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Does anyone else think Tunstall\'s [[spoiler: betrayal in \'\'Mastiff\'\']] came across as [[CharacterDerailment Character Derailment]]? The [[spoiler: battle]] was very well written and very sad, but it felt a bit like the whole thing came out of left field.
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Does anyone else think Tunstall\\\'s [[spoiler: betrayal in \\\'\\\'Mastiff\\\'\\\']] came across as [[CharacterDerailment Character Derailment]]? The [[spoiler: Tunstall vs Beka scene]] was very well written and very sad, but it felt a bit like the whole thing came out of left field. Tunstall never seemed that desperate before...
