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* MonsterOfTheWeek: Plenty of this comes around when dealing with relatively under-developed planets. One monster happened to be a giant dinosaur.
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* MonsterOfTheWeek: Plenty of this comes around when dealing with relatively under-developed underdeveloped planets. One monster happened to be a giant dinosaur.
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* OnTheNextEpisodeOfCatchPhrase: The English-language version had "See you next time on the railways!" (usually said cheerily by Manabu), though "We're going to encounter something at the next station" was what was used on the subtitles.
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* OnTheNextEpisodeOfCatchPhrase: The English-language version had "See you next time on the railways!" (usually said cheerily by Manabu), though "We're going to encounter something at the next station" was what was used on in the subtitles.
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** The oversized railway howitzers count, but with little armor, they are also [[GlassCannon vulnerable to counter attacks]].
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** The oversized railway howitzers count, but with little armor, they are also [[GlassCannon vulnerable to counter attacks]].counterattacks]].
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: As a sexaroid assigned to the platoon, Yuki doesn't really feel like part of the team at first because she's just programmed to do her job and can be easily be replaced if she gets destroyed. Manabu, however, doesn't buy this and helps her to see that she's more than this. And a person resembling Tochiro Oyama (Kei Oyama, who is most certainly a relative) tells Yuki that her soul is human, even if her body is mechanical.
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: As a sexaroid assigned to the platoon, Yuki doesn't really feel like part of the team at first because she's just programmed to do her job and can be easily be replaced if she gets destroyed. Manabu, however, doesn't buy this and helps her to see that she's more than this. And a person resembling Tochiro Oyama (Kei Oyama, who is most certainly a relative) tells Yuki that her soul is human, even if her body is mechanical.
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** It is stated that the trains run on magnetic fields laid throughout the galaxy. That explains why derailments would be bad: If there are no tracks holding up the train, the train would plummet towards the nearest celestial body.
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** It is stated that the trains run on magnetic fields laid throughout the galaxy. That explains why derailments would be bad: If there are no tracks holding up the train, the train would plummet towards toward the nearest celestial body.
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* AlternateUniverse: Alien invaders seem to love leaping out of black holes to attack trains in Manabu's universe.
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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverse:
** Alien invaders seem to love leaping out of black holes to attack trains in Manabu's universe.
** Alien invaders seem to love leaping out of black holes to attack trains in Manabu's universe.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: One of Manabu's key character traits is that he tends to ignore orders that he thinks are wrong or go against his personal ethics. Additionally, in the penultimate episode of the first season, the whole of Sirius Platoon gets back together to save the day, despite having been broken up and Captain Bulge having been officially booted from the force. Said unemployment means that Bulge doesn't have to worry about getting punished while away from Planet Destiny. And strategic commander Todo decides to screw the regulations when the corrupt and incompetent intelligence general hijacks the control center (Todo sticks up the general at gunpoint and then orders the security guards to escort the general out of the room in handcuffs).
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight:
** One of Manabu's key character traits is that he tends to ignore orders that he thinks are wrong or go against his personal ethics. Additionally, in the penultimate episode of the first season, the whole of Sirius Platoon gets back together to save the day, despite having been broken up and Captain Bulge having been officially booted from the force. Said unemployment means that Bulge doesn't have to worry about getting punished while away from Planet Destiny. And strategic commander Todo decides to screw the regulations when the corrupt and incompetent intelligence general hijacks the control center (Todo sticks up the general at gunpoint and then orders the security guards to escort the general out of the room in handcuffs).
** One of Manabu's key character traits is that he tends to ignore orders that he thinks are wrong or go against his personal ethics. Additionally, in the penultimate episode of the first season, the whole of Sirius Platoon gets back together to save the day, despite having been broken up and Captain Bulge having been officially booted from the force. Said unemployment means that Bulge doesn't have to worry about getting punished while away from Planet Destiny. And strategic commander Todo decides to screw the regulations when the corrupt and incompetent intelligence general hijacks the control center (Todo sticks up the general at gunpoint and then orders the security guards to escort the general out of the room in handcuffs).
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* WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief: [[ConversedTrope Discussed]] in the ADR director and voice actor commentary for the final episode on the English-language release disc. The ADR director notes that he's heard people who've worked on the show wonder about how a train would have steam when it's in space-- but, then again, how would a ''train'' even travel through space in the first place?
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* WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief: WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief:
** [[ConversedTrope Discussed]] in the ADR director and voice actor commentary for the final episode on the English-language release disc. The ADR director notes that he's heard people who've worked on the show wonder about how a train would have steam when it's in space-- but, then again, how would a ''train'' even travel through space in the first place?
** [[ConversedTrope Discussed]] in the ADR director and voice actor commentary for the final episode on the English-language release disc. The ADR director notes that he's heard people who've worked on the show wonder about how a train would have steam when it's in space-- but, then again, how would a ''train'' even travel through space in the first place?
