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** Aerial noticing that Elan-4 was stalking Suletta leads to a confrontation, which in turn leads to Elan revealing his situation to Earth House. They agree to fake his death so that he can live in peace, and screw over Peil Tech by doing so in a "public duel", forcing them to claim that Elan died in an accident.
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** Aerial noticing that Elan-4 was stalking Suletta leads to a confrontation, which in turn leads to Elan revealing his situation to Earth House. They agree to fake his death so that he can live in peace, and screw over Peil Tech by doing so in a "public duel", ''public duel'', forcing them to claim that Elan died in an accident.
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** Aerial noticing that Elan-4 was stalking Suletta leads to a confrontation, which in turn leads to Elan revealing his situation to Earth House. They agree to fake his death so that he can live in peace, and screw over Peil Tech by doing so in a ‘’ public duel'', "public duel", forcing them to claim that Elan died in an accident.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42704475 Mobile Haro SD Aerial]] is a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundamTheWitchFromMercury'' fanfic by [=calumTraveler=].
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Norea is AmbiguouslyBi in canon, having moments of ShipTease with both Sophie and Elan-5. Here, due to Elan-5 being AdaptedOut, she's confirmed as a lesbian. [[spoiler:Aerial implies she's making out with Sophie while contacting Shaddiq in Chapter 24]].
* EnlightenedSelfInterest: [[spoiler:Miorine, Suletta, Guel, and Awrial reveal all of the dirty laundry of the Benerit Group in Chapter 24. While it's clear they did this for the sake of ending Sid group's war profiteering and abuse of Earth, it also has the side-effect of crippling all of GUND-ARM Inc.'s competition, as the company is too young to be involved in all of this and therefore is "clean" in the eyes of the public]].
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** WordOfGod confirmed that [[spoiler:Sophie's Gundam was disabled without killing her]].
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** WordOfGod confirmed that [[spoiler:Sophie's Gundam was disabled without killing her]]. Chapter 24 confirms this, with [[spoiler:Shaddiq trying to free her before she spills on his plans]].
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** [[spoiler:Everything from the Rumble Ring onwards is totally derailed after Sophie is captured alive, as Suletta, Miorine, Guel, and Erict put aside their differences and manage to expose ''all'' of the Benerit Group's dirty laundry (and that of the SLA as well), resulting in Shaddiq being arrested and his plans falling apart in minutes]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Shaddiq and Prospera both have epic breakdowns in Chapter 24 when Aerial uploads all of their dirty laundry onto the internet. Prospera has the added blow to her ego when Suletta and ''all of the Erict clones'' confront her over how she mistreated them, and is left completely at their mercy]].
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Shaddiq and Prospera both have epic breakdowns in Chapter 24 when Aerial uploads all of their dirty laundry onto the internet. Prospera has the added blow to her ego when Suletta and ''all of the Erict clones'' confront her over how she mistreated them, and is left completely at their mercy]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[ExactpyWhatItSaysOnTheTin This is the title of Chapter 15]], which shows that Prospera had to have a leg amputated after injuries in the prior chapter.
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[ExactpyWhatItSaysOnTheTin This is the title of Chapter 15]], which shows that Prospera had to have a leg amputated after injuries in the prior chapter.
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** [[spoiler:Aerial ends up revealing the truth of her origins as Ericht to Earth House after having a nervous breakdown when she realizes said truth for herself]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Prospera, as in canon. She seems to have trouble ''not'' being this, as she tries manipulating Earth House and her daughters in Chapter 15, despite not only having frayed her relationship with both of them, but also being far less threatening due to recently losing a leg.
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* NerdInEvilsHelmet: Prospera is ''definitely'' a member of the story's BigBadEnsemble, but she can be very immature - besides renaming herself after the protagonist of ''Theatre/TheTempest'', her reaction to Suletta asking about what happened to her leg is to reference ''VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim'''s [[MemeticMutation infamous 'Arrow to the Knee' line]]. Suletta even calls her out for using said meme ventures after it was popular.
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* AdaptedOut: Due to Elan-4 being SparedByTheAdaptation via ''very public'' FamingTheDead, Elan-5 never shows up.
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* AdaptedOut: Due to Elan-4 being SparedByTheAdaptation via ''very public'' FamingTheDead, FakingTheDead, Elan-5 never shows up.
