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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote "defeat" of [[CuteandPsycho Flandre]] [[AxCrazy Scarlet]], Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then [[SlasherSmile Iz]][[TheStarscream a]] shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". [[HeroicBSOD He does not take it well.]] ]]
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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote "defeat" of [[CuteandPsycho Flandre]] [[AxCrazy Scarlet]], Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, receives, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then [[SlasherSmile Iz]][[TheStarscream a]] shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". [[HeroicBSOD He does not take it well.]] ]]
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* SenpaiKohai: Once Flandre and Utsuho meet, it doesn't take long for the former to start referring to the latter as "Okuu-senpai".
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* BerserkButton: If anyone other than the SDM staff calls her China, Meiling becomes absolutely furious.
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** If anyone other than the SDM staff calls her China, Meiling becomes absolutely furious.
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* CoolSword: The sword that Yukari gives to Ryan.
** In Chapter 26, it is revealed to have [[spoiler: originally been Ran's.]]
* CoolOldGuy: Tata.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Flandre.
* CoolSword: The sword that Yukari gives to Ryan.
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* EnergyAbsorption: Ryan's power. It allows him to absorb pretty much anything energy-based. Also counts as...
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* EnergyBall: Ryan calls his "Sparky".
** [[spoiler: Sparky is a good boy come the struggle against Flandre in the SDM's basement.]]
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* FeatherFlechettes: Commander Iza's Spell Cards involve a lot of this.
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* ImColdSoCold: Although [[spoiler:he]] doesn't actually say anything, [[spoiler:Ryan]] gets this in Chapter 26. [[spoiler:He]] manages to recover in time to make an awesome comeback.
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** [[spoiler:And at the end of Chapter 24, is revealed to be the embodiment of Ryan's Common Sense.]]
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** [[spoiler:And at the end of Chapter 24, is revealed to be the embodiment of Ryan's Common Sense.]]]]
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* DeadFic: For three nine years and counting.
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Average Joe In Bullet Hell is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[InsistentTerminology semi-]][[SelfInsert self insert]] fanfic written by Magnificent Sasquatch. Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6599809/1/Average_Joe_in_Bullet_Hell here]]. It has not been updated since 2012.
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Average Joe In Bullet Hell is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Franchise/TouhouProject [[InsistentTerminology semi-]][[SelfInsert self insert]] fanfic written by Magnificent Sasquatch. Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6599809/1/Average_Joe_in_Bullet_Hell here]]. It has not been updated since 2012.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Of course, this is VideoGame/{{Touhou}}, but it still deserves mention for lampshading it.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Of course, this is VideoGame/{{Touhou}}, Franchise/TouhouProject, but it still deserves mention for lampshading it.
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* GoLookAtTheDistraction: In which Ryan's the distraction!
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** ElementalAbsorption: Since he is capable of absorbing things like fire, lightning and danmaku bullets.
*** Actually, lightning is the number-one thing Ryan wants to ''avoid''. [[spoiler: As a Mega Man expy of sorts, he is weak to electricity like the classic Mega Man himself--specifically, his muscles seize up, inducing paralysis.]] Subverted in the case of danmaku bullets, as they still cause pain regardless of absorption.
*** Actually, lightning is the number-one thing Ryan wants to ''avoid''. [[spoiler: As a Mega Man expy of sorts, he is weak to electricity like the classic Mega Man himself--specifically, his muscles seize up, inducing paralysis.]] Subverted in the case of danmaku bullets, as they still cause pain regardless of absorption.
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** ElementalAbsorption: Since he is capable of absorbing things like fire, lightning fire and danmaku bullets.
*** Actually, lightningbullets. Lightning is the number-one thing Ryan wants to ''avoid''. an exception, as [[spoiler: As a he's based on Mega Man expy of sorts, Man]]. While he is weak to electricity like the ''can'' absorb it he gets temporally paralyzed by it.
** In classicMega Man himself--specifically, Touhou style his muscles seize up, inducing paralysis.]] Subverted power is actually much, much stronger then it appears at first glance as it allows him to absorb "power" in the case general. This includes things like like other peoples spell cards and their special abilities like Sakuya's time control powers. Even Yukari admits if he ever got complete control of danmaku bullets, as they still cause pain regardless of absorption.it he'd be extraordinarily powerful.
*** Actually, lightning
** In classic
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** Many chapters contain the phrase "Godspeed, readers..." at the very end.
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Average Joe In Bullet Hell is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[InsistentTerminology semi-]][[SelfInsert self insert]] fanfic written by Magnificent Sasquatch. Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6599809/1/Average_Joe_in_Bullet_Hell here]]
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: [[CaptainObvious Ryan's the savvy guy and Utsuho is the energetic girl.]]
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: [[CaptainObvious Ryan's the savvy guy and Utsuho is the energetic girl.]]
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* MesACrowd: Four of a Kind.
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* SelfDuplication: Four of a Kind.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Suika calls Ryan everything ''except'' his name. Also, Alice Margatroid is understandably annoyed when Ryan calls her "VideoGame/{{Metroid}}" the first time they meet.
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* MyNameIsNotDurwood: Suika calls Ryan everything ''except'' his name. Also, Alice Margatroid is understandably annoyed when Ryan calls her "{{Metroid}}" the first time they meet.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Cirno is starting to get shades of this now that she has, if only in her mind, a rival.
