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Can be read on [[https://chronoweapon.deviantart.com/gallery/51701712/Kirby DeviantArt]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8900133/1/Kirby-Right-Back-at-Ya-Odyssey-of-Dreams FanFiction.net]]. There's also a short sequel story, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10843101/1/Kirby-Right-Back-at-Ya-Haunted-Halberd Haunted Halberd]], which was released for Halloween. The fic has recieved various revisions that correct such things as spelling and continuity errors. However, in 2021 it began to undergo a much more extensive rewrite that included references to newer ''Kirby'' games, updated characterization, etc. As the final revision contains substantial differences from the original version, this is what the "rewrite" will refer to on these pages.

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Can be read on [[https://chronoweapon.deviantart.com/gallery/51701712/Kirby DeviantArt]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8900133/1/Kirby-Right-Back-at-Ya-Odyssey-of-Dreams FanFiction.net]]. There's also a short sequel story, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10843101/1/Kirby-Right-Back-at-Ya-Haunted-Halberd Haunted Halberd]], which was released for Halloween. The fic has recieved received various revisions that correct such things as spelling and continuity errors. However, in 2021 it began to undergo a much more extensive rewrite that included references to newer ''Kirby'' games, updated characterization, etc. As the final revision contains substantial differences from the original version, this is what the "rewrite" will refer to on these pages.



** "Never let you go." It's the message that Kirby's friends recieve through their Dark Matter-induced nightmares, and an early clue that it has greater plans for them. [[spoiler:When the heroes have been assimilated by the Rainbow Knights, Zero even quotes the line verbatim, hammering the point home.]]

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** "Never let you go." It's the message that Kirby's friends recieve receive through their Dark Matter-induced nightmares, and an early clue that it has greater plans for them. [[spoiler:When the heroes have been assimilated by the Rainbow Knights, Zero even quotes the line verbatim, hammering the point home.]]



* MagicAIsMagicA: The rules for the Dream Stones are clearly set in place. While each of them specialise in a certain type of magic that can be used endlessly, they can also be used to grant wishes. However, this causes the Dream Stone to be "locked out" of granting further wishes for a period of time to prevent its power from being abused. Larger-scale wishes also require more Dream Stones to pull off, which means something major like [[TakeOverTheWorld Taking Over the World]] requires [[GottaCatchEmAll all eight of them]]. Also, you can't make a wish unless you actually ''own'' the Dream Stone, which means either recieving it as a gift or defeating its owner in combat -- unless you're Dark Matter, who can use it anyway without issue.

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* MagicAIsMagicA: The rules for the Dream Stones are clearly set in place. While each of them specialise in a certain type of magic that can be used endlessly, they can also be used to grant wishes. However, this causes the Dream Stone to be "locked out" of granting further wishes for a period of time to prevent its power from being abused. Larger-scale wishes also require more Dream Stones to pull off, which means something major like [[TakeOverTheWorld Taking Over the World]] requires [[GottaCatchEmAll all eight of them]]. Also, you can't make a wish unless you actually ''own'' the Dream Stone, which means either recieving receiving it as a gift or defeating its owner in combat -- unless you're Dark Matter, who can use it anyway without issue.



* TournamentArc: Chapters 9-11. Kirby and his friends learn that the Squeaks have gone to compete in the Sandstone Arena, so they enter its fighting tournament for an oppurtunity to battle them and get back their stolen Dream Stones, along with the key to Citrine Citadel [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and an autograph]]. Uniquely, the heroes don't have to actually ''defeat'' the champions to get the key pieces (and as a matter of fact, they don't) as it's an exhibition match, and instead recieve them for showing impressive feats of strength and skill.

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* TournamentArc: Chapters 9-11. Kirby and his friends learn that the Squeaks have gone to compete in the Sandstone Arena, so they enter its fighting tournament for an oppurtunity to battle them and get back their stolen Dream Stones, along with the key to Citrine Citadel [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and an autograph]]. Uniquely, the heroes don't have to actually ''defeat'' the champions to get the key pieces (and as a matter of fact, they don't) as it's an exhibition match, and instead recieve receive them for showing impressive feats of strength and skill.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible.


** [[spoiler:After accepting the Red Knight's power, Kirby's [[IncorruptiblePurePureness pure heart]] allows him to use it without getting possessed, becoming Red Knight Kirby--a powerful new form that still wields the Star Rod that he uses to battle Zero. His friends undergo a similar transformation after being freed of their possession.]]

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** [[spoiler:After accepting the Red Knight's power, Kirby's [[IncorruptiblePurePureness [[TheIncorruptible pure heart]] allows him to use it without getting possessed, becoming Red Knight Kirby--a powerful new form that still wields the Star Rod that he uses to battle Zero. His friends undergo a similar transformation after being freed of their possession.]]
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* StarScraper: The fifth Dream Stone is found in Skyline Tower, a miles-tall building with rooms based on the ElementsOfNature and believed to be [[TimeAbyss the first structure ever built on Popstar]].

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* StarScraper: The fifth Dream Stone is found in Skyline Tower, a miles-tall building with rooms based on the ElementsOfNature ClassicalElements and believed to be [[TimeAbyss the first structure ever built on Popstar]].
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: The rulers of most societies are known as Faction Leaders, and typically achieve their position by being the strongest of their kind.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: The rulers of most societies are known as Faction Leaders, and typically achieve their position by being the strongest of their kind.
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** Among the strange items that Gryll has stored away are [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario's cap]], [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda a silver Rupee]], and [[VideoGame/{{Earthbound}} Ness' yo-yo]].

