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* {{Fanservice}}: There is the occasional detailed description of the bodies for both genders. There's also a brief moment where Coco forces Velvet to wear a BellyDancer outfit in Chapter 33.
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* {{Fanservice}}: There is the occasional detailed description of the bodies for both genders. There's also a brief moment where Coco forces Velvet to wear a BellyDancer belly dancer outfit in Chapter 33.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Due to Volume 4's release, a number of characters are shown to be more heroic than their canon counterparts, especially with Raven Branwen, Taiyang Xiao Long, Professor Port and Dr. Oobleck.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Vernal, who is Raven's second in command and Body Double for the Spring Maiden in RWBY Volume 5, is re-imagined as an usurper who initiated a coup to seize control of the Branwen Bandit tribe from Qrow and Raven Branwen. Both twins vowed to make her pay after she killed their parents, and while we didn't know the specifics Raven revealed that justice was served.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Vernal, who is Raven's second in command and Body Double for the Spring Maiden in RWBY Volume 5, is re-imagined as an usurper who initiated a coup to seize control of the Branwen Bandit tribe from Qrow and Raven Branwen. Both twins vowed to make her pay after she killed their parents, and while we didn't know the specifics Raven revealed that justice was served.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Due to Volume 4's release, a number of characters are shown to be more heroic than their canon counterparts, especially with Raven Branwen, Taiyang Xiao Long, Professor Port Port, and Dr. Oobleck.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Vernal, who is Raven's second in command and Body Double for the Spring Maiden in RWBY Volume 5, is re-imagined as an usurper who initiated a coup to seize control of the Branwen Bandit tribe from Qrow and Raven Branwen. Both twins vowed to make her pay after she killed their parents, and while wedidn't don't know the specifics specifics, Raven revealed that justice was served.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Vernal, who is Raven's second in command and Body Double for the Spring Maiden in RWBY Volume 5, is re-imagined as an usurper who initiated a coup to seize control of the Branwen Bandit tribe from Qrow and Raven Branwen. Both twins vowed to make her pay after she killed their parents, and while we
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%%* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Ruby receives this from both Qrow, Taiyang and her older sister Yang.
* AirborneAircraftCarrier: The ''Spirit of Winter'', an Altesian Airborne Assault Carrier which was introduced in Chapter 57, is most definitely one.
* AirborneAircraftCarrier: The ''Spirit of Winter'', an Altesian Airborne Assault Carrier which was introduced in Chapter 57, is most definitely one.
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%%* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Ruby receives this from both Qrow, Taiyang Taiyang, and her older sister Yang.
* AirborneAircraftCarrier: The ''Spirit of Winter'', an Altesian Airborne Assault Carrierwhich that was introduced in Chapter 57, is most definitely one.
* AirborneAircraftCarrier: The ''Spirit of Winter'', an Altesian Airborne Assault Carrier
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* BoobsOfSteel: Some of the female characters, both canon and OC, are like this.
** Yang fulfills this role for Team RWBY.
** Heliosia Ainea embodies this trope for the Four Maidens.
** Yang fulfills this role for Team RWBY.
** Heliosia Ainea embodies this trope for the Four Maidens.
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* HurtingHero: Practically all of the main characters in the first arc, and for several good reasons too.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Adam does this to [[spoiler: Velvet]] in Chapter 43.
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* TheDarkChick: [[spoiler: The Grimm Commander known as Ziz, formerly part of a doomed Huntsman Team named BLTZ.]]
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%%* CasualDangerDialog: Plenty, especially during the many fighting sequences in this fic.
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* AerialCanyonChase: Happened briefly in chapter 10, to escape from the military forces of Atlas.
* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Ruby receives this from both Qrow, Taiyang and her older sister Yang.
* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Ruby receives this from both Qrow, Taiyang and her older sister Yang.
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: Is brought up quite a few times by the characters who serve Salem, particularly by Cinder Fall.
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* BattleCouple: Jaune and [[spoiler: Pyrrha]], Ren and Nora.
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* CasualDangerDialog: Plenty, especially during the many fighting sequences in this fic.
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* CoitusEnsues: [[spoiler: Jaune and Pyrrha ''finally'' went the rest of the way with their relationship after their date in Chapter 49.]] Though it does not come out of nowhere.
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This story then becomes an example of a FixFic in which the author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2266994/UGX7 UGX7]] has written in response to the well-known ending of Volume 3, especially with [[spoiler: Pyrrha's death and the handling of several other characters story arcs.]] Not only does the fic focuses on the many canon characters in the RWBY universe, it also offers an in-depth look at the overarching RWBY universe, and creates numerous OriginalCharacters (OCs) to populate the various factions and organizations that were mentioned in the fanfiction. While there are quite a number of OCs (with quite a few of them getting their own individual subplots), the canon characters still have their chance to shine in their moments of glory by taking more proactive responses to the events and relationships already established by the canon of the first three RWBY Volumes, and their actions might just fundamentally change the post-Volume 3 setting since quite a number of hints and mentions of something big yet to arrive are hidden within the chapters themselves.
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This story then becomes an example of a FixFic in which the author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2266994/UGX7 UGX7]] has written in response to the well-known ending of Volume 3, especially with [[spoiler: Pyrrha's death and the handling of several other characters story arcs.]] Not only does the fic focuses on the many canon characters in the RWBY universe, it also offers an in-depth look at the overarching RWBY universe, and creates numerous OriginalCharacters (OCs) {{Original Character}}s to populate the various factions and organizations that were mentioned in the fanfiction. While there are quite a number of OCs [=OCs=] (with quite a few of them getting their own individual subplots), the canon characters still have their chance to shine in their moments of glory by taking more proactive responses to the events and relationships already established by the canon of the first three RWBY Volumes, and their actions might just fundamentally change the post-Volume 3 setting since quite a number of hints and mentions of something big yet to arrive are hidden within the chapters themselves.
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* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: [[spoiler: The upcoming third arc is hinted to have dinosaur Grimm.]]
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* AnAxeToGrind: Quite a few characters have incorporated axes into their hybrid weapons in this fic.
** The latest addition to Damien Ante's Enforcers named Executioner uses a pair of these.
** The latest addition to Damien Ante's Enforcers named Executioner uses a pair of these.
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* BreakTheCutie: What Cinder and Salem want to do to both Ruby and Jaune in Chapters 9 to 12. Thankfully they didn't succeed.
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* FallenHero: Sheer Kaa and Steppenwolfe both fought for Faunus Liberation when they were still mortal.
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* FallenHero: Sheer Kaa and Steppenwolfe both fought for Faunus Liberation when they were still mortal. Salem herself was the Winter Maiden.
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* Hypocrite: Adam Taurus inflicts many of the same atrocities that were inflicted on him and his family on other Faunus who disagree with him (the most notable instances being maiming Faunus by cutting off their animal parts, and holding a sword to Hualin's throat even though she's the same age as his dead sister), which ultimately undermines his claim to the moral high ground.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Alan Crawford, the guy who ultimately caused Adam Taurus's StartOfDarkness is stated to have gotten away with his crimes for decades before the events of Chapter 90 see him finally put behind bars. For added Irony Blake (Who was abused by Adam) is the one who gets to slap the cuffs on him.