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* "Now, son, don't touch that cactus!" ''(his son floats towards the cactus and gets stuck to it)'' '''"You're dead to me."'''
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-->'''Pop Singer''': ''♫ Ooh, baby! I love you, baby! ♫''
-->'''Mother''': Stay away from my baby!
-->'''Baby''': But mother, I love him.
-->'''Mother''': Stay away from my baby!
-->'''Baby''': But mother, I love him.
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-->'''Pop Singer''': ''♫ Ooh, baby! I love you, baby! ♫''
-->'''Mother''':♫''\\
'''Mother''': Stay away from mybaby!
-->'''Baby''':baby!\\
'''Baby''': But mother, I love him.
-->'''Mother''':
'''Mother''': Stay away from my
-->'''Baby''':
'''Baby''': But mother, I love him.
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--> '''Man''': Excuse me, are you gonna eat that?
--> ''(scene shows a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism a baby]])''
--> '''Woman''': No. ''({{Beat}})'' You can have it!
--> '''Man''': ''(grabs baby)'' Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!" ''(scene reveals she's talking to another woman)'' "...I can explain!"
--> ''(scene shows a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism a baby]])''
--> '''Woman''': No. ''({{Beat}})'' You can have it!
--> '''Man''': ''(grabs baby)'' Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!" ''(scene reveals she's talking to another woman)'' "...I can explain!"
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--> '''Man''': Excuse me, are you gonna eat that?
--> ''(scenethat?\\
''[scene shows a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism ababy]])''
-->baby]]]''\\
'''Woman''': No.''({{Beat}})'' ''[{{Beat}}]'' You can have it!
-->it!\\
'''Man''':''(grabs baby)'' ''[grabs baby]'' Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!"''(scene ''[scene reveals she's talking to another woman)'' woman]'' "...I can explain!"
--> ''(scene
''[scene shows a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism a
-->
'''Woman''': No.
-->
'''Man''':
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!"
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--> '''Woman:''' I think we should just be friends. ''(walks away)''
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment Mother...!]]
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment Mother...!]]
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-->
'''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment Mother...!]]
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--> '''Man 1''': Hey! Wanna see an impression of my dad?
--> '''Man 2''': Sure!
-->''(Man 1 [[DisappearedDad disappears]])''
-->'''Man 2''': Haha! ''[[LampshadeHanging Comedy.]]''
--> '''Man 2''': Sure!
-->''(Man 1 [[DisappearedDad disappears]])''
-->'''Man 2''': Haha! ''[[LampshadeHanging Comedy.]]''
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-->
'''Man 2''':
-->''(Man
''[Man 1 [[DisappearedDad
-->'''Man
'''Man 2''': Haha! ''[[LampshadeHanging Comedy.]]''
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--> '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}} Man]]''': ''(seeing guy about to jump off a building)'' [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! ''(sets up video camera)'' Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''Basketball''': ''(bouncing across a road)'' Haha! Chase me, Suzie! Chase me!
--> '''Suzie''': ''(chases him, laughing... and gets run over)''
--> '''Basketball''': Mmm... Good...
--> '''Suzie''': ''(chases him, laughing... and gets run over)''
--> '''Basketball''': Mmm... Good...
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-->
'''Suzie''':
-->
'''Basketball''': Mmm... Good...
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--> '''Dad with camcorder:''' Keep pushing! Push!\\
''(pop)''\\
''(pop)''\\
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* "A, B, C, D, E, F, gun!" ''(BANG)''
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* "A, B, C, D, E, F, gun!" ''(BANG)''''[BANG]''
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--> '''Man:''' Oh no! ...[[BungledSuicide I'm still alive.]] ''[[AteHisGun (shoots]]'' ''[[BloodSplatteredInnocents himself)]]''
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''(child kicks ball away)''\\
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'''Doctor:''' Awww! ''(cut to the girl on a hospital bed)'' ...You're not gonna grow up.
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'''Doctor:''' Awww! ''(cut ''[cut to the girl on a hospital bed)'' ...bed]'' ...You're not gonna grow up.
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* "Broccoli, sockoli, what's he doin' today?!" "[[BlackComedy He's dead.]]" ''({{Beat}})'' "'''THE END'''"
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* "Broccoli, sockoli, what's he doin' today?!" "[[BlackComedy He's dead.]]" ''({{Beat}})'' ''[{{Beat}}]'' "'''THE END'''"
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''(scene shows the girl in question is dead)''\\
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* "Hey! Here comes that [[IncrediblyLamePun trainsgender]] guy!"