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** Among the strange items that Gryll has stored away are [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario's cap]], [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda a silver Rupee]], and [[VideoGame/{{Earthbound}} [[VideoGame/EarthBound1994 Ness' yo-yo]].



** Some of Zero's attacks are described as [[EldritchAbomination "incomprehensible"]], a nod to the infamous "YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm of Giygas' attack!" from ''VideoGame/{{Earthbound}}''.

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** Some of Zero's attacks are described as [[EldritchAbomination "incomprehensible"]], a nod to the infamous "YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm of Giygas' attack!" from ''VideoGame/{{Earthbound}}''.''VideoGame/EarthBound1994''.

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The Lost Woods has been split between a video game level of the same name and Enchanted Forest. Cutting non-examples, zero-context potholes and ZCEs.


* TheLostWoods: The area surrounding Brambleweed Fortress is [[VideoGame/KirbysDreamLand2 Big Forest]]. By the time Kirby and friends finally get the Dream Stone within, Dark Matter has already taken over the place, turning it into a twisted and alien haunted forest.



* MagicAIsMagicA: The rules for the Dream Stones are clearly set in place. While each of them specialise in a certain type of magic that can be used endlessly, they can also be used to grant wishes. However, this causes the Dream Stone to be "locked out" of granting further wishes for a period of time to prevent its power from being abused. Larger-scale wishes also require more Dream Stones to pull off, which means something major like [[TakeOverTheWorld Taking Over the World]] requires [[GottaCatchEmAll all eight of them]]. Also, you can't make a wish unless you actually ''own'' the Dream Stone, which means either recieving it as a gift or defeating its owner in combat--unless you're Dark Matter, who can use it anyway without issue.

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* MagicAIsMagicA: The rules for the Dream Stones are clearly set in place. While each of them specialise in a certain type of magic that can be used endlessly, they can also be used to grant wishes. However, this causes the Dream Stone to be "locked out" of granting further wishes for a period of time to prevent its power from being abused. Larger-scale wishes also require more Dream Stones to pull off, which means something major like [[TakeOverTheWorld Taking Over the World]] requires [[GottaCatchEmAll all eight of them]]. Also, you can't make a wish unless you actually ''own'' the Dream Stone, which means either recieving it as a gift or defeating its owner in combat--unless combat -- unless you're Dark Matter, who can use it anyway without issue.
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** [[spoiler:Additionally, during ''Haunted Halberd'', Kirby manages to obtain the Ultra Sword during the battle against Nightmare Soul, which he uses to finish off the villain.]]
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* GiantScrapRobot: Heavy Lobster returns on the Halberd 2.5, this time constructed out of scrap parts and space junk.
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* LudicrousPrecision: In ''Haunted Halberd'', GIM calculates that after being disconnected from her Mekkai following their DemonicPossession, Overseer Mecheye made "approximately 32,476,932,145,267 attempts" to reconnect with them.

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* HauntedTechnology: The premise of ''Haunted Halberd'' centers around this, as ghosts are haunting the Halberd 2.5 and its robotic crew, turning them hostile.

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* HauntedTechnology: The premise of ''Haunted Halberd'' centers around this, as ghosts are a malevolent force is haunting the Halberd 2.5 and its robotic crew, turning them hostile.


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* ShootTheFuelTank: Kirby severely damages a GIM Stalker in ''Haunted Halberd'' by getting it to ram its saw into a fuel tank, causing it to explode.
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* HauntedTechnology: The premise of ''Haunted Halberd'' centers around this, as ghosts are haunting the Halberd 2.5 and its robotic crew, turning them hostile.
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** [[spoiler:Just when Kirby and co. think they're about to be finished by Protaeus the Primordial, Sir Arthur and the various Faction Leaders show up to revive them. Also, Aegis Prime shows up to combat Protaeus himself, with Kirby assisting him for the rest of the battle.]:

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** [[spoiler:Just when Kirby and co. think they're about to be finished by Protaeus the Primordial, Sir Arthur and the various Faction Leaders show up to revive them. Also, Aegis Prime shows up to combat Protaeus himself, with Kirby assisting him for the rest of the battle.]:]]
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** [[spoiler:Just when Kirby and co. think they're about to be finished by Protaeus the Primordial, Sir Arthur and the various Faction Leaders show up to revive them. Also, Aegis Prime shows up to combat Protaeus himself, with Kirby assisting him for the rest of the battle.]:
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* SoleSurvivor:
** [[spoiler:Ribbon and Bubbles both believe themselves to be the only survivors of Marx's attack before they find each other again. Ribbon's sister, Bella, is also still alive, [[CyberneticsWillEatYourSoul though not unscathed]].]]
** [[spoiler:Protaeus the Primordial wipes out an ''entire island'' of General Dee's troops, with only one living to tell the tale.]]
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** Some of Zero's attacks are described as [[EldritchAbomination "incomprehensible", a nod to the infamous "YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm of Giygas' attack!" from ''VideoGame/{{Earthbound}}''.

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** Some of Zero's attacks are described as [[EldritchAbomination "incomprehensible", "incomprehensible"]], a nod to the infamous "YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm of Giygas' attack!" from ''VideoGame/{{Earthbound}}''.

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