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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', is similarly a noblewoman and senior officer of the local Imperial military, and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to physically force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him. It helps that the Grakkan Empire is generally TheKingdom rather than TheEmpire, so the two of them are basically on the same side from day one.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', is similarly a noblewoman and senior officer of the local Imperial military, and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to physically force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him. It helps that the Grakkan Empire is generally TheKingdom TheGoodKingdom rather than TheEmpire, so the two of them are basically on the same side from day one.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', is similarly a noblewoman and senior officer of the local Imperial military, and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to physically force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', is similarly a noblewoman and senior officer of the local Imperial military, and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to physically force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him. It helps that the Grakkan Empire is generally TheKingdom rather than TheEmpire, so the two of them are basically on the same side from day one.
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!!Lieutenant Commander Lady Serena Holz
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* OutrankingYourJob: {{Inverted}}: she's only a lieutenant when first encountered, but she routinely takes on jobs more suited to a rear admiral like commanding major pirate-hunting missions.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to actively force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', is similarly a noblewoman and senior officer of the local Imperial military, and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to actively physically force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him.
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: She hired Hiro to train a special fleet exclusively for pirate hunting, but since the fleet's composition was ill-suited for most anti-pirate forays (taking a battleship or heavy cruiser into an AsteroidThicket is an expensive form of suicide), she asks him for options. He suggests disguising the larger ships as asteroids and buying up a civilian freighter, which then conveniently has "engine trouble" in areas where pirates are known to operate in large numbers. '''200 pirate ships are completely obliterated before the plan stopped being effective!''' [[LaserGuidedKarma This prompts Serena's superior officers to reimburse her 5 million Ener purchase as legitimate military spending,]] [[CrazyPrepared with plans to use the freighter as a troop transport when its effectiveness as bait ends.]]
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: She hired Hiro to train a special fleet exclusively for pirate hunting, but since the fleet's composition was ill-suited for most anti-pirate forays (taking a battleship or heavy cruiser into an AsteroidThicket is an expensive form of suicide), she asks him for options. He suggests disguising the larger ships as asteroids and buying up a civilian freighter, which then conveniently has "engine trouble" in areas where pirates are known to operate in large numbers. '''200 pirate ships are completely obliterated before the plan stopped being effective!''' [[LaserGuidedKarma This prompts Serena's superior officers to reimburse her 5 million Ener purchase as legitimate military spending,]] spending]], [[CrazyPrepared with plans to use the freighter as a troop transport when its effectiveness as bait ends.]]
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* {{Expy}}: She's [[Manga/AkameGaKill Esdeath]] [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE!]], with a few tweaks to her personality that make her a bit more sympathetic.
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* VirtuousCharacterCopy: Physically she's based heavily on General Esdeath from ''Manga/AkameGaKill'', and she has a similar EntitledToHaveYou unrequited crush on the main character. Unlike Esdeath, though, she actually comprehends that he doesn't return her feelings, painful though that knowledge is, and doesn't try to actively force him to do things he doesn't want to, whereas Esdeath is a full-blown {{Yandere}} who literally kidnapped the protagonist after falling in LoveAtFirstSight with him.
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* HaremSeeker: Once he learns about the local custom where a woman who willingly sets foot in a man's spaceship is pretty much making herself sexually available to him, he still has no hesitation about asking pretty women unto his ship to be in his crew. It's not ''just'' the sex he's interested in, though: he does look for a crew that makes his merc career easier with the members' respective skill sets, even seeking Dr. Shouko to deal with unexpected medical emergencies.
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* HaremSeeker: Once he learns about the local custom where a woman who willingly sets foot in a man's spaceship is pretty much making herself sexually available to him, he still has no hesitation about asking pretty women unto his ship to be in his crew. It's not ''just'' the sex he's interested in, though: he does look for a crew that makes his merc career easier with the members' respective skill sets, even seeking Dr. Shouko to deal with unexpected medical emergencies. He also starts making any potential hires aware that sex with him is ''optional''.
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* ADogNamedDog: A {{Robot|Maid}} {{Meido}} named Mei.
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* ADogNamedDog: A {{Robot|Maid}} {{Meido}} named Mei.
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* ACupAngst: Downplayed in that she's not really ashamed of having a small bust, but will get embarassed when Hiro points it out.
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* ACupAngst: Downplayed in that she's not really ashamed of having a small bust, but will get embarassed when Hiro points it out.
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