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"There are countless alternate timelines, in this one, Nanoha and Ben are cousins and they're spending the summer on a road trip across the country, fighting off evil from earth or space and making friends with the use of maximum firepower."
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* FogotAboutHisPowers: When the trio rush to help Kevin against a bunch of thugs, they fail to consider using any of their respective powers to make things easier. Afterwards, they note Ben could have transformed before entering the alleyway, and Nanoha and Fate could have used a few subtle bindings to trip up the thugs.
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* FogotAboutHisPowers: ForgotAboutHisPowers: When the trio rush to help Kevin against a bunch of thugs, they fail to consider using any of their respective powers to make things easier. Afterwards, they note Ben could have transformed before entering the alleyway, and Nanoha and Fate could have used a few subtle bindings to trip up the thugs.
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* WHatTheHellHero: Nanoha isn't afraid to call out Ben whenever he does something insensitive or stupid, whether it be insulting Fate, or trying to sneak in to a restricted room at the hotel they're staying in. To his credit, he acknowledges when he goes to far, and generally listens.
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* WHatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero: Nanoha isn't afraid to call out Ben whenever he does something insensitive or stupid, whether it be insulting Fate, or trying to sneak in to a restricted room at the hotel they're staying in. To his credit, he acknowledges when he goes to far, and generally listens.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Just like canon, Nanoha is one of the kindest and sweetest girls around. However, Ben discovers that she has an intimidating DeathGlare when she catches him trying to sneak into a VIP room, even leaving out her proficiency with magical laser beams.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Just like canon, Nanoha is one of the kindest and sweetest girls around. However, Ben discovers that she has an intimidating DeathGlare when she catches him trying to sneak into a VIP room, even leaving out her proficiency with magical laser beams. Likewise, the leader of the thugs harassing Kevin and Fate is shocked and temporarily cowed when she delivers a painful slap and DeathGlare after he goes too far insulting Fate.
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* {{Foil}}: Ben and Nanoha are both brown haired children (and cousins) who, through extraordinary circumstances, came to possess devices that gave them incredible powers. However, Nanoha's Raising Heart mainly allowed her to use her own innate abilities, she had [[TheMentor Yuuno]] to teach her how to use them, and required almost no convincing [[ComesGreatResponsibility to focus on collecting Jewel Seeds, only using them for that purpose]], showing [[WiseBeyondTheirYears great wisdom for her age]]. Meanwhile, Ben's powers come ''entirely'' from the Omnitrix, [[HowDOIShootWeb struggles to learn how to use both the device and the forms it grants him through trial and error]], and has to be stopped from [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatPerks using them for his own (admittedly minor) gain]], lacking the level of maturity his cousin has, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold despite being a good kid at heart]].
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* {{Foil}}: Ben and Nanoha are both brown haired children (and cousins) who, through extraordinary circumstances, came to possess devices that gave them incredible powers. However, Nanoha's Raising Heart mainly allowed her to use her own innate abilities, she had [[TheMentor Yuuno]] to teach her how to use them, and required almost no convincing [[ComesGreatResponsibility to focus on collecting Jewel Seeds, only using them for that purpose]], showing [[WiseBeyondTheirYears great wisdom for her age]]. Meanwhile, Ben's powers come ''entirely'' from the Omnitrix, [[HowDOIShootWeb [[HowDoIShootWeb struggles to learn how to use both the device and the forms it grants him through trial and error]], and has to be stopped from [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatPerks using them for his own (admittedly minor) gain]], lacking the level of maturity his cousin has, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold despite being a good kid at heart]].heart]].
* FogotAboutHisPowers: When the trio rush to help Kevin against a bunch of thugs, they fail to consider using any of their respective powers to make things easier. Afterwards, they note Ben could have transformed before entering the alleyway, and Nanoha and Fate could have used a few subtle bindings to trip up the thugs.
* FogotAboutHisPowers: When the trio rush to help Kevin against a bunch of thugs, they fail to consider using any of their respective powers to make things easier. Afterwards, they note Ben could have transformed before entering the alleyway, and Nanoha and Fate could have used a few subtle bindings to trip up the thugs.
