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I have a grammar question about a line in the article: \"Soon, it was assaulted by a mob, and Smith was shot and killed, along with his brother Hyrum.\"

Shouldn\'t the grammar be \"Soon, it was assaulted by a mob, and Smith and his brother Hyrum were shot and killed\" to make the article flow better? Could someone with edit privileges grammar fix or check that line?
Changed line(s) 1 from:
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I have a grammar question about a line in the article: \
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I have a grammar question about a line in the article: \\\"Soon, it was assaulted by a mob, and Smith was shot and killed, along with his brother Hyrum.\\\"

Shouldn\\\'t the grammar be \\\"Soon, it was assaulted by a mob, and Smith and his brother Hyrum were shot and killed\\\" to make the article flow better? Could someone grammar fix or check that line?
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