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* ShoutOut: Tons, many to the Naruto Abridged Series, and several to ''StarWars'' in book 2, one of which is also a ShoutOut to ''[[Manga/IkkiTousen Battle Vixens.]]''
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* ShoutOut: Tons, many to the Naruto Abridged Series, and several to ''StarWars'' ''Franchise/StarWars'' in book 2, one of which is also a ShoutOut to ''[[Manga/IkkiTousen Battle Vixens.]]''Vixens]]''.
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* SupermodeStrut: Kiora, to distract [[spoiler:Naruto]]/Orion in book 3.
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* SupermodeStrut: SupermodelStrut: Kiora, to distract [[spoiler:Naruto]]/Orion in book 3.
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Replacing with the new name.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Kohana.
* RetCon: The rewrites of books 1 and 2.
* RetCon: The rewrites of books 1 and 2.
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* SexyWalk: Kiora, to distract [[spoiler:Naruto]]/Orion in book 3.
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* SupermodeStrut: Kiora, to distract [[spoiler:Naruto]]/Orion in book 3.
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Currently, the first two "books" are under rewrite: a massive overhaul of the series that is supposed to clean up plot holes and provide more explanation for some of Kiora's powers and dial back her MarySue tendencies.
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Currently, the first two "books" are under rewrite: a massive overhaul of the series that is supposed to clean up plot holes and provide more explanation for some of Kiora's powers and dial back her MarySue tendencies.
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Don't trope real people, especially on their work pages
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* YuriFan: The author.
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* {{Expy}}: Kohana is explicitly stated to be an expy of [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Evangeline A. K. McDowell.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Kohana is explicitly stated to be an expy of [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima [[Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi Evangeline A. K. McDowell.]]
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Currently, the first two “books” are under rewrite: a massive overhaul of the series that is supposed to clean up plot holes and provide more explanation for some of Kiora's powers and dial back her MarySue tendencies.
* Consists of the following 'books':
* Consists of the following 'books':
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Currently, the first two “books” "books" are under rewrite: a massive overhaul of the series that is supposed to clean up plot holes and provide more explanation for some of Kiora's powers and dial back her MarySue tendencies.
* Consists of the following'books':"books":
* Consists of the following
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* AnticlimaxBoss: [[spoiler:Hakaishimaru gets taken out with one move. The final blow? He's beaten with a mirror.]]
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* AnticlimaxBoss: AnticlimaxBoss:
** [[spoiler:Hakaishimaru gets taken out with one move. The final blow? He's beaten with a mirror.]]
** [[spoiler:Hakaishimaru gets taken out with one move. The final blow? He's beaten with a mirror.]]
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler:Several characters: Kiora, Sakura, Hinata, Kohana (3 times!), and Naruto.]]
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Several characters: Kiora, Sakura, Hinata, Kohana (3 times!), and Naruto.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Melody and Serenity, twice. {{Lampshaded}} by Kiora the second time.
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* BigDamnHeroes: BigDamnHeroes:
** Melody and Serenity, twice. {{Lampshaded}} by Kiora the second time.
** Melody and Serenity, twice. {{Lampshaded}} by Kiora the second time.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The patriarch gene, a gene that grants the power of the Hyuuga clan patriarch.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin:
** The patriarch gene, a gene that grants the power of the Hyuuga clan patriarch.
** The patriarch gene, a gene that grants the power of the Hyuuga clan patriarch.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Kohana]], after being forced to serve Kiora by a demonic contract.
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* HeelFaceTurn: HeelFaceTurn:
** [[spoiler:Kohana]], after being forced to serve Kiora by a demonic contract.
** [[spoiler:Kohana]], after being forced to serve Kiora by a demonic contract.
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* LesYay: Whenever it's not an explicit relationship.
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* MarySue: Kiora, though the series is being reworked to remove much of it.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Kohana, being a vampire, is ReallySevenHundredYearsOld. She looks about 10.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: OlderThanTheyLook:
** Kohana, being a vampire, is ReallySevenHundredYearsOld. She looks about 10.
** Kohana, being a vampire, is ReallySevenHundredYearsOld. She looks about 10.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Kiora, after the patriarch gene gets activated.
** She takes another one during the timeskip in book 3.
* UnstoppableRage: Naruto, when he finds out he's being investigated in book 1.
** She takes another one during the timeskip in book 3.
* UnstoppableRage: Naruto, when he finds out he's being investigated in book 1.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Kiora, after the patriarch gene gets activated.
**activated. She takes another one during the timeskip in book 3.
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** Naruto, when he finds out he's being investigated in book 1.
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** Naruto, when he finds out he's being investigated in book 1.
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* OneOfUs: With as many tropes as there are, are you surprised?
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Lolicon and shotacon have been disambiguated. Links with too little context are being removed - "paedo" is not always a trope, examples where the tropeworthiness is unclear are being removed. Also, please do not use "loli" as a synonym for little girl; see Lolicon And Shotacon as to why not
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* {{Lolicon}}: Kiora struggles with her feelings on this for a while, before deciding that even little girls need love too.
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* {{Badass}}: Kiora, if you're not assuming she's a MarySue.
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''Help Needed'' is an in-progress series of ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by Tropers/{{Animemetalhead}} centering around the daughter of [[CrackPairing Sakura Haruno and Hinata Hyuuga.]] The series has gone through three installations so far, with a fourth in the works.
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''Help Needed'' is an in-progress series of ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction by Tropers/{{Animemetalhead}} centering around the daughter of [[CrackPairing Sakura Haruno and Hinata Hyuuga.]] The series has gone through three installations so far, with a fourth in the works.
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* ShoutOut: Tons, many to the Naruto Abridged Series, and several to ''StarWars'' in book 2, one of which is also a ShoutOut to ''[[IkkiTousen Battle Vixens.]]''
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* ShoutOut: Tons, many to the Naruto Abridged Series, and several to ''StarWars'' in book 2, one of which is also a ShoutOut to ''[[IkkiTousen ''[[Manga/IkkiTousen Battle Vixens.]]''
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* {{Expy}}: Kohana is explicitly stated to be an expy of [[MahouSenseiNegima Evangeline A. K. McDowell.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Kohana is explicitly stated to be an expy of [[MahouSenseiNegima [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Evangeline A. K. McDowell.]]
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A side story, Please Help Me, was also started, following a member of the Aburame clan with a [[AntiSue phobia of insects, low self-esteem, and other personal issues.]] It is part of the Help Needed continuity, slotting in during events in HN 2.
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A side story, Please Help Me, was also started, following a member of the Aburame clan with a [[AntiSue phobia of insects, low self-esteem, and other personal issues.]] issues. It is part of the Help Needed continuity, slotting in during events in HN 2.
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YMMV sinkhole
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* MarySue: [[YourMileageMayVary Arguably]] Kiora, though the series is being reworked to remove much of it.
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* MarySue: [[YourMileageMayVary Arguably]] Kiora, though the series is being reworked to remove much of it.