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* NoodleIncident: Kevin's feud with the thugs harassing him for [[FantasticRacism being a 'freak']] has been an escalating prank war on his end for a while, leading up to one standout example. The incident involved [[NoodleImplements a bucket of whipped cream, a bag of feathers, a jar of termites, another jar of bees and four whoopee cushions]] which ''somehow'' led to a garbage truck crashing into the mayors office ''roof'', and apparently triggered "a gang war between cockroaches and termites".
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** Kevin is significantly better adjusted mentally, being genuinely friendly towards Ben, Nanoha, and Fate, and showing them around the arcade, as well as his personal hideout. What's more, he never tries to rope them into anything illegal actions, and lacks the near sociopathic disregard for life his canon self initially did, [[spoiler:only killing [[AssholeVictim the thugs who repeatedly beat him up and called him 'freak']], and only ''after'' their latest attempt involved trying to beat him to death. The fact that he just suffered from a sudden mutation probably didn't help matters]].
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** Kevin is significantly better adjusted mentally, being genuinely friendly towards Ben, Nanoha, and Fate, and showing them around the arcade, as well as his personal hideout. What's more, he He never tries to rope them into anything illegal actions, simply wishing to hang out, and they part on good terms. He also lacks the near sociopathic disregard for life his canon self initially did, [[spoiler:only killing [[AssholeVictim the thugs who repeatedly beat him up and called him 'freak']], and only ''after'' their latest attempt involved trying to beat him to death. The fact that he just suffered from a sudden mutation probably didn't help matters]].
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* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's mutants, having done notable damage to the museum, and the damage Nanoha did to the area surrounding the Washington monument was enough that it had to be closed off..
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* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's mutants, having done notable damage to the museum, and museum in the damage Nanoha did to process. Nanoha's battle with the mutated pigeon in the area surrounding the Washington monument was enough caused so much damage that it had to be closed off..off, to her embaressment.
* {{Foil}}: Ben and Nanoha are both brown haired children (and cousins) who, through extraordinary circumstances, came to possess devices that gave them incredible powers. However, Nanoha's Raising Heart mainly allowed her to use her own innate abilities, she had [[TheMentor Yuuno]] to teach her how to use them, and required almost no convincing [[ComesGreatResponsibility to focus on collecting Jewel Seeds, only using them for that purpose]], showing [[WiseBeyondTheirYears great wisdom for her age]]. Meanwhile, Ben's powers come ''entirely'' from the Omnitrix, [[HowDOIShootWeb struggles to learn how to use both the device and the forms it grants him through trial and error]], and has to be stopped from [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatPerks using them for his own (admittedly minor) gain]], lacking the level of maturity his cousin has, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold despite being a good kid at heart]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: Fate is the one who saves the store from one of Animo's mutants, and requests Ben be given the golden Sumo Slammer card. Feeling that she deserved a reward more than he did, Max still gives his 'being a hero is it's own reward' aesop.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Fate is the one who saves the store from one of Animo's mutants, and requests Ben be given the golden Sumo Slammer card. Feeling that she deserved a reward more than he did, Max still gives his Ben the 'being a hero is it's own reward' aesop.
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* LampshadeHanging: Fate and Arf tease Nanoha over how often she resorts to [[DefeatMeansFriendship some variation of 'friendship through firepower']], between blasting Fate, Vita, and having slapped [[ChildhoodFriend Suzuka]] shortly before they became friends.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.
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* LampshadeHanging: LampshadeHanging:
** After Nanoha stops him from trying to sneak into the VIP room, Ben acknowledges that trying to do so was rather stupid, having risked being kicked out of a luxury hotel just to get a sneak peak at a game.
** Fate and Arf tease Nanoha over how often she resorts to [[DefeatMeansFriendship some variation of 'friendship through firepower']], between blasting Fate, Vita, and having slapped [[ChildhoodFriend Suzuka]] shortly before they became friends.
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** Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in thepast.past.