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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote "defeat" of [[CuteandPsycho Flandre]] [[AxCrazy Scarlet]], Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then [[CompleteMonster I]][[SlasherSmile z]][[TheStarscream a]] shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". Needless to say, [[HeroicBSOD he does not take it well.]] ]]
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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote "defeat" of [[CuteandPsycho Flandre]] [[AxCrazy Scarlet]], Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then [[CompleteMonster I]][[SlasherSmile z]][[TheStarscream [[SlasherSmile Iz]][[TheStarscream a]] shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". Needless to say, [[HeroicBSOD he He does not take it well.]] ]]
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*** Actually, lightning is the number-one thing Ryan wants to ''avoid''. [[spoiler: As a Mega Man expy of sorts, he is weak to electricity like the classic Mega Man himself--specifically, his muscles seize up, inducing paralysis.]] Subverted hard in the case of danmaku bullets, as they still cause pain regardless of absorption.
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*** Actually, lightning is the number-one thing Ryan wants to ''avoid''. [[spoiler: As a Mega Man expy of sorts, he is weak to electricity like the classic Mega Man himself--specifically, his muscles seize up, inducing paralysis.]] Subverted hard in the case of danmaku bullets, as they still cause pain regardless of absorption.
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** Do not damage Marisa's hat.
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* CompleteMonster: Let's see, now, controlling as a standard? [[AxCrazy Murderous to an absolute fault?]] [[ManipulativeBastard Tends to pull the strings of everyone she works with, above, or under?]] [[UptoEleven Viciously beats her own troops under the guise of training?]] Yeah, [[KnightofCerebus Commander Iza]] seems to fit this role nicely.
** [[spoiler:Being a serious {{Yandere}} for Chino doesn't make her more appealing. In fact, it...only seems to make things worse. For everyone.]]
** [[spoiler:Being a serious {{Yandere}} for Chino doesn't make her more appealing. In fact, it...only seems to make things worse. For everyone.]]
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** Also, Ran. Very, very much Ran. [[spoiler: Once upon a time, she was very much loved by the pre-Gensokyo Human Village. Then, Nami and the Sasa Sanctuary forces of that time tried to kill said humans. Ran pretty much took on the entire army herself, the stupidly overpowered commander included, and came out almost ''unscratched''. Their leader? Presumed disintegrated by a single-palm laser. Do not ''ever'' screw with anyone under Ran's care.]]
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** Also, Ran. Very, very much Ran. [[spoiler: Once upon a time, she was very much loved by the pre-Gensokyo Human Village.Village, and she loved them in kind. Then, Nami and the Sasa Sanctuary forces of that time tried to kill said humans. [[CurbstompBattle The resulting asskicking that Ran pretty much took on the entire army herself, the stupidly overpowered commander included, and came out almost ''unscratched''. Their leader? Presumed disintegrated by delivered]] was so monumental that Yukari Yakumo immediately wanted her as a single-palm laser. Do not ''ever'' screw with anyone under Ran's care.shikigami.]]
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**[[spoiler: When Utsuho breaks it to Ryan that he was never meant to protect her, that she was basically a youkai bodyguard for a weak human ''even though she was the enemy's prior target'', he gets a ''serious'' moment of this--complete with regret, self-loathing and questioning of purpose.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Let's see, now, controlling as a standard? [[AxCrazy Murderous to an absolute fault?]] [[ManipulativeBastard Tends to pull the strings of everyone she works with, above, or under?]] [[UptoEleven Viciously beats her own troops under the guise of training?]] Yeah, [[KnightofCerebus Commander Iza]] seems to fit this role nicely.
**[[spoiler:Being a serious {{Yandere}} for Chino doesn't make her more appealing. In fact, it...only seems to make things worse. For everyone.]]
**[[spoiler:Being a serious {{Yandere}} for Chino doesn't make her more appealing. In fact, it...only seems to make things worse. For everyone.]]
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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote defeat of Flandre Scarlet, Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then Iza shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". Needless to say, [[HeroicBSOD he does not take it well.]] ]]
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* FakeUltimateHero: After his quote-unquote defeat "defeat" of Flandre Scarlet, [[CuteandPsycho Flandre]] [[AxCrazy Scarlet]], Ryan's rocking quite the ego high for a while into the second story arc. The apparent safeguarding of Utsuho he recieves, combined with being sent to settle an incident just gives him an even bigger head. [[spoiler: Then Iza [[CompleteMonster I]][[SlasherSmile z]][[TheStarscream a]] shows up, and Utsuho delivers the mortal blow that brings this self-image he has crashing down: Yukari didn't send him to protect Utsuho. She sent Utsuho to protect ''him''. In fact, Utsuho has won virtually every fight for them until that point, with little in the means of effectual help from the supposed "leader". Needless to say, [[HeroicBSOD he does not take it well.]] ]]
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* PlotParallel: [[spoiler:This has an interesting semi-inversion for the two protagonists. True to the "Heaven and Hell" motif, Ryan and Utsuho have personal agendas that work in opposite directions. Ryan is trying to be ''stronger'' so he doesn't weigh Utsuho down, refusing to accept human limits to match his youkai partner. Meanwhile, Utsuho is trying to keep a tight ''lid'' on her destructive nature so she doesn't both jeopardize their goal or frighten Ryan away--she's having a bit more success than him, however.]]