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The villain's plan to destroy Umbris would destroy the nearby planets in the system (presumbly Veldin, Kerwan, Aridia, Rilgar, Gaspar, Batalia, Pokitaru, Quartu and Kalebo II), NOT the entire galaxy. Someone should edit that.
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The villain\'s plan to destroy Umbris would destroy the nearby planets in the system (presumbly Veldin, Kerwan, Aridia, Rilgar, Gaspar, Batalia, Pokitaru, Quartu and Kalebo III), NOT the entire galaxy. Someone should edit that.
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IIRC, The Indianapolis already delivered the components to Tinian by the time it sank.
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IIRC, The Indianapolis already delivered the components to Tinian by the time it sank. And the sub that sank it came from a routine supply trip to Rabaul.