** Vita and Zafira managed to take down several of Vilgax's drones rather quickly, despite the AntiMagic they employ.
** After Nanoha stops him from trying to sneak into the VIP room, Ben acknowledges that trying to do so was rather stupid, having risked being kicked out of a luxury hotel just to get a sneak peak at a game.
** Fate and Arf tease Nanoha over how often she resorts to [[DefeatMeansFriendship some variation of 'friendship through firepower']], between blasting Fate, Vita, and having slapped [[ChildhoodFriend Suzuka]] shortly before they became friends.
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** Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the
** Vita and Zafira managed to take down several of Vilgax's drones rather quickly, despite the AntiMagic they employ.
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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Ben independently questions Fate ''and'' Kevin on their respective parents in chapter 3, before realising [[AbusiveParents the implications]] of their response and current living conditions respectively. He mentally berates himself for doing so.
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* WHatTheHellHero: Nanoha isn't afraid to call out Ben whenever he does something insensitive or stupid, whether it be insulting Fate, or trying to sneak in to a restricted room at the hotel they're staying in. To his credit, he acknowledges when he goes to far, and generally listens.
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* OhoNotAgain: Admiral Lindy is exasperated to hear that Fate and Nanoha have apparently encountered yet ''another'' Lost Logia.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Animo's mutation ray is powered by a Jewel Seed, and grants additional powers to the animals it creates, even making the resurrected mammoth form wreathed in flames.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Animo's mutation ray is powered by a Jewel Seed, and grants additional powers to the animals it creates, even making the resurrected mammoth form composed of ice, and the T-Rex wreathed in flames.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Just like canon, Nanoha is one of the kindest and sweetest girls around. However, Ben discovers that she has an intimidating DeathGlare when she catches him trying to sneak into a VIP room, even leaving out her proficiency with FeakinLaserBeams.
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's mutants
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's mutants
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Just like canon, Nanoha is one of the kindest and sweetest girls around. However, Ben discovers that she has an intimidating DeathGlare when she catches him trying to sneak into a VIP room, even leaving out her proficiency with FeakinLaserBeams.
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* CompositeCharacter: Humongousaur has both his {{Sizeshifter}} powers, and the spiked tail of his reboot version.
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, being a cousin to Ben and referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo'smutantsmutants, having done notable damage to the museum, and the damage Nanoha did to the area surrounding the Washington monument was enough that it had to be closed off..
* CompositeCharacter: Humongousaur has both his {{Sizeshifter}} powers, and the spiked tail of his reboot version.
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, being a cousin to Ben and referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: When asking the girls about how they learned magic, Ben questions if Fate's parents taught her, bringing up memories of [[AbusiveParents Precia]]. To his credit, he recognises how upset she is and immediately apologises.
* LampshadeHanging: Fate and Arf tease Nanoha over how often she resorts to [[DefeatMeansFriendship some variation of 'friendship through firepower']], between blasting Fate, Vita, and having slapped [[ChildhoodFriend Suzuka]] shortly before they became friends.
* LampshadeHanging: Fate and Arf tease Nanoha over how often she resorts to [[DefeatMeansFriendship some variation of 'friendship through firepower']], between blasting Fate, Vita, and having slapped [[ChildhoodFriend Suzuka]] shortly before they became friends.
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* RelativeButton: Bringing up Fate's mother is a quick way to make her upset, even indirectly.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Just like canon, Nanoha is one of the kindest and sweetest girls around. However, Ben discovers that she has an intimidating DeathGlare when she catches him trying to sneak into a VIP room, even leaving out her proficiency with FeakinLaserBeams.
* DestructiveSaviour: Ben and Nanoha share this problem when facing Animo's mutants
* FamedInStory: Max's reputation is apparently enough that Admiral Lindy has heard of him, and refers to him as 'a legend'.
* ForWantOfANail: Nanoha stops Ben from trying to sneak into the VIP area at the hotel they're staying in, preventing him from getting them kicked out.
* FamedInStory: Max's reputation is apparently enough that Admiral Lindy has heard of him, and refers to him as 'a legend'.
* ForWantOfANail: Nanoha stops Ben from trying to sneak into the VIP area at the hotel they're staying in, preventing him from getting them kicked out.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.past.
