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A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \
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A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \\\"doesn\\\'t understand people, I try and I try but I don\\\'t\\\", he has also said that he is insane because he has to much dragon blood to be healthy. There are other reason that being a dragon child is not all sunshine and roses but I just got up ten minutes ago.
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that at the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\". Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that at the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\". Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
Changed line(s) 10 from:
n
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \
to:
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \\\"doesn\\\'t understand people, I try and I try but I don\\\'t\\\", he has also said that he is insane because he has to much dragon blood to be healthy. There are other reason that being a dragon child is not all sunshine and roses but I just got up ten minutes ago.
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that at the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\". Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that at the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\". Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
Changed line(s) 10 from:
n
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \
to:
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \\\"doesn\\\'t understand people, I try and I try but I don\\\'t\\\", he has also said that he is insane because he has to much dragon blood to be healthy. There are other reason that being a dragon child is not all sunshine and roses but I just got up ten minutes ago.
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that At the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\", Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at, that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that At the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\", Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
Changed line(s) 10 from:
n
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \
to:
A) In this AU, because he is a dragon-child, Zuko cannot lie with out it hurting him, he has stated plainly that he \\\"doesn\\\'t understand people, I try and I try but I don\\\'t\\\", he has also said that he is insane because he has to much dragon blood to be healthy. There are other reason that being a dragon child is not all sunshine and roses but I just got up ten minutes ago.
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that At the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\", Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
5) Master Diplomat, are you not reading the story or do you not know what diplomacy is? Diplomacy is the art of compromise, and because Zuko is a dragon-child, crazy, and does not understand people he is very bad at diplomacy. What Zuko is good at that you seem to confuse with diplomacy, is giving and taking orders.
6)Thief of Asagitatsu; he is the Thief of Asagitatsu because he stole the fires of Asagitatsu from Makoto and gave them back to the volcano spirit.
7)The Lord of Dragon\\\'s Wings, Zuko is an Exile and the Thief of Asagitatsu; The first circumvents a loophole in this \\\'\\\'AU\\\'\\\' and the second won him respect from the Spirit in the Volcano they live in.
8) Tactical Genius; This is mainly extrapolation on Zuko\\\'s genetics, Zuko is the direct descendent of Sozin, the man able to attack the four corners of the world at the same time. His uncle is the Dragon of the West and his teacher for the last three years, and finally his sister is Azula, the person able to conquer Ba Sing Se from the inside. Remember that Zuko only got to be a \\\"Tactical Genius\\\" after he has got most of his problems sorted out.
9)Kanaloa-spooker; This is what it means to be a Yaoren. Also remember that At the time Zuko is a fire and water bender so he and that Kanaloa have the same \\\"powers\\\", Also remember that Zuko had the Kanaloa in a position of weakness and that after it went back to being just the water he still thought it could and would kill him and everyone else.
10) encyclopedic knowledge; Zuko was a prince, in a land was going through an industrial age, until he was thirteen. After that he was mentored by the Grand Master of the White Lotus for three years. After all this he got some information from his past life as I pointed out above.
11) Surprised Zuko, I do not know what you mean by this? Do you mean only the Big Things that happen in this story or thing that just surprised him? I will assume that you mean anything that surprised him in the story.
I may have forgot some of the things that surprised so can someone help me in this latter?
Zuko was surprised;
a) that he could heal and that he was better at it than his Uncle.
b) He was surprised and sadden that he had to give up Asahi to get into Ba Sing Se.
c)That he was a water bender, etc.
These are all in the first ten-fifteen chapters
12) All of his actions...;
I do not see where you get this at all so I will try to break it down a little.
a)cruel or destructive; when was Zuko cruel in this story?
b)...does not do exactly...; where do you get this? I am series please tell me where you got this. Zuko does not have all the answers and he knows that.
c) Zuko stopped trying to capture Aang when he realized that, because he was able to water bend, that he was \\\"tainted\\\" in the eye\\\'s of the Fire Nation. This also does not hold any water at all because; guess what?, Ozai is dead! The thing about Azula is simple; that\\\'s life, sometimes the bad guys win in life because they are the bad guys. There is a small difference though; Azula was legally insane when she did all those bad things, and in America insanity is a valid defense and now she is on \\\"medication\\\"(the waterbent wall in her mind).
[[spoiler:766 words in Office Word, holy shit]]
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1) Fire-Healer, the very basic change before Vathara realized she was going full AU.
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Changed line(s) 3 from:
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1) Fire-Healer, the very basic change before Vathara realized she was going full AU.
