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** Really? Joanna isn\'t that quirky. She\'s frustrated with her job that sucks and actually has no interest in expressing herself through \
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** Really? Joanna isn\\\'t that quirky. She\\\'s frustrated with her job that sucks and actually has no interest in expressing herself through \\\"flare\\\" because it\\\'s kind of a tacky idea. Yes, Peter likes her instead of his initial girlfriend Anne, however, Joanna is just friendly and Anne is probably cheating on him. Not to mention, Joanna does not, in anyway give Peter inspiration to embezzle the company\\\'s funds (which is inspired by a male coworker\\\'s idea, actually). Asking her out is not because she directly is changing his life, it is to show, on his own, Peter is changing his life and finally has the courage to ask her out. She\\\'s actually appalled by him stealing and is even more mature than him (for example telling him to grow up when he makes a big deal over someone she slept with)
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** Really? Joanna isn\'t that quirky. She\'s frustrated with her job that sucks and actually has no interest in expressing herself through \
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** Really? Joanna isn\\\'t that quirky. She\\\'s frustrated with her job that sucks and actually has no interest in expressing herself through \\\"flare\\\" because it\\\'s kind of a tacky idea. Yes, Peter likes her instead of his initial girlfriend Anne, however, Joanna is just friendly and Anne is probably cheating on him. Not to mention, Joanna does not, in anyway give Peter inspiration to embezzle the company\\\'s funds (which is inspired by a male coworker\\\'s idea, actually). Asking her out is not because she directly is changing his life, it is to show, on his own, Peter is changing his life and finally has the courage to ask her out. She\\\'s actually appalled by his actions and is even more mature than him (telling him to grow up when he makes a big deal over someone she slept with)
