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Aurabolt
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My biggest problem is Dean Calhoun. His motivations for his hatred have lost me completely and are vain and rather unnecessary. Yes, he was a new kid. Guess what; so was the Law at one point. In fact, he didn\'t really redeem himself in Episode 9; the bastard simply let him play because he realizes-somewhere deep down in that black twisted scape of his own mind-that what Brian was doing here was right on some level. He has no reason to hate Brian, and he has no reason to look down on him the way he does-not by what we\'re given in the story.
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My biggest problem is Dean Calhoun. His motivations for his hatred have lost me completely and are vain and rather unnecessary. Yes, he was a new kid. Guess what; so was the Law at one point. In fact, he didn\\\'t really redeem himself in Episode 9; the bastard simply let him play because he realizes-somewhere deep down in that black twisted scape of his own mind-that what Brian was doing here was right on some level. He has no reason to hate Brian, and he has no reason to look down on him the way he does-not by what we\\\'re given in the story.
Oh, and did I miss something? Jenny clearly has attraction for him due to her body language and he did make a move. Why aren\\\'t they together?
Oh, and did I miss something? Jenny clearly has attraction for him due to her body language and he did make a move. Why aren\\\'t they together?
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My biggest problem is Calhoun. His motivations for his hatred have lost me completely and are vain and rather unnecessary. Yes, he was a new kid. Guess what; so was the Law at one point. In fact, he didn\'t really redeem himself in Episode 9; the bastard simply let him play because he realizes-somewhere deep down in that black twisted scape of his own mind-that what Brian was doing here was right on some level. He has no reason to hate Brian, and he has no reason to look down on him the way he does-not by what we\'re given in the story.
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My biggest problem is Dean Calhoun. His motivations for his hatred have lost me completely and are vain and rather unnecessary. Yes, he was a new kid. Guess what; so was the Law at one point. In fact, he didn\\\'t really redeem himself in Episode 9; the bastard simply let him play because he realizes-somewhere deep down in that black twisted scape of his own mind-that what Brian was doing here was right on some level. He has no reason to hate Brian, and he has no reason to look down on him the way he does-not by what we\\\'re given in the story.
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Yeah, I have no problems with Jenny; her anger is well-established...though a bit more extreme and misguided towards people who might deserve it more from where I stand. But it is at least understandable.
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Yeah, I have no problems with Jenny anymore; her anger is well-established and justified in-story with emotional context...though a bit more extreme and misguided towards people who might deserve it more from where I stand. But it is at least understandable.
