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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually consider themselves their own family throughout the series. Following the Battle of Beacon, both Blake and Weiss explicitly state they have come to view her fellow teammates as the real family they never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually consider themselves see each other as their own family throughout the series. Following the Battle of Beacon, both Blake and Weiss explicitly state they have come to view her their fellow teammates as the real family they never had.had thanks to their close relationship.
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** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material tries hiding her cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
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** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 after the Battle of Beacon are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material tries hiding her cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually consider themselves their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loves her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she has come to view her fellow teammates as the real family she never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually consider themselves their own family. family throughout the series. Following the Battle of Beacon, both Blake tells Sun she loves her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, and Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she has state they have come to view her fellow teammates as the real family she they never had.
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* FieldPromotion: While they originally went to Beacon Academy to become Huntresses and get their licenses, the fall of Beacon caused the school to close with Team RWBY and the remaining members of Team JNPR traveling the world to find the people responsible while most students transferred to other academies like Shade. By the time they reach Atlas, General James Ironwood states that the dangers they've faced during the Battle of Beacon, in the wilds of Anima, and against the forces of Salem, means they're not functioning at the level of students, they're functioning as Huntsmen. Thus, he promotes them to fully licenced Huntsmen on the basis of their field experience even though they haven't completed their schooling.
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* FieldPromotion: While they originally went to Beacon Academy to become Huntresses and get obtain their licenses, the fall of Beacon caused the school to close with Team RWBY and the remaining members of Team JNPR traveling the world to find the people responsible while most students transferred to other academies like Shade. By the time they reach Atlas, General James Ironwood states that the dangers they've faced during the Battle of Beacon, in the wilds of Anima, and against the forces of Salem, means they're not functioning at the level of students, they're functioning as Huntsmen. Thus, he promotes them to fully licenced Huntsmen on the basis of their field experience even though they haven't completed their schooling.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually see each other as their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she has come to view her fellow teammates to be her real family thanks to their close relationship.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually see each other as consider themselves their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved loves her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she has come to view her fellow teammates to be her as the real family thanks to their close relationship.she never had.
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** Blake's identity as a Faunus is a climactic reveal for the first volume. However, post-Volume 4 promotional artwork doesn't even attempt to hide Blake's Faunus identity.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material tries to hide her cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material tries to hide her cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
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** Blake's identity as a Faunus is a climactic reveal for the first volume. However, post-Volume 4 promotional artwork doesn't even attempt never attempts to hide Blake's Faunus identity.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material triesto hide hiding her cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material tries
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[[WMG:[[center:[-''Franchise/{{RWBY}}'' [[Characters/{{RWBY}} Main Character Index]]\\
''[[Characters/RWBYTheHeroes The Heroes]]:'' '''Team RWBY''' | [[Characters/RWBYTeamJNPR Team JNPR]] | [[Characters/RWBYOzpinAndOscar Ozpin and Oscar]]\\
''[[Characters/RWBYRemnant Remnant]]:'' [[Characters/RWBYEasternSanus Sanus (Eastern)]] | [[Characters/RWBYWesternSanus Sanus (Western)]] | [[Characters/RWBYAnima Anima]] | [[Characters/RWBYSolitas Solitas]]\\
''Antagonists:'' [[Characters/RWBYSalemsFaction Salem's Faction]] ([[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]] | [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]]) | [[Characters/RWBYWhiteFang White Fang]] | [[Characters/RWBYGrimmBestiary Grimm Bestiary]]\\
''Beyond Remnant:'' [[Characters/RWBYTheEverAfter The Ever After]]-]]]]]
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''[[Characters/RWBYTheHeroes The Heroes]]:'' '''Team RWBY''' | [[Characters/RWBYTeamJNPR Team JNPR]] | [[Characters/RWBYOzpinAndOscar Ozpin and Oscar]]\\
''[[Characters/RWBYRemnant Remnant]]:'' [[Characters/RWBYEasternSanus Sanus (Eastern)]] | [[Characters/RWBYWesternSanus Sanus (Western)]] | [[Characters/RWBYAnima Anima]] | [[Characters/RWBYSolitas Solitas]]\\
''Antagonists:'' [[Characters/RWBYSalemsFaction Salem's Faction]] ([[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]] | [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]]) | [[Characters/RWBYWhiteFang White Fang]] | [[Characters/RWBYGrimmBestiary Grimm Bestiary]]\\
