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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

NTG Since: Aug, 2014
#41901: Apr 16th 2024 at 3:30:14 AM

@Paperfly: It's a german RPG Maker game called Das Drachenauge (The Dragon Eye) from around 2009. The candidate would be the main villain.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#41902: Apr 16th 2024 at 5:02:28 AM

[tup] Scourge, Beale, Trapfelhagen and Mold

LarryMullen Since: May, 2015
#41903: Apr 16th 2024 at 5:28:24 AM

@Ravok: Sorry! That will not happen again.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#41904: Apr 16th 2024 at 7:32:49 AM

What is the work?

What If Sidious Captured Ahsoka & Ezra in the World Between Worlds is Pente Patrol Star Wars video.

What has Palpatine done here?

After sucesfully using Sith magic to enter the World Between Worlds. He uses the Force to kept Ahsoka and Ezra at bay and sees the future and his ultimate end. Letting Ezra go to test future seeing powers of the World Between Worlds, while keeping Ahsoka as his prisoner in Mandalorian Sarcophagus outffited with Sith runes that kept her in constant state of intoxicated agony. He used he as conduit to access the World Between Worlds and see the future.

He replaced Tarkin with Krennic in charge of Death Star since his lack of influence would mean he woudn’t make Tarkin’s mistakes. After Jedha City and Scatif were destroyed, Krennic hid the Death Star while Palpatine dissolved the Senate and has Bail Organa and Mon Mothma branded as criminals, with Leia by her own father on Death Star. Palpatine uses World Between Worlds to have remains of fractured Rebel Alliance positioned on Dantooine destroyed by Vader with mix of orbital bombardment and ground attack, killing Kenobi and Luke in proces.

Palpatine become addicted to the World Between Worlds, slowly becoming more paranoid as the Froce continues to create new Chosen Ones to fight against him, be it newborn children or former Jedi and followers of other religions. New chosen ones are either killed or captured and enslaved, at one point killing every first born child in entire city. To give Vader something to do, Palptine gives him to train some of young “chosen ones” he took as infants and removed memories, to raise them as order of the Inquisitors, useng them to spy on Vader.

Seeking new body for himself, he has his clone son and his wife killed while raising his grandaugther Ray to be his new vessel. As Grand Moff Krennic rules over the Core with the first Death Star, while both second one and Starkiller Base are completed, plus Final Order fleet. Finaly possesing Ray and destroying her soul, Palpatine uses Ray’s body to access the World Between Worlds on his own. Seeing he would need to fight Vader one last time, Palpatine faces his almost 90 year old aprentice on Death Star. Just to be a jerk he present’s Vader with both Ahsoka’s husk and holograma of his children, explaining everything before killing Vader and Ashoka.

Palpatine orders his students create offspring with the Force to serve him, planning to use the World Between Worlds and continue possesing offspring of clone children he had after Dathan and let escape to reproduce to rule eternally.

Mitigating factors?

It’s Palpatine.

Heinous standard?

Keeps Ahsoka as tortured prisoner for decades, kills first born children in entire city, keeps galaxy in check with multiple planet killers, is personally horrible to just about everybody.

Conclusion?

It’s Palpatine.

AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#41905: Apr 16th 2024 at 7:39:54 AM

Is there just a running gag I'm unaware of to find as many Palpatine incarnations as possible for this thread? Anyway, sure.

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Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#41907: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:16:49 AM

You know the drill folks. If a Palpatine gets proposed, it's very likely an [tup].

jlvs200s Jogo from The Netherlands (Troper in training) Relationship Status: At the center of everything that happens to me
Jogo
#41908: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:26:35 AM

Somehow, Palpatine returned (to this thread), so "yes" to another version of him.

"Stand proud, Sukuna, you are strong." | He/Him
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#41909: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:28:03 AM

[tup] Hey look at that, Palpatine as a CM, who'd of guessed? Also sure to Mold

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
MermaidEyes15 A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds from The Grand Dance of the Vast Universe of Life Since: Dec, 2021 Relationship Status: Puppy love
A Girl, Just One of Many Kinds
#41910: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:30:05 AM

I think starting now you can just put me down as a yes for any version of Palpatine [lol]

Yes to this version of Palpss

Keep Fighting. Keep Loving.
AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
PassingThrough Since: Feb, 2024
#41912: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:32:04 AM

Sorry, he ends his phone call to Vader with "I love you too"... clear cut redeeming quality!

[lol] Yes here!

[down] C-c-cut time!

Edited by PassingThrough on Apr 16th 2024 at 11:38:34 AM

ElJuaco Since: Aug, 2019
Revenant30 Since: Sep, 2023
#41915: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:46:05 AM

[tup] Palpatine. Seriously, he's got more CM versions than Nyarlathotep or even the Devil himself.

AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#41916: Apr 16th 2024 at 8:51:16 AM

[up]I think I once read somebody unironically refer to Palpatine as the most evil character ever conceived of.

Edited by AmateurStorytime on Apr 16th 2024 at 8:51:25 AM

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TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#41918: Apr 16th 2024 at 9:23:44 AM

Nah, Palps isn't quite at Satan's number yet.

And it wasn't just anyone...it was Ian McDiarmid himself!

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MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#41919: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:18:10 AM

From the linked article, would this work as a CM quote for him?

[Palpatine] is more evil than the devil. At least Satan fell — he has a history, and it's one of revenge.
But the Emperor — well, I don't know all the details, but who does of the Sith? — is an independent agent who just lives for the exercise of power. He doesn't know what scruples are, let alone have any. The only emotion that manifests itself truly is the one seen just before he meets his end, if that's what he meets, in Jedi — and then that's pure anger, when he realizes that he hasn't succeeded in manipulating young Skywalker. So he has to kill him, and he tries to do that with unadulterated fury.
Ian McDiarmid on his character Palpatine, in an interview for Attack of the Clones

Edited by MasterN on Apr 16th 2024 at 10:20:31 AM

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#41920: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:19:43 AM

[up][up] You know a character's a incredibly vile when said character's own actor outright calls him pure evil.

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#41921: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:23:09 AM

[up][up] That’s a good quote, and I think we do have some quotes that are actors talking about their characters, like the one for 24.

In honor of Akira Toriyama
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#41922: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:23:35 AM

[tup] to Palpatine and a late one to Bastion and Master Mold!

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#41923: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:36:40 AM

[tup] to Palps and Master Mold.

And yes to the Dr.Sawyer quote.

The First man
AmateurStorytime Just a starting content creator from Home Since: Mar, 2024
Just a starting content creator
#41924: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:37:52 AM
Thumped: This post was thumped by the Stick of Off-Topic Thumping. Stay on topic, please.
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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#41925: Apr 16th 2024 at 10:38:58 AM

Yes to Ian's quote.

Larry: Also for the MCU quote.

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