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* CrackFic: The story focuses on an SD version of Aerial being a kid. This ks to be expected. [[CerebusSyndrome Then we start learning about how Aerial was created]], and the story [[DarkerAndEdgier get's grimmer and doesn't look back]].
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* CrackFic: The story focuses on an SD version of Aerial being a kid. This ks is to be expected. [[CerebusSyndrome Then we start learning about how Aerial was created]], and the story [[DarkerAndEdgier get's gets grimmer and doesn't look back]].
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* AdaptedOut: Due to Elan-4 being SparedByTheAdaptation via ''very public'' FamingTheDead, Elan-5 never shows up.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story is initially LighterAndSofter than canon ''Witch from Mercury'', but things return to standard Gundam-levels of GreyAndGreyMorality once the true nature of Aerial is revealed. {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by the author, who asks "Where did my fluffy CrackFic about SD Aerial being a kid go?"
* CrackFic: The story focuses on an SD version of Aerial being a kid. This ks to be expected. [[CerebusSyndrome Then we start learning about how Aerial was created]], and the story [[DarkerAndEdgier get's grimmer and doesn't look back]].
* CrackFic: The story focuses on an SD version of Aerial being a kid. This ks to be expected. [[CerebusSyndrome Then we start learning about how Aerial was created]], and the story [[DarkerAndEdgier get's grimmer and doesn't look back]].
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* MillionToOneChance: During the duel between Earth House and Grassley House, Suletta has Nuno put a small bet on Earth House [[FlawlessVictory defeating Grassley House without suffering a single blemish to any of their Mobile Suits]], with these exact odds. [[spoiler:This leaves Earth House absolutely loaded after they pull off said victory]].
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* InternalReveal:
** Chapter 18 has Earth House learn [[BrainUploading the true origin of Aerial]].
** Chapter 20, in turn, has them see the events of the series' prologue and finally figure out what motivates Prospera.
* MillionToOneChance: During the duel between Earth House and Grassley House, Suletta has Nuno put a small bet on Earth House [[FlawlessVictory defeating Grassley House without suffering a single blemish to any of their Mobile Suits]], with these exact odds. [[spoiler:This leaves Earth House absolutely loaded after they pull off saidvictory]].victory]].
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Elan-4 is given the FakingTheDead treatment by Earth House and eventually goes to Earth to live in peace. [[spoiler:When [[CheatedDeathDiedAnyway it looks like his body rejecting his implants will kill him anyway]], Earth House uses BrainUploading to ensure his mind survives until they can get him a new body]].
** WordOfGod confirmed that [[spoiler:Sophie's Gundam was disabled without killing her]].
** Chapter 18 has Earth House learn [[BrainUploading the true origin of Aerial]].
** Chapter 20, in turn, has them see the events of the series' prologue and finally figure out what motivates Prospera.
* MillionToOneChance: During the duel between Earth House and Grassley House, Suletta has Nuno put a small bet on Earth House [[FlawlessVictory defeating Grassley House without suffering a single blemish to any of their Mobile Suits]], with these exact odds. [[spoiler:This leaves Earth House absolutely loaded after they pull off said
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** Elan-4 is given the FakingTheDead treatment by Earth House and eventually goes to Earth to live in peace. [[spoiler:When [[CheatedDeathDiedAnyway it looks like his body rejecting his implants will kill him anyway]], Earth House uses BrainUploading to ensure his mind survives until they can get him a new body]].
** WordOfGod confirmed that [[spoiler:Sophie's Gundam was disabled without killing her]].
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** Suletta starts to distrust Prospera much earlier than she did in canon after conversing with Aerial and realizing that her mom is keeping secrets from her for reasons beyond her owngood.good.
** [[spoiler:Ericht is canonically completely loyal to Prospera, or at least unable to act against her. Here, Prospera's actions and general character gradually turns Aerial against her mother, with the breaking point happening at Plant Quarta, since the only reason Earth House was at the plant was because Prospera required them to come ''in person'' to get the techology needed to save Elan-4 -- something she could have easily delivered to them]].