* OhoNotAgain: Admiral Lindy is exasperated to hear that Fate and Nanoha have apparently encountered yet ''another'' Lost Logia.
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* OhoNotAgain: Admiral Lindy is exasperated to hear that Fate and Nanoha have apparently encountered yet ''another'' Lost Logia.
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"There are countless alternate timelines, in this one, Nanoha and Ben are cousins and they're spending the summer on a road trip across the country, fighting off evil from earth or space and making friends with the use of maximum firepower."
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic Aliens and Magic]] is a crossover fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] that features [[WesternAnimation/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]] going on the fateful summer vacation with his grandfather Max, and rather than Gwen, is accompanied by a cousin from his grandmothers side of the family, [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha, and her friend Fate]].
!!Aliens and Magic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Animo's mutation ray is powered by a Jewel Seed, and grants additional powers to the animals it creates, even making the resurrected mammoth form wreathed in flames.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Ben's initial [[{{Jerkass}} bratty tendencies]] are toned down, likely owing to Nanoha being notably friendlier than Gwen.
** Kevin is significantly better adjusted mentally, being genuinely friendly towards Ben, Nanoha, and Fate, and showing them around the arcade, as well as his personal hideout. What's more, he never tries to rope them into anything illegal actions, and lacks the near sociopathic disregard for life his canon self initially did, [[spoiler:only killing [[AssholeVictim the thugs who repeatedly beat him up and called him 'freak']], and only ''after'' their latest attempt involved trying to beat him to death. The fact that he just suffered from a sudden mutation probably didn't help matters]].
* AntiMagic: Vilgax's drones are equipped with this, preventing Nanoha and Fate from simply blasting them to pieces.
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* HiddenDepths: Nanoha is an avid fan of Mecha games, managing to school both Ben and Fate in an arcade match. Only Kevin, who spends most of his time at the arcade, manages to beat her, and only barely.
* InSpiteOfANail: Fate is the one who saves the store from one of Animo's mutants, and requests Ben be given the golden Sumo Slammer card. Feeling that she deserved a reward more than he did, Max still gives his 'being a hero is it's own reward' aesop.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13533936/1/Aliens-and-Magic Aliens and Magic]] is a crossover fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6429435/Rougedragon Rougedragon]] that features [[WesternAnimation/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]] going on the fateful summer vacation with his grandfather Max, and rather than Gwen, is accompanied by a cousin from his grandmothers side of the family, [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha, and her friend Fate]].
!!Aliens and Magic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Animo's mutation ray is powered by a Jewel Seed, and grants additional powers to the animals it creates, even making the resurrected mammoth form wreathed in flames.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Ben's initial [[{{Jerkass}} bratty tendencies]] are toned down, likely owing to Nanoha being notably friendlier than Gwen.
** Kevin is significantly better adjusted mentally, being genuinely friendly towards Ben, Nanoha, and Fate, and showing them around the arcade, as well as his personal hideout. What's more, he never tries to rope them into anything illegal actions, and lacks the near sociopathic disregard for life his canon self initially did, [[spoiler:only killing [[AssholeVictim the thugs who repeatedly beat him up and called him 'freak']], and only ''after'' their latest attempt involved trying to beat him to death. The fact that he just suffered from a sudden mutation probably didn't help matters]].
* AntiMagic: Vilgax's drones are equipped with this, preventing Nanoha and Fate from simply blasting them to pieces.
* CrossoverRelatives: Nanoha is related to the Tennysons, referring to Max as 'Gruncle'.
* HiddenDepths: Nanoha is an avid fan of Mecha games, managing to school both Ben and Fate in an arcade match. Only Kevin, who spends most of his time at the arcade, manages to beat her, and only barely.
* InSpiteOfANail: Fate is the one who saves the store from one of Animo's mutants, and requests Ben be given the golden Sumo Slammer card. Feeling that she deserved a reward more than he did, Max still gives his 'being a hero is it's own reward' aesop.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Apparently the Wolkenritter and Vilgax have clashed several times in the past.
