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* A bit of the AwesomeButImpractical entry may also need some rewording. Here\'s an amended version - \'The [[SuperMode NT-D]], which only lasts for five minutes before the pilot is overwhelmed and needs to detect an enemy Newtype before it even activates. Still, that can sometimes be more than enough to get the job done, as [[spoiler:the poor Kshatriya]] learned the hard way.
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* A bit of the AwesomeButImpractical entry may also need some rewording. Here\\\'s an amended version - \\\'The [[SuperMode NT-D]], which only lasts for five minutes before the pilot is overwhelmed and needs to detect an enemy Newtype before it even activates. Still, that can sometimes be more than enough to get the job done, as [[spoiler:the poor Kshatriya]] learned the hard way.\\\'
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* An amendment to the MaliciousSlander entry - \'Possible example. When Banagher is eating with Gilboa\'s family after being captured, one of the kids claims that anyone held prisoner by the E.F.S.F will be denied food, his defense being \
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* An amendment to the MaliciousSlander entry - \\\'Possible example. When Banagher is eating with Gilboa\\\'s family after being captured, one of the kids claims that anyone held prisoner by the E.F.S.F will be denied food, his defense being \\\"his dad told him so.\\\" This definitely isn\\\'t official Federation policy, but [[CrapsackWorld given the setting]], it\\\'s still not implausible that Gilboa himself was starved during his previous run-ins with their military.\\\'
Again, nice work. Just a few little extras that I would have fixed if my connection were better.
Again, nice work. Just a few little extras that I would have fixed if my connection were better.
