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Factions within factions...Aang\'s going to have so much more on his plate after the war. Since he\'s going to take down Kyoshi\'s decree, perhaps he will watch the proceedings of the selection for the next leader of the order of the Fire Sages. It would be a good experience for Aang. Who knows if Kuzon ever told Aang how the Fire Sages\' order operates. While the Avatar cannot affect the outcome of the selection, it would be good for the Sages and the people to see that the Avatar isn\'t flaunting the World-Spirit\'s power as Kyoshi did. Aang MUST differentiate hiimself from Kyoshi, if any of this is going to work out. Not just for the Fire Nation, but for the Earth Kingdom, as well.
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Factions within factions...Aang\\\'s going to have so much more on his plate after the war. Since he\\\'s going to take down Kyoshi\\\'s decree, perhaps he will watch the proceedings of the selection for the next leader of the order of the Fire Sages. It would be a good experience for Aang. Who knows if Kuzon ever told Aang how the Fire Sages\\\' order operates. While the Avatar cannot affect the outcome of the selection, it would be good for the Sages and the people to see that the Avatar isn\\\'t flaunting the World-Spirit\\\'s power as Kyoshi did. Aang MUST differentiate himself from Kyoshi, if any of this is going to work out. Not just for the Fire Nation, but for the Earth Kingdom, as well.
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Hallucinations - \\\"we see him lecturing to his class until Alana comes in and asks if he\\\'s rehearsing\\\"
I was under the impression that this was more of Will\\\'s \\\'lost time\\\' - he was giving a class, but he \\\'blinked\\\' and found himself several hours later, possibly even rehearsing, and no one thought anything of it.
EDIT: thoughts for Buffet Froid...
OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Compare Jack\\\'s reaction to snarky Will in Coquilles...
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': You\\\'re the head of the behavioural science unit, Jack. Why don\\\'t you come up with your own answers if you don\\\'t like mine?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I DID NOT HEAR THAT. DID I?
...to Buffet Froid
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I just want to be careful with you. We don\\\'t want to break you here. Is that what\\\'s happening? Have I broken you?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': Do you have anyone that does this better unbroken than I do broken?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': *quietly* Fear makes you rude, Will.
He seems genuinely concerned and doesn\\\'t respond with his usual scene chewing.
I\\\'m not sure if it count as \\\'ironic,\\\' but Will\\\'s states that he has, \\\"a habit of collecting strays,\\\" echoes Alana in an earlier episode with regards to his relationship with Abigail Hobbs. Perhaps a CallBack?
Finally, awkward heart-warming moment? When Jack hypothesises that the FBI job gives Will some \\\'stability\\\' in life...
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': Stability requires strong foundations, Jack. My moorings are built on sand-
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I am not sand! I am bedrock! When you doubt yourself, you don\\\'t have to doubt me too.
It\\\'s kind of silly, but Will is definitely grateful to have a supportive boss. Jack was essentially finding an odd way to wrangle Will\\\'s metaphor into an, \\\"I believe in you!\\\" speech.
I was under the impression that this was more of Will\\\'s \\\'lost time\\\' - he was giving a class, but he \\\'blinked\\\' and found himself several hours later, possibly even rehearsing, and no one thought anything of it.
EDIT: thoughts for Buffet Froid...
OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Compare Jack\\\'s reaction to snarky Will in Coquilles...
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': You\\\'re the head of the behavioural science unit, Jack. Why don\\\'t you come up with your own answers if you don\\\'t like mine?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I DID NOT HEAR THAT. DID I?
...to Buffet Froid
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I just want to be careful with you. We don\\\'t want to break you here. Is that what\\\'s happening? Have I broken you?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': Do you have anyone that does this better unbroken than I do broken?
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': *quietly* Fear makes you rude, Will.
He seems genuinely concerned and doesn\\\'t respond with his usual scene chewing.
I\\\'m not sure if it count as \\\'ironic,\\\' but Will\\\'s states that he has, \\\"a habit of collecting strays,\\\" echoes Alana in an earlier episode with regards to his relationship with Abigail Hobbs. Perhaps a CallBack?
Finally, awkward heart-warming moment? When Jack hypothesises that the FBI job gives Will some \\\'stability\\\' in life...
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Will\\\'\\\'\\\': Stability requires strong foundations, Jack. My moorings are built on sand-
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Jack\\\'\\\'\\\': I am not sand! I am bedrock! When you doubt yourself, you don\\\'t have to doubt me too.
It\\\'s kind of silly, but Will is definitely grateful to have a supportive boss. Jack was essentially finding an odd way to wrangle Will\\\'s metaphor into an, \\\"I believe in you!\\\" speech.
