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* GrumpyBear: Rae in all her terse, snarky glory. Sakura [[NotSoDifferentRemark points out this makes her no different to Sasuke]] to which [[HypocrisyNod Rae counters that she personally wouldn't want another her walking around.]]

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* RealWomenDontWearDresses: Averted as Rae is beloved by reviewers for being a NonActionSnarker TeamMom.



* TheSnarkKnight: Poor Rae.

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-->[[ArcWords It's not like one friend will change anything, right?]]

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-->[[ArcWords It's -->It's not like one friend will change anything, right?]]
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Now penniless and homeless]], Rae sets off to look for work to earn herself money for food. After finding a job, she returns to the alley she started in to find a small blonde boy to also be taking refuge in the alley.

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[[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Now penniless and homeless]], homeless, Rae sets off to look for work to earn herself money for food. After finding a job, she returns to the alley she started in to find a small blonde boy to also be taking refuge in the alley.



* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Rae first enters Konoha, she is homeless and has no money. She came only with the clothes on her back and for a few chapters her home was a dumpster or an empty playground.
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* GrumpyBear: Rae in all her terse, snarky glory. Sakura points out this makes her NotSoDifferent to Sasuke to which [[HypocrisyNod Rae counters that she personally wouldn't want another her walking around.]]

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* GrumpyBear: Rae in all her terse, snarky glory. Sakura [[NotSoDifferentRemark points out this makes her NotSoDifferent no different to Sasuke Sasuke]] to which [[HypocrisyNod Rae counters that she personally wouldn't want another her walking around.]]

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[[RealityEnsues Now penniless and homeless]], Rae sets off to look for work to earn herself money for food. After finding a job, she returns to the alley she started in to find a small blonde boy to also be taking refuge in the alley.

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[[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Now penniless and homeless]], Rae sets off to look for work to earn herself money for food. After finding a job, she returns to the alley she started in to find a small blonde boy to also be taking refuge in the alley.



* DeadFic: Was last updated January 13 2015

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* DeadFic: Was last updated January 13 20152015.



* TheHeart: Rae grounds Naruto and later Team 7 and acts as their moral compass.



* RealityEnsues: When Rae first enters Konoha, she is homeless and has no money. She came only with the clothes on her back and for a few chapters her home was a dumpster or an empty playground.



* TheSnarkKnight: Poor Rae.



* TheHeart: Rae grounds Naruto and later Team 7 and acts as their moral compass.
* TheSnarkKnight: Poor Rae.

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* TheHeart: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Rae grounds Naruto first enters Konoha, she is homeless and later Team 7 has no money. She came only with the clothes on her back and acts as their moral compass.
* TheSnarkKnight: Poor Rae.
for a few chapters her home was a dumpster or an empty playground.
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Moving as to not claim primacy with other Aberration Fanfic. - https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/query.php?parent_id=70797&type=att#comment-195312
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-->[[ArcWords It's not like one friend will change anything, right?]]

On her way home from work [[SelfInsertFic Kuroda Rae]], an American studying in Japan, spots a blue portal. She accidentally trips and nearly gets mugged and killed for her trouble, only to be rescued and healed by [[YourCostumeNeedsWork a man in an ANBU costume.]]

Rae picks herself up and walks out to find herself in [[Manga/{{Naruto}} a strange place with old-fashioned buildings, people with strange clothes and a monument that shouldn't be there.]]

[[RealityEnsues Now penniless and homeless]], Rae sets off to look for work to earn herself money for food. After finding a job, she returns to the alley she started in to find a small blonde boy to also be taking refuge in the alley.

[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6278468/1/Aberration Aberration can be found here]]
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!!This work provides examples of the following tropes:

* BigDamnHero: The ANBU who saves Rae's life in the first chapter.
%%* BigSisterMentor
* ContrivedCoincidence: Rae trips over a dog and falls into the portal.
* CorneredRattlesnake[=/=]WaifFu: As Rae points out, her martial arts are meant to be used by someone who doesn't have a lot of physical strength, focuses on using enemy attacks against said enemy and disabling/escaping threats.
* DeadFic: Was last updated January 13 2015
* DisabilitySuperpower: Since chakra is basically lifeforce in Manga/{{Naruto}}, Rae's complete ''absence'' of chakra is considered a disability. [[spoiler: As a result, Rae is completely immune to genjutsu.]]
* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler: WordOfGod is that Rae is a snarkier and grumpier Obito.]]
%%* FishOutOfWater
%%* ForWantOfANail
* GrumpyBear: Rae in all her terse, snarky glory. Sakura points out this makes her NotSoDifferent to Sasuke to which [[HypocrisyNod Rae counters that she personally wouldn't want another her walking around.]]
%%* HappilyAdopted
* HomelessHero: She [[spoiler: and Naruto]] had to live in the streets, but like real life homelessness, it was temporary until she could find herself an apartment.
* JerkassRealization: Rae has one at the end of chapter 15 and the beginning of chapter 16. While she admits she doesn't like Sasuke and gets the impression she never will, Rae realizes that treating Sasuke like dirt for something he hasn't (and hopefully may never) actually DONE isn't helping. She resolves to be cordial if not actually helpful to the kid.
* LampshadeHanging: Noted by Rae that in most stories where girls end up in the world of Naruto, they tell everything to the Hokage, get cool ninjas and have their favorite character.
* MamaBear: For a few years, around Naruto's birthday, Rae has to fight off a few civilians who attempt to hurt him.
* {{Muggle}}: Unlike most SelfInsertFic, Rae remains a normal civilian woman and doesn't gain any ninja skills or power.
* NonActionSnarker: Rae mostly. She has some ActionGirl skills but as the story progresses, she hangs around more and more ninja, who are clearly more skilled than she is. Not to mention the whole "not-having-chakra" thing.
* OccidentalOtaku: Rae is an American Naruto fan.
* OppositesAttract: A platonic version with the dark and snarky Rae and the bright and hyperactive Naruto.
* ParentalSubstitute: Pointed by Iruka as she practically raised Naruto, she fed, she educated him and watches for him. She adopted him in all but in name.
* RealityEnsues: When Rae first enters Konoha, she is homeless and has no money. She came only with the clothes on her back and for a few chapters her home was a dumpster or an empty playground.
%%* SelfInsertFic
* SupportingProtagonist: While the story is in Rae's point of view, the story focuses on how she affects Naruto.
* TheHeart: Rae grounds Naruto and later Team 7 and acts as their moral compass.
* TheSnarkKnight: Poor Rae.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Rae sat down one day and made a list.[[spoiler: She starts getting worried when she realized how far the plot is deviating.]]
* TheUnsmile: Rae taught herself how to do one and can't undo it.
%%* YouCantGoHomeAgain
%%* YourCostumeNeedsWork
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