''Beyond Remnant:'' [[Characters/RWBYTheEverAfter The Ever After]]-]]]]]
[[WMG:[[center:[-''Other Media:'' Characters/RWBYIceQueendom - Characters/RWBYTheOfficialManga - Characters/RWBYJusticeLeague - Characters/JusticeLeagueXRWBYSuperHeroesAndHuntsmen - Characters/RWBYChibi -]]]]]
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''[[Characters/RWBYTheHeroes
''[[Characters/RWBYRemnant Remnant]]:'' [[Characters/RWBYEasternSanus Sanus (Eastern)]] | [[Characters/RWBYWesternSanus Sanus (Western)]] | [[Characters/RWBYAnima Anima]] | [[Characters/RWBYSolitas Solitas]]\\
''Antagonists:'' [[Characters/RWBYSalemsFaction Salem's Faction]] ([[Characters/RWBYSalem Salem]] | [[Characters/RWBYCinderFall Cinder Fall]]) | [[Characters/RWBYWhiteFang White Fang]] | [[Characters/RWBYGrimmBestiary Grimm Bestiary]]\\
''Beyond Remnant:'' [[Characters/RWBYTheEverAfter The Ever After]]-]]]]]
[[WMG:[[center:[-''Other Media:'' Characters/RWBYIceQueendom - Characters/RWBYTheOfficialManga - Characters/RWBYJusticeLeague - Characters/JusticeLeagueXRWBYSuperHeroesAndHuntsmen - Characters/RWBYChibi -]]]]]
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually see each other as their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she considers her fellow teammates to be her real family as opposed to Jacques.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls eventually see each other as their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states during the Anima and Atlas arcs that she considers has come to view her fellow teammates to be her real family as opposed thanks to Jacques.their close relationship.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls end up becoming their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states to both Yang and Jacques that she considers Team RWBY to be the loving family she never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Though Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls end up becoming eventually see each other as their own family. Following the Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Later on, Weiss explicitly states to both Yang during the Anima and Jacques Atlas arcs that she considers Team RWBY her fellow teammates to be the loving her real family she never had.as opposed to Jacques.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss explicitly states to both Yang and Jacques that she considers Team RWBY to be the loving family she never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters during the team's formation, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In Following the Anima arc, Battle of Beacon, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Later on, Weiss explicitly states to both Yang and Jacques that she considers Team RWBY to be the loving family she never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss considers Team RWBY as the loving family she never had, as demonstrated when she explicitly tells Yang and Jacques as such.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when during the team is formed, team's formation, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss explicitly states to both Yang and Jacques that she considers Team RWBY as to be the loving family she never had, as demonstrated when she explicitly tells Yang and Jacques as such.had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss comes to view the rest of Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had, as demonstrated when she explicitly states to Jacques the team is her family during the Atlas arc.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss comes to view the rest of considers Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had, as demonstrated when she explicitly states to tells Yang and Jacques the team is her family during the Atlas arc.as such.
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** Blake's identity as a Faunus is a climactic reveal for Volume 1. However, post-Volume 4 promotional artwork doesn't even attempt to hide Blake's Faunus identity.
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** Blake's identity as a Faunus is a climactic reveal for Volume 1.the first volume. However, post-Volume 4 promotional artwork doesn't even attempt to hide Blake's Faunus identity.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss, who has a strained relationship with Jacques, comes to view the rest of Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In the Anima arc, Blake tells Sun she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss, who has a strained relationship with Jacques, Weiss comes to view the rest of Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had.had, as demonstrated when she explicitly states to Jacques the team is her family during the Atlas arc.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In Volume 4, a tearful Blake admits to Sun that she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone, which is why she had to flee to protect them from Adam. In Volume 7, the team gathers around Weiss when she confronts her father and openly declares that they're her family, not her friends. Team RWBY is also disturbed and unsettled to learn that the Ace-Ops views themselves as professional partners, not friends or family, with Yang questioning how it's possible for a team to go through so much together and ''not'' bond as a family.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In Volume 4, a tearful Blake admits to tells Sun that she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone, which is why she had anyone. Meanwhile, Weiss, who has a strained relationship with Jacques, comes to flee to protect them from Adam. In Volume 7, view the team gathers around Weiss when she confronts her father and openly declares that they're her family, not her friends. rest of Team RWBY is also disturbed and unsettled to learn as the loving family that the Ace-Ops views themselves as professional partners, not friends or family, with Yang questioning how it's possible for a team to go through so much together and ''not'' bond as a family.she never had.
