %Comes with the powers Kirito got from Yhmos. Of course its course, it's not the most reliable way to use them. It's better to craft a [[FunctionalMagic Mystery]].
* ShapeshifterBaggage: Inchapter Chapter 12 [[note]]Chapter 12: Divinity - Humanity[[/note]], Hecate somehow compresses all the extra metal they aquiered acquired earlier. Shino states that [[LampshadeHanging “That…makes no sense.”]] Even compressed she should still be weighing a ton. Hecate says not to try to apply earth-logic to it. [[HandWave She's just that high-tech.]]
* ShapeshifterBaggage: In
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* ShoutOut: While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange clad orange-clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.]]
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** Yhmos[[StrangeMindsThinkAlike (and Kirito)]] describe the appearance of his Avatar in RUO as "[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Captan-Commander Yamamoto]] dressed as a [[Franchise/{{StarWars}} Jedi Knight.]]"
* SuperEmpowering: Kirito's [[BattleHarem Anchors]] all gain special powers from their bonds. These included the above psychic link, superhuman physical abilities, SpontaneousWeaponCreation, a HealingFactor that allowed them to recover from the atrophy of being stuck in SAO[[spoiler: or AIDS in Yuuki and Ran's case]] and some of their own unique manifestations:
* SuperEmpowering: Kirito's [[BattleHarem Anchors]] all gain special powers from their bonds. These included the above psychic link, superhuman physical abilities, SpontaneousWeaponCreation, a HealingFactor that allowed them to recover from the atrophy of being stuck in SAO[[spoiler: or AIDS in Yuuki and Ran's case]] and some of their own unique manifestations:
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** Yhmos[[StrangeMindsThinkAlike Yhmos [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike (and Kirito)]] describe the appearance of his Avatar in RUO as "[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Captan-Commander Yamamoto]] dressed as a [[Franchise/{{StarWars}} Jedi Knight.]]"
* SuperEmpowering: Kirito's [[BattleHarem Anchors]] all gain special powers from their bonds. These included the above psychic link, superhuman physical abilities, SpontaneousWeaponCreation, a HealingFactor that allowed them to recover from the atrophy of being stuck inSAO[[spoiler: SAO [[spoiler: or AIDS in Yuuki and Ran's case]] and some of their own unique manifestations:
* SuperEmpowering: Kirito's [[BattleHarem Anchors]] all gain special powers from their bonds. These included the above psychic link, superhuman physical abilities, SpontaneousWeaponCreation, a HealingFactor that allowed them to recover from the atrophy of being stuck in
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* TimeMaster: Kirito's go to for fixing damaged property. Also used to evade cameras in chapter 7. [[note]]Chapter 7: With Great Power[[/note]]
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* TimeMaster: Kirito's go to for fixing damaged property. Also used to evade cameras in chapter Chapter 7. [[note]]Chapter 7: With Great Power[[/note]]
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* ShoutOut: While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.
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* ShoutOut: While still depressed over losing his powers, Yhmos passes the time by going on an anime binge where he comes across one abut [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} an orange clad ninja that defies the very definition of the word ninja.]] Kirito even uses the [[NinjaLog Substitution/Kawarimi Jutsu.]]
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the [[Franchise/{{DragonBall}} Solar Flare]] and screamed: "Never underestimate the power of old anime!"
** Yhmos[[StrangeMindsThinkAlike (and Kirito)]] describe the appearance of his Avatar in RUO as "[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Captan-Commander Yamamoto]] dressed as a [[Franchise/{{StarWars}} Jedi Knight.]]"
** In order to escape some Star Hunter on his first encounter, Kirito uses the [[Franchise/{{DragonBall}} Solar Flare]] and screamed: "Never underestimate the power of old anime!"
** Yhmos[[StrangeMindsThinkAlike (and Kirito)]] describe the appearance of his Avatar in RUO as "[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Captan-Commander Yamamoto]] dressed as a [[Franchise/{{StarWars}} Jedi Knight.]]"