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* "Hey! Here comes that [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} trainsgender]] guy!"
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* "Joey, did you eat my sandwich?" "I ''am'' your sandwich." *forces himself down his friend's throat* [[spoiler: However, he crawls back out later.]]
* "Goodbye world!" "Okay Jim, see you around. Where're you go- *gunshot* Oh! Oh no! Oh! That's not what I thought he meant by that at all!"
* "Goodbye world!" "Okay Jim, see you around. Where're you go- *gunshot* Oh! Oh no! Oh! That's not what I thought he meant by that at all!"
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* "Joey, did you eat my sandwich?" "I ''am'' your sandwich." *forces ''(forces himself down his friend's throat* throat)''" [[spoiler: However, he crawls back out later.]]
*"Goodbye world!" "[[DrivenToSuicide Goodbye, world...]]" "Okay Jim, I'll see you around. Where're you go- *gunshot* go-- ''(gunshot)'' Oh! Oh no! Oh! That's not what I thought he meant by that at all!"
*
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* "Hey guys, check out my new camera!" [[BoomHeadshot *BANG!*]] Oh, wait, [[FailedASpotCheck this isn't a camera."]]
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* "Hey guys, check out my new camera!" [[BoomHeadshot *BANG!*]] ''[[BoomHeadshot (BANG!)]]'' Oh, wait, [[FailedASpotCheck this isn't a camera."]]
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* "Hey kid, you can't skate here!" "You can't tell me what to do-" *blows up in a minefield*
* "I want to be a pie!" *cut to kid in the oven* "Billy, nooo!"
* "When I grow up, I want to go to the moon!" "Why wait?" *kicks girl into outer space*
* "I want to be a pie!" *cut to kid in the oven* "Billy, nooo!"
* "When I grow up, I want to go to the moon!" "Why wait?" *kicks girl into outer space*
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* "Hey kid, you can't skate here!" "You can't tell me what to do-" *blows do-- ''(blows up in a minefield*
minefield)''"
* "I want to be apie!" *cut pie! ''(cut to kid in the oven* oven)''" "Billy, nooo!"
* "When I grow up, I want to go to the moon!" "Whywait?" *kicks wait? ''(kicks girl into outer space*
space)''"
* "I want to be a
* "When I grow up, I want to go to the moon!" "Why
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* "Wanna play video games?" "No way, dude, [[DoubleMeaning you always beat me!]]" [[BlackComedy *repeated punches*]] "TELL ''NO'' ONE!"
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* "Wanna play video games?" "No way, dude, [[DoubleMeaning you always beat me!]]" [[BlackComedy *repeated punches*]] "TELL "''[[BlackComedy (repeated punches)]]'' TELL ''NO'' ONE!"
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-->'''Pop Singer''': Ohh, baby! I love you, baby!
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-->'''Pop Singer''': Ohh, ''♫ Ooh, baby! I love you, baby!baby! ♫''
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* (shot of smiling, panting dog) "[[AdoptionDiss You're adopted!]]" (shot of saddened dog accompanied by piano note)
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* (shot ''(shot of smiling, panting dog) dog)'' "[[AdoptionDiss You're adopted!]]" (shot ''(shot of saddened dog accompanied by piano note)note)''
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* "Sir, I'm afraid you have brain cancer." (SUDDENLY, PINEAPPLES) "Well, the good news is you don't have brain cancer anymore..." (patient's head, now a pineapple, falls off his neck)
* "Save me, Superguy!" "No." "You're a diiii[-iiiiick...-]"
* "Save me, Superguy!" "No." "You're a diiii[-iiiiick...-]"
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* "Sir, I'm afraid you have brain cancer." (SUDDENLY, PINEAPPLES) ''(SUDDENLY, PINEAPPLES)'' "Well, the good news is you don't have brain cancer anymore..." (patient's ''(patient's head, now a pineapple, falls off his neck)
neck)''
* "Save me, Superguy!""No."[[LittleNo No]]." "You're a diiii[-iiiiick...-]"
* "Save me, Superguy!"
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--> (zooms out to show a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism a baby]])
--> '''Woman''': No. ({{Beat}}) You can have it!
--> '''Man''': *grabs baby* Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!" ''(zoom out to show another woman)'' "...I can explain!"
