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* TokenWhite: So far, [[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop Kate Bishop]] is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.
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* TokenWhite: So far, [[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop [[Characters/MarvelComicsKateBishop Kate Bishop]] is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.
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* TokenWhite: So far, ComicBook/KateBishop is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.
* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writer Creator/GabbyRivera.
* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writer Creator/GabbyRivera.
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* TokenWhite: So far, ComicBook/KateBishop [[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop Kate Bishop]] is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.
* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writerCreator/GabbyRivera.Creator/GabbyRivera.
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* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writer
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* HardLight: Sotomayor University has a hard light hologram system (provided by Holotech Ed. Inc.) that's used for simulations in lessons. Professor Douglas warns America that any mishaps within a simulation - such as being hit by a poison arrow or falling into a frozen screen - will have some real consequences, but students will then be teleported to the nurses's office.
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* OffModel: Due to the revolving cast of artists, pencilers and inkers, most issues tend to draw America contrary to her canon appearance. Her face usually has strong, sharp facial features, but some artists will draw her with a more feminine appearance. Other artists exaggerate her features and make her look very masculine. This is most obvious in the seventh issue, where the pages are divided between six different artists.
** It's most prominent with the issues done by Ramon Villalobos, where America's face varies heavily between pages. Characters also suffer from bouts of poor anatomy, incorrect body sizes and varying heights.
** The first issue features America effortlessly backhanding a bomb. But her image is cut off before reaching the panel, making it look like she's doesn't have anything below her waist.
** It's most prominent with the issues done by Ramon Villalobos, where America's face varies heavily between pages. Characters also suffer from bouts of poor anatomy, incorrect body sizes and varying heights.
** The first issue features America effortlessly backhanding a bomb. But her image is cut off before reaching the panel, making it look like she's doesn't have anything below her waist.
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* ShoutOut: The name ''Leelumultipass Phi Theta Beta'' is a reference to the Multipass scene in ''Film/TheFifthElement.''
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Sotomayor University, the fictional AcademyOfAdventure introduced in the first issue, is named for [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonia_Sotomayor Sonia Sotomayor]], the first woman of color appointed to the [[UsefulNotes/AmericanCourts United States Supreme Court]]. There's a hologram of her projected above the main gate.
** The name ''Leelumultipass Phi Theta Beta'' is a reference to the Multipass scene in ''Film/TheFifthElement.''
** Sotomayor University, the fictional AcademyOfAdventure introduced in the first issue, is named for [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonia_Sotomayor Sonia Sotomayor]], the first woman of color appointed to the [[UsefulNotes/AmericanCourts United States Supreme Court]]. There's a hologram of her projected above the main gate.
** The name ''Leelumultipass Phi Theta Beta'' is a reference to the Multipass scene in ''Film/TheFifthElement.''
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* TokenWhite: So far, ComicBook/KateBishop is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.
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* TokenWhite: So far, ComicBook/KateBishop is the only major white character to appear and not be an antagonist.antagonist.
* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writer Creator/GabbyRivera.
* VoxPops: The first issue opens with a page of interviewees talking about America Chavez. They include Storm, Miles Morales, Loki, the Black Cat, Kate Bishop and a CreatorCameo by writer Creator/GabbyRivera.
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* CreatorCameo: There's a woman on the first page of the first issue who looks just like the author. She praises America Chavez, stating that "America is our future."
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* CreatorCameo: There's a woman on the first page of the The first issue who looks just like the author. She praises opens with a page of VoxPops offering very positive views on America Chavez, stating herself. One interviewee is clearly drawn as the comic's writer, Creator/GabbyRivera, and states that "America is our future."
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* BadBoss: Exterminatrix is keen to remind her surveillance expert that if he can't find America, he will have [[YouHaveFailedMe failed her for the very last time]]. Just to drive the message home, she grabs his shirt and lifts him out of his chair while delivering the threat.
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* AcademyOfAdventure: Satomayor University has a ridiculous amount of amenities, despite apparently being an arts college. This includes a chamber that can create HardLight technology for simulations. The school also accepts people from other dimensions, as well as people with superpowers.
