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I\\\'m not going to go into a whole list of scenes where this crops up but the training scene with Erio and the manual is a prime example. Right off the top General Roland should have landed in a great deal of trouble when he took a weapon and opened fire on his fellow soldiers, who were involved in a training exercise that he was not. (Coincidentally, this kind of ambush/assault is one of the problems that shows up later – with some of Lyn\\\'s crew ambushing Signum and Vita, who were observing a training operation) He then makes some general cliche comments about combat to the Forwards and Nanoha, and they act all surprised about this. He then goes on about a manual that he wrote full of apparently basic combat tactics – that the TSAB has apparently classified as special operations manual for Enforcers only. Overall Chapter Eight is the worst overall chapter in the entire fan fic, and the worst offender in making the TSAB seem incompetent. I doubt that was the author\\\'s intention though.