ry4n
Since: Jan, 2014
#2: Jan 20th 2024 at 5:53:03 AM
You might want to proof read your post. There are some typos, but also some missing context. Are the protagonists monsters or warlocks or villagers? Also, how many characters are plants? Whose husband is dead? Or does husband here mean someone who practices husbandry? Does this actually take place in Hamlin? Did the character take all the mana of the rats too?
Total posts: 2
Figured this needed its own thread.
Context: I had nearly finished writing a plotline that entails a demon abducting a village's child population (basically a Pied Piper adaption) and tricked a living dungeon (the protagonist, or at least one of them) into absorbing their mana and entangling them to her. Meaning that they are effectialy trapped there.
The idea was basically giving what the folks at Mythcreants call "spinach" to the protags in the form of a Pyrrhic Victory while also setting up some subplots around freeing the kids both internally and externally.
However I want to ask about a few things to avoid certain pitfalls.
There are prolly some other aspects I've missed, but these are the ones i know of and want to address. So if you have any suggestions or questions, fire away.
Edited by MorningStar1337 on Dec 11th 2023 at 4:27:50 AM