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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Um... wrong]]. A series of nasty nightmares have been plaguing Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy. Written by Creator/{{DarkHououmon}}.
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Um... wrong]].wrong. A series of nasty nightmares have been plaguing Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy. Written by Creator/{{DarkHououmon}}.
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Um... wrong]]. A series of nasty nightmares have been plaguing Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Um... wrong]]. A series of nasty nightmares have been plaguing Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
* ForgivenButNotForgotten: No matter how nice a person you are or how close a friend they are, someone [[FakeDefector faking a defection]] that nearly got one of your friends killed isn't something you get over easily.
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* RealityEnsues: No matter how nice a person you are or how close a friend they are, someone [[FakeDefector faking a defection]] that nearly got one of your friends killed isn't something you get over easily.
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[RealityEnsues Um... wrong]]. A series of [[BadDreams nasty nightmares]] nightmares have been plaguing Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
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* BadDreams: Rudy's been having ones where Penny's FaceHeelTurn in “Chalk Queen” was for real and the one he has at the beginning of the story involves her [[spoiler: KILLING him]].
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help help, so everything goes back to normal right? [[RealityEnsues Um…wrong]]. Um... wrong]]. A series of [[BadDreams nasty nightmares]] have been plaguing Rudy Rudy, and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in "Chalk Queen". While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would have ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still gambling with one of her friends' lives.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in "Chalk Queen". While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here there may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would have ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still gambling with one of her friends' lives.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in Chalk Queen. While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would have ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still gambling with one of her friends' lives.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in Chalk Queen."Chalk Queen". While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would have ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still gambling with one of her friends' lives.]]
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help so everything goes back to normal right? Um…wrong.[[RealityEnsues Um…wrong]]. A series of [[BadDreams nasty nightmares]] have been plaguing Rudy and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in Chalk Queen. While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still playing gamble with one of her friend's lives.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in Chalk Queen. While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would have ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still playing gamble gambling with one of her friend's friends' lives.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the FakeDefector trope used in Chalk Queen. While pretending to be against Rudy did enable the trio to ultimately win against Skrawl and it is argued by Snap that here may have been no other alternative, it still doesn't change the fact that Penny not only put Rudy through emotional hell by making him believe she really joined Skrawl just for the sake of making it realistic, but she also very easily could have killed Snap. Penny's entire plan hinged on whether or not Rudy knew what to do and if he could even react in time. If Rudy hadn't drawn the milk when he did, Snap would ''died''. [[PragmaticHero Regardless of her heroic intentions]], [[WhatTheHellHero Penny was still playing gamble with one of her friend's lives.]]
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Penny was faking being the Chalk Queen the whole time and was trying to get close enough to Rudy to help so everything goes back to normal right? Um…wrong. A series of [[BadDreams nasty nightmares]] have been plaguing Rudy and talking things out isn't going to be easy.
Read it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9828620/1/Crossing-Lines-Small-Crimes
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!! [Crossing Lines Small Crimes] contains examples of:
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Snap asks one of Rudy after the mess with Penny.
--> “Did you apologize to her?”
* BadDreams: Rudy's been having ones where Penny's FaceHeelTurn in “Chalk Queen” was for real and the one he has at the beginning of the story involves her [[spoiler: KILLING him]].
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After a massive misunderstanding and a giant fight, Rudy and Penny manage to mend their friendship.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rudy's reaction when he shoves Penny to the ground during their argument, scaring and injuring her.
* PoorCommunicationKills: As Penny points out, if Rudy had just ''told'' her about his fears, she'd have helped him get over them and their fight would never have happened.
* RealityEnsues: No matter how nice a person you are or how close a friend they are, someone [[FakeDefector faking a defection]] that nearly got one of your friends killed isn't something you get over easily.
* WouldHitAGirl: Mild case with Rudy since he was only doing it in self-defense but he does shove Penny very hard when he thinks she's about to hurt him, causing her injuries in the form of scratches on her arms.
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Read it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9828620/1/Crossing-Lines-Small-Crimes
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!! [Crossing Lines Small Crimes] contains examples of:
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Snap asks one of Rudy after the mess with Penny.
--> “Did you apologize to her?”
* BadDreams: Rudy's been having ones where Penny's FaceHeelTurn in “Chalk Queen” was for real and the one he has at the beginning of the story involves her [[spoiler: KILLING him]].
* EarnYourHappyEnding: After a massive misunderstanding and a giant fight, Rudy and Penny manage to mend their friendship.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rudy's reaction when he shoves Penny to the ground during their argument, scaring and injuring her.
* PoorCommunicationKills: As Penny points out, if Rudy had just ''told'' her about his fears, she'd have helped him get over them and their fight would never have happened.
* RealityEnsues: No matter how nice a person you are or how close a friend they are, someone [[FakeDefector faking a defection]] that nearly got one of your friends killed isn't something you get over easily.
* WouldHitAGirl: Mild case with Rudy since he was only doing it in self-defense but he does shove Penny very hard when he thinks she's about to hurt him, causing her injuries in the form of scratches on her arms.
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