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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: For the first chunk of the story, Christine splits POV with Stef, and in the second half of the story Christine does so much to help out around Dorley that it's a full on running gag.
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* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: With Paige.]]
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler: With Paige.]]
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* LipstickLesbian: Paige is extremely feminine and while she's bisexual, she openly states that she's only interested in men for quick hookups, not relationships [[spoiler: and soon after she gets back together with Christine to whom she is completely devoted.]]
* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: With Christine.]]
* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: With Christine.]]
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.[[/spoiler]]
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.[[/spoiler]]]]
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.[[/spoiler]]
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* Foil: He's one to Stef, although the ways don't become fully clear until late in the story when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he's also a closeted trans girl.]]
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* Foil: {{Foil}}: He's one to Stef, although the ways don't become fully clear until late in the story when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he's also a closeted trans girl.]]
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: [[spoiler: As he comes to terms with becoming Bethany, he often gets insecure about progressing slower than Steph or the fact that Will is a closeted trans girl as well.]]
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The uh...mechanics of the cult he grew up in mean that he and Edy are, at farthest, cousins, but she believes he's actually her half brother, although she still hasn't told him.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: He attempts suicide at one point, but is saved by Frankie and talked back by his sponsor and Trevor.]]
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* Foil: He's one to Stef, although the ways don't become fully clear until late in the story when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he's also a closeted trans girl.]]
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[[folder:Edy]]
!Edy
Adam's sponsor and Maria's girlfriend. She also grew up in the same Cult as him.
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.
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!Edy
Adam's sponsor and Maria's girlfriend. She also grew up in the same Cult as him.
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: The way the Cult works, Edy is at farthest Adam's cousin, but she believes he's actually her half-brother. Not that she's told him.
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* BestFriends: With Amy.
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* BestFriends: With BestFriend: Amy.
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One of Melissa's childhood friends, who has been carrying a torch for her since they were teenagers.
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[[folder:Lorna]]
!Lorna
Vicky's girlfriend and an out trans woman, who Vicky steals meds for.
!Lorna
Vicky's girlfriend and an out trans woman, who Vicky steals meds for.
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!Lorna
Vicky's girlfriend
!Rachel Gray-Wallace
Shahida's childhood friend, who became part of the friend group with her, Amy and
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* HappilyMarried: Married to a woman named Belinda, and by all accounts she adores her.
* OnlySaneMan: [[spoiler: Sees herself as this after Disclosure. She eventually gets over it.]]
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[[folder: Elle]]
!Elle Lambert
A wealthy heiress who bankrolled Aunt Bea, both in her takeover of Dorley and in the ongoing program.
* TheSponsor: She pays for most of Bea's operations.
!Elle Lambert
A wealthy heiress who bankrolled Aunt Bea, both in her takeover of Dorley and in the ongoing program.
* TheSponsor: She pays for most of Bea's operations.
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[[folder: Elle]]
!Elle Lambert
A wealthy heiress who bankrolled Aunt Bea, both in her takeoverAmy]]
!Amy Woodley
The fourth member ofDorley the high school friend group with Rachel, Shahida and in Melissa.
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: [[spoiler: Despite being theongoing program.
* TheSponsor: She pays for most of Bea's operations.high school friend group's token straight girl, she quickly starts dating Jane when she gets Disclosed to.]]
!Elle Lambert
A wealthy heiress who bankrolled Aunt Bea, both in her takeover
!Amy Woodley
The fourth member of
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[[folder:Russ]]
!Russ Vogel
Stef's childhood best friend, and Mark's younger brother.
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* OutOfFocus: Russ and Stef fall out after Mark's disappearance, in great part over Stef's insistence that Mark is alive.
!Russ Vogel
Stef's childhood best friend, and Mark's younger brother.
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* OutOfFocus: Russ and Stef fall out after Mark's disappearance, in great part over Stef's insistence that Mark is alive.
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!Russ Vogel
Stef's childhood best friend,
!Lorna
Vicky's girlfriend and
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[[folder:Valerie]]
!Valerie
Valerie [[spoiler: formerly Vincent]], a woman who was kidnapped and transformed under Grandmother's Regime.
* LostLenore: She is one to Beatrice.
* SoleSurvivor: She is, to the best of her knowledge, the only surviving woman who was subjected to Grandmother's torture. [[spoiler: She eventually learns that Bea is alive.]]
[[folder:Valerie]]
!Valerie
Valerie [[spoiler: formerly Vincent]], a woman who was kidnapped and transformed under Grandmother's Regime.
* LostLenore: She is one to Beatrice.
* SoleSurvivor: She is, to the best of her knowledge, the only surviving woman who was subjected to Grandmother's torture. [[spoiler: She eventually learns that Bea is alive.]]
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!Valerie
Valerie [[spoiler: formerly Vincent]], a woman
!Elle Lambert
A wealthy heiress who
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!Dorthy
Dorthy, AKA Grandmother, the leader of the previous, much more brutal, regime, who was ousted by Bea.
* EvilMatriarch: Oh yeah
!Dorthy
Dorthy, AKA Grandmother, the leader of the previous, much more brutal, regime, who was ousted by Bea.
* EvilMatriarch: Oh yeah
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Dorthy, AKA Grandmother, the leader of the previous, much more brutal, regime, who was ousted by Bea.
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Stef's childhood best friend, and Mark's younger brother.
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[[folder: Frankie]]
!Frances (Frankie)
A violent woman who was taken in by Grandmother and turned into one of her Sponsors, which in her version of Dorley more resemble brutal torturers.
* DefectorFromDecadence: By the time the story picks up at the Smyth-Farrow household, she's exhausted of being dependent on Grandmother and no longer wants to torture anyone, even if she continues out of fear of reprisal.
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!Frances (Frankie)
A violent woman who was taken in by Grandmother and turned into one of her Sponsors, which in her version of Dorley more resemble brutal torturers.
* DefectorFromDecadence: By the time the story picks up at the Smyth-Farrow household, she's exhausted of being dependent on Grandmother and no longer wants to torture anyone, even if she continues out of fear of reprisal.
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!Frances (Frankie)
A violent
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!Valerie
Valerie [[spoiler: formerly Vincent]], a woman who was
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!Trevor
A PMC working for Dorley Hall. He's kidnapped when Declan is intercepted and subjected to the same treatment.
!Trevor
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!Dorthy
Dorthy, AKA Grandmother, the
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!Frances (Frankie)
A violent woman who was taken in by Grandmother and turned into one of her Sponsors, which in her version of Dorley more resemble brutal torturers.
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* MirrorCharacter: To a lot of characters, but most notably the Sponsors at the current version Dorley.
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[[folder: Trevor]]
!Trevor
A PMC working for Dorley Hall. He's kidnapped when Declan is intercepted and subjected to the same treatment.
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!Frances (Frankie)
A violent woman who was taken in by Grandmother and turned into one of her Sponsors, which in her version of Dorley more resemble brutal torturers.
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* MirrorCharacter: To a lot of characters, but most notably the Sponsors at the current version Dorley.
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!Trevor
A PMC working for Dorley Hall. He's kidnapped when Declan is intercepted and subjected to the same treatment.
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