#2: Jul 1st 2023 at 2:49:23 PM
Yeaaaaaaah, this one doesn't explain why she's an Office Lady.
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ArielLightning
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#3: Jul 4th 2023 at 9:48:41 AM
So should this entry be deleted then?
Vilui
Since: May, 2009
#4: Jul 8th 2023 at 10:22:05 PM
Suggested rewrite:
- Office Lady: The narrative refers to Yoriko as an "office lady" when she first appears; however, it is very quickly apparent that she is much more than that, and is in fact the leader of the NIRAA.
ArielLightning
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from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, USA
Since: Nov, 2014
Relationship Status: LET'S HAVE A ZILLION BABIES
#5: Jul 16th 2023 at 8:37:00 PM
I already deleted the entry because it seemed like an excuse to complain. However, I dig the rewrite. Will be adding shortly.
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So I've noticed a lot of complaining and snark on pages for Peter Guerrin's fanfics. While I don't doubt their quality, I think the amount of vitriol they've attracted is just ridiculous. To give you an example, here's this excerpt from The Misery Senshi Neo-Zero Double Blitzkrieg Debacle: