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[[quoteblock]](37)Since [[CompleteMonster Nicanor\'s]] doings ended [[KarmicDeath in this way]], with the city remaining in possession of the Hebrews from that time on, I will bring my own story to an end here too. (38)If it is [[PragmaticAdaptation well written and to the point]], that is what I wanted; if it is [[TheyChangedItNowItSucks poorly done and mediocre]], that is the best I could do. ... (39d) Let this, then, be the end.[[/quoteblock]]
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[[quoteblock]](37)Since [[CompleteMonster Nicanor\\\'s]] doings ended [[KarmicDeath in this way]], with the city remaining in possession of the Hebrews from that time on, I will bring my own story to an end here too. (38)If it is [[AdaptationDistillation well written and to the point]], that is what I wanted; if it is [[TheyChangedItNowItSucks poorly done and mediocre]], that is the best I could do. ... (39d) Let this, then, be the end.[[/quoteblock]]
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[quoteblock]](37)Since [[CompleteMonster Nicanor\'s]] doings ended [[KarmicDeath in this way]], with the city remaining in possession of the Hebrews from that time on, I will bring my own story to an end here too. (38)If it is [[PragmaticAdaptation well written and to the point]], that is what I wanted; if it is [[TheyChangedItNowItSucks poorly done and mediocre]], that is the best I could do. ... (39d) Let this, then, be the end.[[/quoteblock]]
[quoteblock]](37)Since [[CompleteMonster Nicanor\'s]] doings ended [[KarmicDeath in this way]], with the city remaining in possession of the Hebrews from that time on, I will bring my own story to an end here too. (38)If it is [[PragmaticAdaptation well written and to the point]], that is what I wanted; if it is [[TheyChangedItNowItSucks poorly done and mediocre]], that is the best I could do. ... (39d) Let this, then, be the end.[[/quoteblock]]
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[[quoteblock]](37)Since [[CompleteMonster Nicanor\\\'s]] doings ended [[KarmicDeath in this way]], with the city remaining in possession of the Hebrews from that time on, I will bring my own story to an end here too. (38)If it is [[PragmaticAdaptation well written and to the point]], that is what I wanted; if it is [[TheyChangedItNowItSucks poorly done and mediocre]], that is the best I could do. ... (39d) Let this, then, be the end.[[/quoteblock]]
