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Oh wait, I think I found words my reasons why I was hesitant to call this a downplayed example!
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Oh wait, I think I found words for my reason why I was hesitant to call this a downplayed example!
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I think it\'s safe to say that Mirabel is already terrified after seeing the cracks and all that, and instead of getting any comfort from her family, she gets brushed aside as well as publically humiliated, as Gitman already pointed out. This is quite a bit of anguish and confusion, and this is a direct and obvious consequence of Alma denying her perception of reality. Again, I\'m willing to be as charitable as I can and say that Alma didn\'t deliberately set Mirabel up for this and didn\'t set out to hurt her -- but Alma still uses the technique and produces the results. I\'d be fine with putting \
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I think it\\\'s safe to say that Mirabel is already terrified after seeing the cracks and all that, and instead of getting any comfort from her family, she gets brushed aside as well as publically humiliated, as Gitman already pointed out. This is quite a bit of anguish and confusion, and this is a direct and obvious consequence of Alma denying her perception of reality. Again, I\\\'m willing to be as charitable as I can and say that Alma didn\\\'t deliberately set Mirabel up for this and didn\\\'t set out to hurt her -- but Alma still uses the technique and produces the results. I\\\'d be fine with putting \\\"downplayed\\\" on a mild case of abuse but this, honestly, doesn\\\'t feel mild.
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