--> '''Woman''': No. ({{Beat}}) You can have it!
--> '''Man''': *grabs baby* Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!" ''(zoom out to show another woman)'' "...I can explain!"
to:
--> (zooms out to show ''(scene shows a woman holding [[BlackComedyCannibalism a baby]])
baby]])''
--> '''Woman''': No.({{Beat}}) ''({{Beat}})'' You can have it!
--> '''Man''':*grabs baby* ''(grabs baby)'' Thank you!
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!"''(zoom out ''(scene reveals she's talking to show another woman)'' "...I can explain!"
--> '''Woman''': No.
--> '''Man''':
* "Honey, I'm pregnant!"
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--> '''Woman:''' I think we should just be friends. *walks away*
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment Mother!]]
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment Mother!]]
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--> '''Woman:''' I think we should just be friends. *walks away*
''(walks away)''
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonmentMother!]]Mother...!]]
--> '''Man:''' [[ParentalAbandonment
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-->(Man 1 [[DisappearedDad disappears]])
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--> '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}} Man]]''': (seeing guy about to jump off a building) [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets up video camera) Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}} Man]]''': (seeing ''(seeing guy about to jump off a building) building)'' [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets ''(sets up video camera) camera)'' Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''Basketball''': (bouncing across a road) "Haha! Chase me, Suzie! Chase me!"
--> '''Suzie''': (chases him, laughing..... and gets run over)
--> '''Suzie''': (chases him, laughing..... and gets run over)
to:
--> '''Basketball''': (bouncing ''(bouncing across a road) "Haha! road)'' Haha! Chase me, Suzie! Chase me!"
me!
--> '''Suzie''':(chases ''(chases him, laughing..... laughing... and gets run over)over)''
--> '''Suzie''':
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* Do not play “If you’re happy and you know it” If you’re holding a baby. That is all.
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* Do not play ''not'' sing “If you’re happy You're Happy and you know it” If You Know It” if you’re holding a baby. That is all.
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* "What's that behind your ear? It's a ''hearing aid!''" "... WHAT?"
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* "What's that behind your ear? It's a ''hearing aid!''" "... WHAT?"
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'''Boy:''' {{Gasp}}... This isn't my house!
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'''Boy:''' {{Gasp}}... ''{{gasp}}'' ...This isn't my house!
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--> '''Man:''' Oh no! [[BungledSuicide I'm still alive.]] [[AteHisGun (shoots]] [[BloodSplatteredInnocents himself)]]
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--> '''Man:''' Oh no! no! ...[[BungledSuicide I'm still alive.]] [[AteHisGun (shoots]] [[BloodSplatteredInnocents himself)]]''[[AteHisGun (shoots]]'' ''[[BloodSplatteredInnocents himself)]]''
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'''Doctor:''' Awww! ''(zoom out to show the girl on a hospital bed)'' You're not gonna grow up.
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'''Doctor:''' Awww! ''(zoom out ''(cut to show the girl on a hospital bed)'' bed)'' ...You're not gonna grow up.
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* "Broccoli, sockoli, what's he doin' today?!" "[[BlackComedy He's dead.]]" ({{Beat}}) '''THE END'''
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* "Broccoli, sockoli, what's he doin' today?!" "[[BlackComedy He's dead.]]" ({{Beat}}) '''THE END'''''({{Beat}})'' "'''THE END'''"
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''(zoom out to reveal that the girl in question is dead)''\\
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'''Ball:''' Father help!
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'''Ball:''' Father Father, help!
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--> '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}}Man]]''': (seeing guy about to jump off a building) [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets up video camera) Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}}Man]]''': '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}} Man]]''': (seeing guy about to jump off a building) [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets up video camera) Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''Man''': (seeing guy about to jump off a building) [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets up video camera) Okay, ''now'' jump!
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--> '''Man''': '''[[LetsPlay/{{Jacksepticeye}}Man]]''': (seeing guy about to jump off a building) [[BigNo Nooo!!!]] Don't jump! (sets up video camera) Okay, ''now'' jump!
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* The fat guy from asdfmovie7 doesn't want to be fat anymore. Tearful, [[AteHisGun he points a gun at his mouth]]...and bites the barrel off of it.
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* The fat guy from asdfmovie7 doesn't want to be fat anymore. Tearful, [[AteHisGun he points a gun at his mouth]]...and [[LiteralMetaphor bites the barrel off of it.
it.]]