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* FunWithAcronyms: The team name RWBY is made up of the member's first names and can be pronounced as "Ruby".
* FamilyOfChoice: Weiss comes from a broken family (Father is an abusive Gold Digger, mother took to the bottle to cope, younger brother openly hates her, Cool Big Sis off with the military) and comes to view the rest of Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had.
* FamilyOfChoice: Weiss comes from a broken family (Father is an abusive Gold Digger, mother took to the bottle to cope, younger brother openly hates her, Cool Big Sis off with the military) and comes to view the rest of Team RWBY as the loving family that she never had.
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* FunWithAcronyms: The team name RWBY is made up of the member's first names and can be pronounced as "Ruby".
"Ruby". Ruby acknowledges in-universe that this does cause confusion.
* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In Volume 4, a tearful Blake admits to Sun that she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone, which is why she had to flee to protect them from Adam. In Volume 7, the team gathers around Weisscomes from a broken family (Father is an abusive Gold Digger, mother took to the bottle to cope, younger brother when she confronts her father and openly hates her, Cool Big Sis off with the military) and comes to view the rest of declares that they're her family, not her friends. Team RWBY as the loving family is also disturbed and unsettled to learn that she never had.the Ace-Ops views themselves as professional partners, not friends or family, with Yang questioning how it's possible for a team to go through so much together and ''not'' bond as a family.
* FamilyOfChoice: Although Ruby and Yang are already sisters when the team is formed, the four girls end up becoming their own family. In Volume 4, a tearful Blake admits to Sun that she loved her team like she never thought she could love anyone, which is why she had to flee to protect them from Adam. In Volume 7, the team gathers around Weiss
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** Initially a big reveal near the end of Volume 1, early Volume 4 artwork for Blake still hid the fact that she is a faunus, but post-Volume 4 material no longer attempts to pass Blake off as human.
** Post-Volume 3 material does a [[BlatantLies great job]] at hiding Yang losing her arm at the end of Volume 3.
** Post-Volume 3 material does a [[BlatantLies great job]] at hiding Yang losing her arm at the end of Volume 3.
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** Initially Blake's identity as a big Faunus is a climactic reveal near the end of for Volume 1, early Volume 4 artwork for Blake still hid the fact that she is a faunus, but 1. However, post-Volume 4 promotional artwork doesn't even attempt to hide Blake's Faunus identity.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional materialno longer attempts tries to pass Blake off as human.
** Post-Volume 3 material does a [[BlatantLies great job]] at hiding Yang losinghide her arm at the end of Volume 3.cyberarm, other material, include merchandise, doesn't even try.
** Yang's permanent injuries in Volume 3 are a shocking event of that volume. However, while some post-Volume 3 promotional material
** Post-Volume 3 material does a [[BlatantLies great job]] at hiding Yang losing
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* PlayfulCatSmile: After they confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* PlayfulCatSmile: After they their confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* PlayfulCatSmile: After the confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* PlayfulCatSmile: After the they confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler:She becomes one to Blake after the confess their true feelings to each other in the Ever After.]]
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler:She becomes one to Blake after the they confess their true feelings to each other in the Ever After.]]
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* CatSmile: After the confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* PlayfulCatSmile: After the confrontation with Ilia, when Sun strains his injury trying to argue with Blake, she involuntarily dissolves into giggles that leave her with a [[https://i.imgur.com/fCMMl4i.jpg wavy smile on her face]].
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* DisposableDecoyDoppelganger: Blake's Semblance allows her to create copies of herself to escape attacks or tank hits that she would otherwise be unable to handle, [[spoiler:like decapitation strikes from vengeful exes]].
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