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In chapter 20 page 196 of the hardcover edition, After Harry blows out the bugs in Thomas\' apartment, he tells Thomas he \
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In chapter 20 page 196 of the hardcover edition, After Harry blows out the bugs in Thomas\\\' apartment, he tells Thomas he \\\"wanted Lara\\\'s people to know who [he] contacted. When they try to follow up on it, they\\\'ll betray their presence and he\\\'ll be alerted to how they operate\\\" (196).
On the next page, Thomas realizes this was a payment to Odin for the meeting, at Lara\\\'s expense. Though Harry calls it a \\\"friendly gesture\\\" the fact is he tricked Lara\\\'s people, and by extension Lara herself, into antagonizing Odin, even though someone like Lara should know very well who Odin is.
So, if
* BullyingADragon: Harry tricks [[spoiler:Lara Raith]] into following a powerful person he made contact with in BluffTheEavesdropper. This is a \\\"dragon\\\" because the person tracked is known to Lara and an extremely dangerous person at that. And she will still send the team anyway.
is poorly worded, would,
* BullyingADragon: Harry tricks [[spoiler:Lara Raith]] into following [[spoiler:Odin]] as described in BluffTheEavesdropper. This is a \\\"dragon\\\" because the person tracked is known to Lara and an extremely dangerous person at that. And she will still send the team anyway.
be better?
On the next page, Thomas realizes this was a payment to Odin for the meeting, at Lara\\\'s expense. Though Harry calls it a \\\"friendly gesture\\\" the fact is he tricked Lara\\\'s people, and by extension Lara herself, into antagonizing Odin, even though someone like Lara should know very well who Odin is.
So, if
* BullyingADragon: Harry tricks [[spoiler:Lara Raith]] into following a powerful person he made contact with in BluffTheEavesdropper. This is a \\\"dragon\\\" because the person tracked is known to Lara and an extremely dangerous person at that. And she will still send the team anyway.
is poorly worded, would,
* BullyingADragon: Harry tricks [[spoiler:Lara Raith]] into following [[spoiler:Odin]] as described in BluffTheEavesdropper. This is a \\\"dragon\\\" because the person tracked is known to Lara and an extremely dangerous person at that. And she will still send the team anyway.
be better?
