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''Bagel Brain'' (AKA Kilroy Smythe Umbrick) is an anonymous writer, primarily one of bizzare or surreal fanfics.
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''Bagel Brain'' (AKA Kilroy Smythe Umbrick) is an anonymous writer, primarily one of bizzare bizarre or surreal fanfics.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS7E2122ShortFilmsAboutSpringfield "Skinner and the Superintendent"]] [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Simpsons skit]] [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS7E2122ShortFilmsAboutSpringfield "Skinner and the Superintendent"]] [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Simpsons skit]] [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
''WesternAnimation/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[OrphanedSeries long-abandoned and unfinished]] {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JakAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[OrphanedSeries long-abandoned and unfinished]] {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[OrphanedSeries long-abandoned and unfinished]] {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.''VideoGame/JakAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[OrphanedFic long-abandoned and unfinished]] {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[OrphanedFic [[OrphanedSeries long-abandoned and unfinished]] {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[AbandonedFic long-abandoned and unfinished]] CrossoverFic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[AbandonedFic [[OrphanedFic long-abandoned and unfinished]] CrossoverFic {{Crossover}} fanfic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'' (2018[[note]]originally published in 2010[[/note]]): A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form as ''Bambi's Dream (Redux)'' in 2018.
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'' (2018[[note]]originally published in 2010[[/note]]): A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form as ''Bambi's Dream (Redux)'' in 2018.
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* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'' (2018[[note]]originally published in 2010[[/note]]): A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form as ''Bambi's Dream (Redux)'' in 2018.
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* ''Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Precursor Legacy'' (2009): A [[AbandonedFic long-abandoned and unfinished]] CrossoverFic with WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy and ''VideoGame/JaxAndDaxterThePrecursorLegacy''.
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* BlackComedy: ''Very'' prominent to a mean spirited degree in ''Along Came A Splut'' (which was one of the reasons why he disowned the story). ''Creamed Cherries'' has a very brief throwaway moment of it at the start. ''Bambi's Dream'' is completely devoid of it.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS7E2122ShortFilmsAboutSpringfield "Skinner and the Superintendent"]] [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Simpsons skit]] [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' Hams but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS7E2122ShortFilmsAboutSpringfield "Skinner and the Superintendent"]] [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Simpsons skit]] [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous [[Recap/TheSimpsonsS7E2122ShortFilmsAboutSpringfield "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit Superintendent"]] [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Simpsons skit]] [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* ShortStory: All of his stories are rather short in length.
* SilenceIsGolden: ''Bambi's Dream'' has no spoken dialogue at all, and ''Along Came A Splut'' had only a handful of speaking lines. Averted in ''Creamed Cherries'' due to the dialogue heavy nature of its source material.
* SilenceIsGolden: ''Bambi's Dream'' has no spoken dialogue at all, and ''Along Came A Splut'' had only a handful of speaking lines. Averted in ''Creamed Cherries'' due to the dialogue heavy nature of its source material.
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* EitherOrTitle: Both ''Along Came A Splut'' and ''Creamed Cherries'' have alternate titles.
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* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original document is long gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story now.
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** ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original document is long gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the storynow.now.
** The original 2010 version of Bambi's Dream'' was deleted, but unlike the above story, it was backed up on the internet archive and Bagel Brain claims to still have the document of it.
** ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original document is long gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story
** The original 2010 version of Bambi's Dream'' was deleted, but unlike the above story, it was backed up on the internet archive and Bagel Brain claims to still have the document of it.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day'') (2013): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic starring ''ComicStrip/{{Garfield}}'' and [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover a large assortment of other characters]], written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day'') (2013): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic starring ''ComicStrip/{{Garfield}}'' and [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover a large assortment of other characters]], written by him in his early days. He now considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
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** The humor and surrealism in ''Along Came A Splut'' is '''far'' more aggressive and over the top than in his other two fanfics, which are [[LighterAndSofter much gentler in tone and humor]].
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** The humor and surrealism in ''Along Came A Splut'' is '''far'' more aggressive and over the top than in his other two fanfics, which are [[LighterAndSofter much gentler in tone and humor]]. And unlike the other two, it was explicitly meant to be a TrollFic.
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* LampshadeHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's Dream''.
* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original draft is gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story now.
* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original draft is gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story now.
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* LampshadeHanging: Very, A very, very prominent source of humor in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's Dream''.
* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the originaldraft document is long gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story now.now.
* SequelGap: There was a five year span between him writing ''Along Came A Splut'' and ''Creamed Cherries''.
* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original
* SequelGap: There was a five year span between him writing ''Along Came A Splut'' and ''Creamed Cherries''.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day'') (2013): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic starring ''Franchise/{{Garfield}}'' and [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover a large assortment of other characters]], written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day'') (2013): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic starring ''Franchise/{{Garfield}}'' ''ComicStrip/{{Garfield}}'' and [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover a large assortment of other characters]], written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
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** The humor and surrealism in ''Along Came A Splut'' is '''far'' more aggressive and over the top than his other two fanfics.
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* MissingEpisode: ''Along Came A Splut'' was permanently deleted, wasn't archived and the original draft is gone, and Bagel Brain refuses to remake it due to disliking the story now.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day''): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form in 2018.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form in 2018.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA ''Garfield Has A Bad Day''): Day'') (2013): A '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic starring ''Franchise/{{Garfield}}'' and [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover a large assortment of other characters]], written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
*''Fanfic/BambisDream'': ''Fanfic/BambisDream'' (2018[[note]]originally published in 2010[[/note]]): A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form as ''Bambi's Dream (Redux)'' in 2018.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (2018) (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
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* LampshadingHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's Dream''.
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* LampshadingHanging: AlliterativeName: '''B'''agel '''B'''rain.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness:
** The humor and surrealism in ''Along Came A Splut'' is '''far'' more aggressive and over the top than his other two fanfics.
** If one counts the fact that ''Bambi's Dream'' was written first, its notably different because it lacks the comedic undertones present in ''Along Came A Splut'' and ''Creamed Cherries''.
* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: Did this to his story ''Bambi's Dream", as he felt he could improve the now deleted 2010 draft considerably for republication.
* LampshadeHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi'sDream''.Dream''.
* {{Surrealism}}: Present in ''Along Came A Splut'' to absurd degrees. ''Bambi's Dream'' has this to a much smaller degree, and it's justified due to the bulk of it being set in a dream.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness:
** The humor and surrealism in ''Along Came A Splut'' is '''far'' more aggressive and over the top than his other two fanfics.
** If one counts the fact that ''Bambi's Dream'' was written first, its notably different because it lacks the comedic undertones present in ''Along Came A Splut'' and ''Creamed Cherries''.
* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: Did this to his story ''Bambi's Dream", as he felt he could improve the now deleted 2010 draft considerably for republication.
* LampshadeHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's
* {{Surrealism}}: Present in ''Along Came A Splut'' to absurd degrees. ''Bambi's Dream'' has this to a much smaller degree, and it's justified due to the bulk of it being set in a dream.
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA Garfield Has A Bad Day): A bizarre TrollFic written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It'')
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]]
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It'')
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]]
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* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA Garfield ''Garfield Has A Bad Day): Day''): A bizarre '''very''' [[MindScrew bizarre]] TrollFic written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams InIt'')
It''): A lighthearted retelling of the famous "Skinner and the Superintendent" skit [[RecycledInSpace set in the universe of]] ''Disney/{{Bambi}}''.
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]]
]] Notably, this was actually the first of his three stories made, but it was deleted, and then revised and published in a new form in 2018.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.
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''Bagel Brain'' (AKA Kilroy Smythe Umbrick) is an anonymous writer, primarily one of bizzare or surreal fanfics.
His works so far include:
* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA Garfield Has A Bad Day): A bizarre TrollFic written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It'')
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]]
!Tropes common to his works:
* LampshadingHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's Dream''.
His works so far include:
* ''Fanfic/GarfieldInAlongCameASplut'' (AKA Garfield Has A Bad Day): A bizarre TrollFic written by him in his early days. He considers it to be an OldShame and permanently deleted it from the internet.
* ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'' (AKA ''Steamed Hams'' but It Stars Bambi and Doesn't Actually Have Any Steamed Hams In It'')
* ''Fanfic/BambisDream'': A gentle, surrealistic story devoid of dialogue, centered on Bambi [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin having a dream.]]
!Tropes common to his works:
* LampshadingHanging: Very, very prominent in ''Along Came A Splut'', somewhat present in ''Creamed Cherries'', but downplayed in ''Bambi's Dream''.
