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This story is Blossoming Trail 2.0, having many of the faulta of the original (Professor Cerise Bashing, Spite in everyone, the infamous Blame Game, favoritism toward Chloe, portraying Goh in a bad light AGAIN and Parker\'s Creator\'s Pet status) and now have more faults (Gladion and Specter being suicidal, new unsympathetic characters like Gloria and Victor, humongous chapter that rival Cross and make him blush and the divisive explanation of how the Cloak of Marchosias is very OP by introducing gods on the Train).
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This story is Blossoming Trail 2.0, having many of the faults of the original (Professor Cerise Bashing, Spite in everyone, the infamous Blame Game, favoritism toward Chloe, portraying Goh in a bad light AGAIN and Parker\\\'s Creator\\\'s Pet status) and now have more faults (Gladion and Specter being suicidal, new unsympathetic characters like Gloria and Victor, humongous chapter that rival Cross and make him blush and the divisive explanation of how the Cloak of Marchosias is very OP by introducing gods on the Train).
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Sycamore is also exaggerated since he decided to fricking Restart The World because his attempts to calm Chloe down backfire, but his reaction is the In-Universe reaction of the readers who are also sick of the growing darkness in the story.
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Sycamore is also on fault because of his exaggerated reaction since he decided to fricking Restart The World because his attempts to calm Chloe down backfired, but his reaction is the In-Universe reaction of the readers who are also sick of the growing darkness in the story.
