Follow TV Tropes

Following

Discussion History Manga / ABridesStory

Go To

[004] homogenized Current Version

25th Mar '18 at 01:20:43 PM

Changed line(s) 3 from:

n

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area's menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after ''that'', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.

to:

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area\'s menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after \'\'that\'\', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins\' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.

Changed line(s) 5 from:

n

Edit: Looks like the discussion format handles paragraph breaks differently than the wiki, remember there should three backslashes [=\=] at the end of that paragraph

to:

Edit: Looks like the discussion format handles paragraph breaks differently than the wiki, remember there should three backslashes at the end of that paragraph.

[003] homogenized

25th Mar '18 at 01:20:24 PM

Changed line(s) 3 from:

n

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area's menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after ''that'', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.

to:

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area\'s menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after \'\'that\'\', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins\' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.

Edit: Looks like the discussion format handles paragraph breaks differently than the wiki, remember there should three backslashes [=\\\\\\=] at the end of that paragraph

[002] homogenized

25th Mar '18 at 01:17:42 PM

Changed line(s) 1 from:

n

Pulled this from the ForgoneConclusion example because I think it might not be needed, but putting it here in case someone thinks otherwise:\

to:

Pulled this from the ForegoneConclusion example because I think it might not be needed, but putting it here in case someone thinks otherwise:

Changed line(s) 3 from:

n

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area's menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after ''that'', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.\

to:

Less than 50 years after that, [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI events far to the west]] [[UsefulNotes/RedOctober will bring down the Tsar]] and eventually give rise to [[UsefulNotes/JosephStalin some Georgian with a nice moustache]], who will take a far more mitts-on approach to the area. Just 20 years after that, the area\'s menfolk [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII will be severely depleted in another war against Germany]]. Less than 20 years after \'\'that\'\', the Aral Sea – featured prominently in the Twins\' Story – will become the subject of disastrous [[UsefulNotes/SovietRussiaUkraineAndSoOn Soviet efforts to irrigate semi-arid lands for cotton production]] which shrink the sea and turn the area into an even more inhospitable wasteland.

[001] mariofan1000

27th Jun '17 at 06:08:08 PM

Changed line(s) 1 from:

n

I think that you could bump up the PG level a notch (I think you could get away with level 3 violence and a PG rating) but I'd probably side with that scale. I'd also add level 9 to the NC-17 rating, since some films (like the uncut version of ''Film/{{RoboCop}}'') are Level 9 but NC-17 rated.

to:

I think that you could bump up the PG level a notch (I think you could get away with level 3 violence and a PG rating) but I\'d probably side with that scale. I\'d also maybe add level 9 to the NC-17 rating, since some films (like the uncut version of \'\'Film/{{RoboCop}}\'\') are Level 9 but NC-17 rated.

Top