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-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augustine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit world of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augustine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit world of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit world of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit world of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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*{{Film/Avatar}}: When Grace Augustine passed away, she became one with Ewa: The Great Mother of the Spirit world of Pandora.
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-> Mo\'at: \
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*{{Film/Avatar}}: When Grace Augustine passed away, she became one with Eywa: The Great Mother of the Spirit world of Pandora.
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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*{{Film/Avatar}}: When Grace Augustine passed away, she became one with Ewa: The Great Mother of the Spirit world of Pandora.
-> Mo\'at: \
-> Mo\'at: \
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*{{Film/Avatar}}: When Grace Augustine passed away, she became one with Eywa: The Great Mother of the Spirit world of Pandora.
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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-> Mo\'at: \
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-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with Eywa, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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-> Mo\'at: \
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-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: Grace?......
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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->** Mo\'at: \
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-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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->** Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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** Mo\'at: \
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** Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake.
-> Jake Sully: -> Grace?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real.
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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** Mo\'at: \
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** Mo\\\'at: \\\"The Great Mother may choose to save all that she is, in this body.\\\"
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake...
Jake Sully: -> Grace...?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real... (She then dies)
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
-> Jake: \\\"Is that possible?\\\"
-> Mo\\\'at: \\\"She must pass through the eye of Eywa and return. But, Jake Sully, she is very weak.\\\"
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: Jake...
Jake Sully: -> Grace...?
-> Dr. Grace Augustine: I\\\'m with Her now, Jake. She is real... (She then dies)
-> Mo’at: \\\"Her wounds were too great. It was not enough time. She is with Eywa now.\\\"
A lament for Grace Augusine, I have only one lament: Grace Augustine was the best teacher Jake Sully has ever known. She also held the key, the key to Princess Neytiri of the Omaticaya Clan finally growing up. For Neytiri heself was one of Grace’s many students. Grace Augustine Taught Neytiri ho to Speak English. After Gace Passed away , she is bestowed a high reward, or even becomes a god-like species. Grace Agustine, friend to Jake and Neytiri, is with EWA, Spirit word of the Na’vi in the Afterlife.
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Seriously, I don\'t want an EditWar over this, but the new entry is actually \'\'worse\'\' than the one I deleted before. I\'ve removed the most contentious paragraphs, which smacked of TakeThat, soapboxing and justifying edits, but it\'s still \'\'far\'\' too long and extremely biased. CrapsackWorld is \'\'not\'\' a subjective trope - if you\'re potholing to pages like FacePalm, WallBanger and DidNotDoTheResearch, you\'re doing it wrong.
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Seriously, I don\\\'t want an EditWar over this, but the new entry is actually \\\'\\\'worse\\\'\\\' than the one I deleted before. I\\\'ve removed the most contentious paragraphs, which smacked of TakeThat, soapboxing and justifying edits, but it\\\'s still \\\'\\\'far\\\'\\\' too long and extremely biased. CrapsackWorld is \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' a subjective trope - if you\\\'re potholing to pages like FacePalm, WallBanger and DidNotDoTheResearch, you\\\'re doing it wrong.
Oh, and as regards the earlier post which took my name in vain - the part about my having no edit history prior to deleting this entry is simply incorrect. I created the StanLee page and completely rewrote the Daredevil page (which in its original form consisted of about three short paragraphs and some unnecessary snark) as well as providing numerous examples on other trope pages. Ironically, this included an entry for the Wildstorm Universe on the CrapsackWorld page which was subsequently deleted without explanation - despite the WSU being \\\'\\\'far\\\'\\\' more crapsack than the Marvel Universe. Also, and unfortunately, I\\\'m not employed by Marvel comics.
I admit I screwed up by not referring to the Discussion page in the first instance, but my gut reaction on reading the entry was that it was completely unsalvagable for all the reasons I already stated. My biggest problem with it was it smacked heavily of ComplainingAboutShowsYouDontLike - for example, criticism of the writers\\\' treatment of mental illness, whether justified or not, is irrelevant to the trope under discussion. That\\\'s what JustBugsMe is for.
Oh, and as regards the earlier post which took my name in vain - the part about my having no edit history prior to deleting this entry is simply incorrect. I created the StanLee page and completely rewrote the Daredevil page (which in its original form consisted of about three short paragraphs and some unnecessary snark) as well as providing numerous examples on other trope pages. Ironically, this included an entry for the Wildstorm Universe on the CrapsackWorld page which was subsequently deleted without explanation - despite the WSU being \\\'\\\'far\\\'\\\' more crapsack than the Marvel Universe. Also, and unfortunately, I\\\'m not employed by Marvel comics.
I admit I screwed up by not referring to the Discussion page in the first instance, but my gut reaction on reading the entry was that it was completely unsalvagable for all the reasons I already stated. My biggest problem with it was it smacked heavily of ComplainingAboutShowsYouDontLike - for example, criticism of the writers\\\' treatment of mental illness, whether justified or not, is irrelevant to the trope under discussion. That\\\'s what JustBugsMe is for.
