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To-do list:

  • Consensus was to retool The Team into an exampleless supertrope for the broad act of grouping characters together to accomplish something. Rewrite the description if necessary, and move examples that fit a subtrope (listed on The Index Team) accordingly. Cleanup is being tracked at Sandbox.The Team Wick Cleanup.

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Note: This thread was proposed by Vandagyre; OP and wick check taken from Sandbox.The Team Wick Check.

The Team is a trope about a group of people with varying roles who are working towards a specific goal. The description of this trope has a heavy emphasis on the roles people have within teams, and it shows in the examples; most of the on-page ones are written in the supertrope-subtrope style, which is bad indenting. Many examples, both on-and-off page, often fail to explain enough about the team's composition, roles, or purpose.

If this sounds familiar, it's because Five-Man Band was sent to TRS for the exact same reasons. In fact, it's possible that some of The Team's issues are related to that thread. Officially Five-Man Band is being cleaned up by getting examples rewritten into single-bullet examples, but the wick check shows that some of them are being moved to The Team without any formatting changes.

50 wicks were checked to see if the style of formatting has any correlation with whether the example has enough context. Context in this case is an example describing the names and roles of people in a group. Note was also made of any wicks that were changed wholesale from Five-Man Band. Due to the multiple analyses performed, the wick check results are in the following folder:

    Wick Check Results 

Main wick check

  • 8 wicks (16%) were formatted in the supertrope-subtrope style and were Zero-Context Examples,
  • 8 wicks (16%) were formatted in the supertrope-subtrope style and had enough context.
  • 12 wicks (24%) were formatted as a single bullet and were ZCEs.
  • 3 wicks (6%) were formatted as a single bullet and had enough context.
  • 17 wicks (34%) were inline wicks where The Team is used as part of a sentence or is potholed.
  • 2 wicks (4%) had multiple usage categories on the same page.

Additionally, 8 wicks, or 16%, were swapped out from Five-Man Band without any changes.

By formatting, condensed

  • 16 wicks (32%) used supertrope-subtrope formatting.
  • 15 wicks (30) used single-bullet formatting.
  • 17 wicks (34%) were inline wicks.
  • 2 wicks (4%) had multiple usage categories on the same page.

By context composition

Inline and mixed-use wicks have been excluded from this tally, which is out of 31 wicks. Percentages do not add up to 100% due to rounding.
  • 13 wicks (34%) had enough context.
  • 20 wicks (65%) were ZCEs. Of these:
    • 8 ZCE wicks (40%) used supertrope-subtrope formatting.
    • 12 ZCE wicks (60%) used single-bullet formatting.

Mixed-use composition

The mixed-use wicks consist of 8 examples of The Team total.
  • 3 (37.5%) examples used supertrope-subtrope formatting and were ZCEs.
  • 2 (25%) examples used single-bullet formatting and were ZCEs.
  • 3 (37.5%) examples were inline wicks.

Contrary to my expectations beforehand, the wick check suggests that four out of five examples written in single-bullet form lack sufficient context, as opposed to the 50/50 chance that an example in supertrope-subtrope formatting is a ZCE. While this means the supertrope-subtrope formatting isn't as bad for the trope as initially thought, it's still improper formatting. Additionally, usage of the trope is fairly evenly split between single-bullet (30%), supertrope-subtrope (32%), and inline (34%) wicks, the last of which tend to come up whenever the concept of a team someone's on is mentioned.

The biggest issue that came up is the disproportionate amount of ZCEs. Two-thirds of the solo example list wicks lacked sufficient context, whether it was because examples just had a character name and a listed role with no elaboration, never actually mentioned a team was involved, or was just "a team exists". I think there are two factors at play behind the ZCE problem:

  • The description's fixation on roles in the team and the on-page examples' supertrope-subtrope formatting makes people think a subtrope and a character name are sufficient context.
  • People not reading said description combined with the excessive number of potholes to any mention of "the team" results in them missing that describing what people do for the team is also important.

As a side note, 8 of the 50 wicks were originally Five-Man Band wicks that received no changes from their original form when the wick was swapped. This corroborates concerns that have been raised about wick cleaning in general not being done properly; discussion about this aspect of the wick check that's unrelated to the trope can be taken to the "On improper TRS cleanup" thread.

As for potential fixes, I think rewriting the description to focus less on specific archetypes and more on either overall team composition or the goals a team has would go a long way to encouraging single-bullet formatting and proper context, while making it more distinct from its subtropes. Rewriting the on-page examples to use single-bullet formatting would also help reduce poorly-formated examples. Alternately, in the event that we just can't make it work, we could redirect this trope about teams in general to The Index Team, an index about various types of teams.

What do you all think?


Edited by GastonRabbit on Jan 13th 2024 at 4:50:26 AM

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#51: Jan 11th 2024 at 9:07:25 PM

Mostly I've just been deleting swaths of misuse, but yeah. Got it. [tup]

Edited by WarJay77 on Jan 11th 2024 at 12:07:54 PM

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#52: Jan 11th 2024 at 9:09:12 PM

I think I initially confused this thread with a different one, since I forgot we moved this to No On-Page Examples instead of Definition-Only Pages until I double-checked the index the word "exampleless" was potholed to in the crowner and to-do list. But anyway, if there are examples that don't fit the revised definition, then that answers my question regarding how many wicks stopped counting as misuse after we broadened the definition.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Jan 11th 2024 at 11:11:23 AM

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#53: Jan 11th 2024 at 9:10:27 PM

That's okay, I also started out thinking this was def-only until I thankfully double-checked only two pages in.

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#55: Jan 13th 2024 at 2:50:39 AM

[up]Added a link to that sandbox to the OP.

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#56: Jan 30th 2024 at 12:05:35 PM

~Laundry Pizza 03 I appreciate you helping out, but the goal is not to just remove any use of the trope in potholes or links. It's just an exampleless supertrope now; the cleanup is just to weed out misused examples and move things to the subtropes when possible, but not every mention of it is invalid since it can still have wicks.

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#57: Mar 23rd 2024 at 12:40:22 PM

Urgh, I let this sit for a long time. Real life kinda came and ate up my free time / motivation. I'll try to get back into this, since there's really not that much left to do.

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#58: Apr 19th 2024 at 7:05:36 PM

Okay. Every relevant namespace has been checked, and the misused examples are purged. I'll close up.

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Trope Repair Shop: The Team
9th May '23 10:39:13 PM

Crown Description:

The Team is a trope about a group of people with varying roles who are working towards a specific goal. The description of this trope has a heavy emphasis on the roles people have within teams, and it shows in the examples; most of the on-page ones are written in the supertrope-subtrope style, which is bad indenting. Many examples, both on-and-off page, often fail to explain enough about the team's composition, roles, or purpose. What should be done with The Team?

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