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* DeusExMachina: Grimm suddenly being attracted to both Aura and negativity, despite the main show only establishing that Grimm are attracted to negativity. During the battle for Shade, the Grimm congregate on the battlefield as normal, but then attack only the Crownsmen because of their excessively powerful Auras. This saves the day for the Academy, who couldn\'t win without this unexpected twist. [[spoiler:Fox reveals to Gillian that the Grimm are being attracted to the enhanced Aura she\'s given to the Crownsmen; while Coco \'\'does\'\' question if Fox is telling the truth, the fact the Grimm largely ignore the Academy forces until the Crown is defeated does suggests he was.]]
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* DeusExMachina: Grimm suddenly being attracted to both Aura and negativity, despite the main show only establishing that Grimm are attracted to negativity. During the battle for Shade, the Grimm congregate on the battlefield as normal, but then attack only the Crownsmen because of their excessively powerful Auras. This saves the day for the Academy, who couldn\\\'t win without this unexpected twist. [[spoiler:Fox reveals to Gillian that the Grimm are being attracted to the enhanced Aura she\\\'s given to the Crownsmen; while Coco \\\'\\\'does\\\'\\\' question if Fox is telling the truth, the Grimm largely ignore the Academy forces until the Crown is defeated.]]
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DeusExMachina was removed for being too YMMV. It did have a section that was talking about potential impact on the main show, but the rest was objectively the trop. I\'m therefore suggesting the following rewrite, having stripped out the discussion about the other characters in the main show.
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DeusExMachina was removed for being too YMMV. It did have a section that was talking about potential impact on the main show, but the rest was objectively the trope. I\\\'m therefore suggesting the following rewrite, having stripped out the discussion about the other characters in the main show.