** Suletta starts to distrust Prospera much earlier than she did in canon after conversing with Aerial and realizing that her mom is keeping secrets from her for reasons beyond her own
** [[spoiler:Ericht is canonically completely loyal to Prospera, or at least unable to act against her. Here, Prospera's actions and general character gradually turns Aerial against her mother, with the breaking point happening at Plant Quarta, since the only reason Earth House was at the plant was because Prospera required them to come ''in person'' to get the techology needed to save Elan-4 -- something she could have easily delivered to them]].
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** [[spoiler:Aerial ends up revealing the truth of her origins as Ericht to Earth House after having a nervous breakdown when she realizes said truth for herself]].
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** [[spoiler:Aerial ends up revealing the truth of her origins as Ericht to Earth House after having a nervous breakdown when she realizes said truth for herself]].herself]].
* MillionToOneChance: During the duel between Earth House and Grassley House, Suletta has Nuno put a small bet on Earth House [[FlawlessVictory defeating Grassley House without suffering a single blemish to any of their Mobile Suits]], with these exact odds. [[spoiler:This leaves Earth House absolutely loaded after they pull off said victory]].
* MillionToOneChance: During the duel between Earth House and Grassley House, Suletta has Nuno put a small bet on Earth House [[FlawlessVictory defeating Grassley House without suffering a single blemish to any of their Mobile Suits]], with these exact odds. [[spoiler:This leaves Earth House absolutely loaded after they pull off said victory]].
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Peil [=CEOs=] wanted to dispose of Elan-4 after he [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived his usefulness]]. When he appears to die, though, it's in a public duel with Guel, forcing them to declare the real Elan dead. Their efforts to find out what happened eventually results in their arrest.
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* CheatedDeathDiedAnyway: While Elan-4 is able to avoid being vaporized by a mobile suit weapon for failing Peil Tech, the implants said company shoved into him eventually cause his body to start breaking down, and Earth House is unable to find a way to reverse this. [[spoiler:They end up using the process that turned Ericht into Aerial to put his mind inside of Chu-Chu's mobile suit to allow him a chance to survive]].
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42704475 Mobile Haro SD Aerial]] is a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundamTheWitchFromMercury'' fanfic by [=calumTraveler=].
As part of a class assignment, Suletta modifies a Haro to allow Aerial to go to classes with her. What follows sees the plans of many, ''many'' groups completely upended.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Suletta starts to distrust Prospera much earlier than she did in canon after conversing with Aerial and realizing that her mom is keeping secrets from her for reasons beyond her own good.
* DidntSeeThatComing: Prospera wasn't expecting Suletta to give Aerial a miniature body. The knock off effects of this decision end up derailing several of her plans, as well as those of most of the other schemers in the Ad Stella timeline.
* ForWantOfANail:
** Aerial noticing that Elan-4 was stalking Suletta leads to a confrontation, which in turn leads to Elan revealing his situation to Earth House. They agree to fake his death so that he can live in peace, and screw over Peil Tech by doing so in a ‘’ public duel'', forcing them to claim that Elan died in an accident.
** Peil's efforts to figure out how Enhanced Person Four died end up exposing the Enhanced Person project, resulting in the four [=CEO=]s and the real Elan Ceres being arrested.
** [[spoiler:Aerial ends up revealing the truth of her origins as Ericht to Earth House after having a nervous breakdown when she realizes said truth for herself]].
As part of a class assignment, Suletta modifies a Haro to allow Aerial to go to classes with her. What follows sees the plans of many, ''many'' groups completely upended.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Suletta starts to distrust Prospera much earlier than she did in canon after conversing with Aerial and realizing that her mom is keeping secrets from her for reasons beyond her own good.
* DidntSeeThatComing: Prospera wasn't expecting Suletta to give Aerial a miniature body. The knock off effects of this decision end up derailing several of her plans, as well as those of most of the other schemers in the Ad Stella timeline.
* ForWantOfANail:
** Aerial noticing that Elan-4 was stalking Suletta leads to a confrontation, which in turn leads to Elan revealing his situation to Earth House. They agree to fake his death so that he can live in peace, and screw over Peil Tech by doing so in a ‘’ public duel'', forcing them to claim that Elan died in an accident.
** Peil's efforts to figure out how Enhanced Person Four died end up exposing the Enhanced Person project, resulting in the four [=CEO=]s and the real Elan Ceres being arrested.
** [[spoiler:Aerial ends up revealing the truth of her origins as Ericht to Earth House after having a nervous breakdown when she realizes said truth for herself]].
