Gadeel: I do find it a very interesting read, but I find the grammatical errors rather distracting, and I'm not talking about Cain and Hotaru's barely passable attempts at speaking High and Low Gothic respectively, otherwise, I'm having fun with this.
A spinoff of sorts exists taking snippet from the original Spacebattles thread that spawned this fic her "[1]". Although if you really want some gems you have to look up the actual thread at Spacebattles. (be prepared to feel sorry for Fulgrim tho...)
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