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* CuckooNest: Dorothy starts the fanfic in an asylum with no memory of the last several years.
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* CuckooNest: Dorothy starts the fanfic in an asylum with no memory of the last several years. According to the doctors, Oz is a fantasy of hers. This is later [[spoiler:subverted when it turns out she's not in an asylum. She's still in Oz with her family and friends, but she is suffering from temporary amnesia]].
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* HotterAndSexier: Downplayed. There's a passing reference to sex.
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* HotterAndSexier: Downplayed. There's a passing reference to sex. Canon is devoid of romance or sexuality.
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* SlashFic: It's not the focus but it does have heavy Dorothy/Ozma elements.
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* SlashFic: Downplayed. It's not the focus but it does have heavy Dorothy/Ozma elements.elements. Dorothy and Ozma [[spoiler:are a couple]].
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** The last sequence pokes fun at the ending to ''The Wizard of Oz'' where Dorothy [[spoiler:says her friends were in her dream]].
** Dorothy and Ozma being in a BedlamHouse is ripped from ''Return of Oz''.
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** The last sequence pokes fun at the ending to ''The Wizard of Oz'' ''Film/TheWizardOfOz'' where Dorothy [[spoiler:says her friends were in her dream]].
** Dorothy and Ozma being in a BedlamHouse is ripped from''Return of Oz''.''Film/ReturnToOz''.
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* HotterAndSexier: Downplayed. There's a passing reference to sex.
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* MythologyGag: The last sequence pokes fun at the ending to ''The Wizard of Oz'' where Dorothy [[spoiler:says her friends were in her dream]].
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* TheRoyalWe: Dorothy meets a girl her age who believes she's royalty and uses the royal "we". Her name is "Ozma" [[spoiler:and she ''is'' the princess of Oz]].
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* TheRoyalWe: RoyalWe: Dorothy meets a girl her age who believes she's royalty and uses the royal "we". Her name is "Ozma" [[spoiler:and she ''is'' the princess of Oz]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There's quite a bit to [[spoiler:the twist that Dorothy isn't in Kansas]], such as [[spoiler:Eureka being [[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife pink]] and her [[TalkingAnimal sigh sounding human]]]].
* MythologyGag: The last sequence pokes fun at the ending to ''The Wizard of Oz'' where Dorothy [[spoiler:says her friends were in her dream]].
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* TheRoyalWe: Dorothy meets a girl her age who believes she's royalty and uses the royal "we". Her name is "Ozma" [[spoiler:and she ''is'' the princess of Oz]].
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* SlashFic: It's not the focus but it does have heavy Dorothy/Ozma elements.
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'Patient'' is a one-shot fanfic based off of ''Literature/LandOfOz'' books. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/256453 here]].
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The last thing seventeen year old Dorothy Gale can remember is being a nine year old on her Aunt Em and Uncle Henry's farm in Kansas. Now, eight years older, Dorothy has woken up in an asylum with no memory of the past half of her life.
'Patient'' is a one-shot fanfic based off of ''Literature/LandOfOz'' books. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/256453 here]].
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!!''Patient'' provides examples of:
* AllJustADream: It turns out that "Oz" doesn't exist after all. [[spoiler:Or not. It does, but Ozma doesn't want to confuse the amnesiac Dorothy so they're pretending she's in an asylum until her memory comes back]].
* CuckooNest: Dorothy starts the fanfic in an asylum with no memory of the last several years.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Dorothy is aged up to seventeen so that [[spoiler:she can have a romantic relationship with Ozma]].
* TakeThat: At the MGM ''Film/TheWizardOfOz'' film [[spoiler:for making Oz AllJustADream]] and at [[spoiler:"AllJustADream"[=/=]"[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness All Just A Hallucination]]"]] works in general.
'Patient'' is a one-shot fanfic based off of ''Literature/LandOfOz'' books. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/256453 here]].
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!!''Patient'' provides examples of:
* AllJustADream: It turns out that "Oz" doesn't exist after all. [[spoiler:Or not. It does, but Ozma doesn't want to confuse the amnesiac Dorothy so they're pretending she's in an asylum until her memory comes back]].
* CuckooNest: Dorothy starts the fanfic in an asylum with no memory of the last several years.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Dorothy is aged up to seventeen so that [[spoiler:she can have a romantic relationship with Ozma]].
* TakeThat: At the MGM ''Film/TheWizardOfOz'' film [[spoiler:for making Oz AllJustADream]] and at [[spoiler:"AllJustADream"[=/=]"[[ThroughTheEyesOfMadness All Just A Hallucination]]"]] works in general.
