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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy's first day. Him being on duty in two nightly scenes (first night bridge, second night Cliffside) is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]]. This partially also applies to Clawhouser, who seems to work late hours, receiving Judy's DistressCall when running from Manchas on the first night.
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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy\'s first day. Him being on duty in two nightly scenes (first night bridge, second night Cliffside) is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]] by having him AlwaysOnDuty. This partially also applies to Clawhouser, who seems to work late hours, receiving Judy\'s DistressCall when running from Manchas on the first night.
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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy's first day. Him being on duty in two nightly scenes (first night bridge, second night Cliffside) is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]].
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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy\'s first day. Him being on duty in two nightly scenes (first night bridge, second night Cliffside) is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]]. This partially also applies to Clawhouser, who seems to work late hours, receiving Judy\'s DistressCall when running from Manchas on the first night.
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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy's first day. Him being on duty the night after is unlikely and is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]].
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Bogo seemed to be doing a day shift, given that he held the morning briefing on Judy\'s first day. Him being on duty in two nightly scenes (first night bridge, second night Cliffside) is pointing towards the writer trying to [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything keep the cast small]].
