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* OneNationUnderCopyright: The Company is basically a nation unto itself due to its reach throughout the cradle.
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* OneNationUnderCopyright: The Company is basically a nation unto itself due to its reach throughout the cradle.Cradle.
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It can be read on [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/fledglings.641829/ Serebii.net]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings FF.net]], and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593 AO3]].
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It can be read on [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/fledglings.641829/ Serebii.net]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings FF.net]], and [[http://archiveofourown.[[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO]][[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593 AO3]].3]].
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%%* OlympusMons: Pleo the baby Lugia.
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* OlympusMons: Pleo the baby Lugia, of course.
* OceanPunk: The world of ''Fledglings'', called the Cradle because it was believed to be formed out of the pieces of the old world by Arceus, is one covered by water with mostly islands dotting the surface.
* OceanPunk: The world of ''Fledglings'', called the Cradle because it was believed to be formed out of the pieces of the old world by Arceus, is one covered by water with mostly islands dotting the surface.
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* OceanOfAdventure: The story has Team Traveler traveling through the Cradle, a sea containing numerous islands, most of which have some sort of Mystery Dungeon to explore.
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* WretchedHive: Rosequartz Town, a settlement made up mostly of pirates.
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* WretchedHive: Rosequartz Town, a settlement made up mostly of pirates.pirates.
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* TheMagicComesBack: The start of ''Fledglings''' story proper is caused by Pleo's hatching, among the first legendaries born in centuries if not millennia, though others start appearing later on, mostly in hiding to avoid agents of the Company or Empire.
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* TheMagicComesBack: The start of ''Fledglings''' story proper is caused by Pleo's hatching, among the first legendaries born in centuries if not millennia, though others start appearing later on, staying mostly in hiding to avoid agents of the Company or Empire.
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* GooGooGodlike: Downplayed in that Pleo is incredibly strong from when he first comes out of his egg, but the lack of control he has over his powers means that he still has problems fighting more experienced opponents.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''The water is wide, I can't cross o'er...'' [[note]](Going counterclockwise: [[OlympusMons Pleo]], [[TheLeader Nida]], [[DishingOutDirt Guardia]], and [[TheCynic Elty.]])[[/note]] (Commission by [[https://www.deviantart.com/chibi-pika Chibi-Pika.)]]]]
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* EldritchLocation: The Mystery Dungeons themselves like in the main series, though it's played up more than in the games. For instance, one Mystery Dungeon encountered by Team Traveler had portions of the rest of the dungeon as the ceiling. The feral Pokémon inside tend to make their homes in the few stable areas of the dungeon.
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* EldritchLocation: The Mystery Dungeons themselves like in the main series, though it's played up more than in the games. For instance, one Mystery Dungeon encountered by Team Traveler had has portions of the rest of the dungeon serving as the ceiling. The feral Pokémon inside tend to make their homes in the few stable areas of the dungeon.
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* GodIsEvil: The Marked believe that the legendaries were destroyed because they were dangerous and evil.
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* GodIsEvil: The Marked believe that the legendaries were destroyed because they were dangerous and evil. As a result, many of them fear Pleo.
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** A few characters in the series are based on those from ''Roleplay/WeAreAllPokemonTrainers'', who the author happened to participate in. For instance, Team Taxonomy's members are based on the PEFE Founders, sharing a species with all of their member's Pokémon forms.
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** A few characters in the series are based on those from ''Roleplay/WeAreAllPokemonTrainers'', who the author happened to participate in. For instance, Team Taxonomy's members are based on the PEFE Founders, sharing a species with all of their member's Pokémon forms. Character-wise, however, they're a bit more unscrupulous, being willing to forcibly coerce Team Traveler into helping them after bailing them out.
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''Fledglings'' by Tropers/TracerBullet is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic taking place in an oceanic world where humans have gone extinct following the killing of most legendaries. When Nida, a young Nidoran♀, finds a young Lugia later named Pleo in her local Mystery Dungeon, both her island and the world at large are forced to come to terms with the return of their gods.
It can be read on [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?641829-Fledglings Serebii.net]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings FF.net]], and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593 AO3]].
It can be read on [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?641829-Fledglings Serebii.net]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings FF.net]], and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593 AO3]].
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''Fledglings'' by Tropers/TracerBullet is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic taking place in an oceanic world where humans have gone extinct following the killing of most legendaries.legendaries, first released in 2015. When Nida, a young Nidoran♀, finds a young Lugia later named Pleo in her local Mystery Dungeon, both her island and the world at large are forced to come to terms with the return of their gods.
It can be read on[[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?641829-Fledglings [[https://forums.serebii.net/threads/fledglings.641829/ Serebii.net]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings FF.net]], and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593 AO3]].
It can be read on