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* AcademyOfAdventure: Satomayor Sotomayor University has a ridiculous amount of amenities, despite apparently being an arts college. This includes a chamber that can create HardLight technology for simulations. The school also accepts people from other dimensions, as well as people with superpowers.
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The eponymous [[Characters/YoungAvengersTitleTeam America Chavez]] is a queer Latina superhero who's been on multiple hero teams and saved countless worlds. But now, she's hanging up the cape to focus on her studies at [[AcademyOfAdventure Sotomayor University.]]
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''America'' is a 2017 comic book series from Creator/MarvelComics, starring the eponymous ComicBook/AmericaChavez. America is a queer Latina superhero, who's been on multiple hero teams and saved countless worlds. But now, she's hanging up the cape to focus on her studies at [[AcademyOfAdventure Sotomayor University.]]
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''America'' is a 2017 comic book series from Creator/MarvelComics, starring the Creator/MarvelComics. It's written by Creator/GabbyRivera, initially with art by Joe Quinones, Joe Rivera and Paolo Rivera. Color art is initially by José Villarrubia.
The eponymousComicBook/AmericaChavez. [[Characters/YoungAvengersTitleTeam America Chavez]] is a queer Latina superhero, superhero who's been on multiple hero teams and saved countless worlds. But now, she's hanging up the cape to focus on her studies at [[AcademyOfAdventure Sotomayor University.]]
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The series is written by Gabby Rivera.
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''America'' is a 2017 comic book starring the eponymous ComicBook/AmericaChavez. America is a queer Latina superhero, who's been on multiple hero teams and saved countless worlds. But now, she's hanging up the cape to focus on her studies at [[AcademyOfAdventure Sotomayor University.]]
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''America'' is a 2017 comic book series from Creator/MarvelComics, starring the eponymous ComicBook/AmericaChavez. America is a queer Latina superhero, who's been on multiple hero teams and saved countless worlds. But now, she's hanging up the cape to focus on her studies at [[AcademyOfAdventure Sotomayor University.]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:The Exterminatrix, Oubliette Midas, is behind almost everything that happens]].
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Author Appeal is defined as a 'gimmick or kink'. The presence of a largely WOC cast in a series starring a queer WOC shouldn't qualify.
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* AuthorAppeal: Gabby likes women of color, particularly if they're Latina. Nearly every single issue introduces one.
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* CastFullOfGay: America, Lisa, Magdalena, her family, X'andria, Monae (and possibly the rest of the Betas) are all lesbians, while Prodigy is bisexual.
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* CastFullOfGay: America, Lisa, Magdalena, her family, X'andria, X'andria and Monae (and possibly the rest of the Betas) are all lesbians, while Prodigy is bisexual.
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* LatinoIsBrown: A large portion of the cast consists of Latinas, and America's backstory shows her going through various places in Central and South America. Every one of these people are brown-skinned.
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The series is written by Gabby Rivera. Gabby has also written an LGBT novel, ''Juliet Takes a Breath,'' which, like this comic, deals with a brown lesbian figuring out her life on a journey of self-discovery.
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The series is written by Gabby Rivera. Gabby has also written an LGBT novel, ''Juliet Takes a Breath,'' which, like this comic, deals with a brown lesbian figuring out her life on a journey of self-discovery.
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* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: Every non-white antagonist is only acting in a negative manner because of circumstances - the Guerillas only kidnapped Lisa to get America's attention and have her save Malixta, and Magdalena only kidnapped America because Arcade was using her father as leverage. This even extends to [[{{Chupacabra}} La Legion]], whose presence on Fuertona was not meant to be malicious, and simply lacked the ability to communicate their goals to the natives.
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* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: Every non-white antagonist is only acting in a negative manner because of circumstances - -- the Guerillas only kidnapped Lisa to get America's attention and have her save Malixta, and Magdalena only kidnapped America because Arcade was using her father as leverage. This even extends to [[{{Chupacabra}} La Legion]], whose presence on Fuertona was not meant to be malicious, and simply lacked the ability to communicate their goals to the natives.