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Sean Murray I said \\\"This is a pretty complex trope in fiction. This can be elaborated upon. And why should this be \\\'less formal\\\'?\\\"
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining in depth what a political party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining in depth what a political party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
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Sean Murray I said \
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Sean Murray I said \\\"This is a pretty complex trope in fiction. This can be elaborated upon. And why should this be \\\'less formal\\\'?\\\"
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining what a political party is, what a single-issue party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining what a political party is, what a single-issue party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
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SeanMurrayI said \
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Sean Murray I said \\\"This is a pretty complex trope in fiction. This can be elaborated upon. And why should this be \\\'less formal\\\'?\\\"
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining what a political party is, what a single-issue party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
I think the introduction could be shorter because it reads like an attempted Wikipedia description -- TV Tropes [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage is less formal]] by nature. It\\\'s not terrible, in fact the first sentence is a great opener, but explaining what a political party is, what a single-issue party is, and how fiction does indeed differ from RealLife, didn\\\'t make me want to read any further, and aren\\\'t essential in explaining the trope.
\\\'\\\'\\\"[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Made-up political parties appearing in fiction.]]\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Political parties are a common occurrence to be found in just about any democracy. Individuals sharing similar ideologies and opinions band together to try and win elections and promote a political agenda that best serves the interests of people pertaining to that ideology and, if you\\\'re lucky, other people as well. Likewise, fictional settings that are democracies are typically shown to have political parties which reflect the issues and opinions which characterize the political climate of a story\\\'s setting.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"Most often these are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-issue_politics#Single-issue_parties single-issue parties]] which only seek [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin to promote a single topic or policy]], but the FictionalPoliticalParty can be used in a variety of ways to enrich the political environment of a fictional world.\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\"On one hand, this trope can be played seriously as it can be a reflection of people\\\'s attitudes towards the events or backstory that shape the setting; such examples may be viewed as a \\\"realistic\\\" political ideology that may exist had the extraordinary events in the story\\\'s world been something that occurred in the real one [...]\\\"\\\'\\\'
