The plot in Arc 4 which i still need to pace into six 62,000-65,000 words long "books" for Original Flavour (rougher than Splashnose's arc) is that Sunspot's generation is the third one after Ravencall/star's tenure as Riverclan's genodical dictator who attacked Thunderclan and almost started a war with Shadowclan and died in a Sunningrocks battle against Thunderclan and refugees and rebels from Riverclan.
There's also some subversion of Erin Hunter's cliches, in that there's a medicine cat who's evil (Tallcloud's follower Deadmoon), a good dark tabby (Icestrike), and a good guy who's ambituous and actually gets called "ambituous" instead of something else as if ambition was a dirty word (Marshrose). Embermask also subverts the Ambition Is Evil cliche in that he isn't doing what he does for himself and only lives for Ravencall. It also tries to avoid the canon's rampant ableism on both the characters' and seemingly even the Erins' part.
I'm still somewhat lost on what to do with Arcs 2 and 3. Aside from being a realistic continuation of events from Arc 1, they should also fit in thematically (Arc 1 is basically about xenophobia ant antifascism, while Arc 4 is about ableism and antifascism). Ravencall can't be in all the arcs because each arc is set in a different clan and focuses on the next generation born after the previous arc's conclusion, and nobody in Shadowclan's third generation after Ravencall's death is supposed to know who he is in order for his manipulations to work.
This is supposed to be the last of four arcs each focusing on the next generation after the previous protagonists, each in a different clan, so i'm not sure how to best end the story especially since afterlife exists and all. Not that i know what to put in the Windclan or Thunderclan arcs either. Ravencall/star's the villain in both first and last arc and both arcs have an overarching theme of antifascism, arc 1 being about xenophobia and arc 4 about ableism, so i'm unsure about what to put in the two middle arcs. Ravencall was also more for clan isolationism and/or Riverclan being the only clan in the forest having the entire area for themselves and everybody else dying, and seeking for followers from Shadowclan was more of a desperation move because he wanted to get to kill his enemies before they died from old age or something. Him encountering Embermask specifically could be chance, and he'd then pick Embermask because he reminds Ravencall of himself when he was a kitten. He did make an "exception" for Splashnose too after all.
Edited by Nukeli on May 8th 2022 at 6:44:19 PM
~ * Bleh * ~ (Looking for a russian-speaker to consult about names and words for a thing)I propably need to adjust the pacing. Maybe Tempeststar's death should be earlier, maybe at the end of book 2, so that events wouldn't lump up in the last two books and they'd be in the mountains longer.
- (Book 1) - In the prologue, Shadowclan's old leader (and longtime paranoid dictator) Antstar dies from a massive stroke and his deputy Tempestwhisper becomes Tempeststar, and everybody is secretly relieved he's gone. Later Sunpaw, a kit during the prologue, becomes an apperentice and his mother dies from blackcough. He becomes closer with his kithood friend and fellow orphan Icepaw who only has one living sibling. Shadowclan's don't-give-shits culture and the cat society's ableism leads to other cats either abandoning the somehow physically disabled Sunpaw on his own devices or actively mistreating him, and he only has Icepaw, his mentor Marshrose, and the medicine cat Tallcloud. Marshrose resents what Antstar's reign did to Shadowclan's society, and has ambitions of becoming the leader so he can fix the clan's shit. The also orphaned but ablebodiednote Emberpaw is similiarly abandoned by society, but doesn't have any kind of support network, and starts seeing a black Starclan catnote in his dreams. The cat takes him under his wing and gives him training and reassurances he doesn't get from his actual mentor, and Emberpaw grows very grateful and devoted to the black cat. At the end, the black Starclan cat is revealed to be named Ravencall, though Emberpaw doesn't recognize him, the reader is supposed to.
- (Book 2) - Marshrose suddenly gets paresis of the hind legs from an injury or illness, leading to his removal as Sunpaw's mentor. Sunpaw is moved to the ableist Blackstorm, who yells at him and keeps pushing him too hard. Marshrose tries to get her removed as Sunpaw's mentor, but Tempeststar and the rest of the clan don't give enough shits. Sunpaw tries to bear it and trains alone with Icepaw in his own pace when he has the time and strenght, trying to find a way to cover for his weaknesses and use his strenghts the right way, and starts developing feelings for Icepaw. Sunpaw and Icepaw also have to hunt for Marshrose because he can't, and the clan doesn't pool and share prey like it should. Marshrose resents his situation, and all he can do is to try to support Sunpaw psychologically. At the same time Ravencall, loved and trusted by Emberpaw, starts feeding him his fascist, ableist, and xenophobic ideas about what's wrong with Shadowclan. When Emberpaw starts believing him, Ravencall starts telling him the only way to "fix" it is to kill cats. He becomes a warrior alongside Icepaw (Icestrike), and gets Bonepaw as his apperentice, letting Bonepaw in on his secret. Prompted by Ravencall, Embermask approaches younger warriors and older apperentices with his ideas.
- (Book 3) - Tempeststar is poisoned and dies horribly in the first chapter and Embermask accuses the half-Thunderclan Tallcloud in front of the clan, alleging that he poisoned her to destabilize the clan so that Thunderclan would have an opening to attack them. Tallcloud is horrified and denies it, but Embermask's associates and "neutral" characters block him from escaping and he's basically mauled to death by furious cats. The next scene immediately reveals that Embermask did the poisoning on Ravencall's orders, to remove Tallcloud from his powerful position, and so that his full-clan apperentice Deadmoon (who's secretly in on Embermask's agenda) can take the position of the medicine cat. Tempeststar's deputy doesn't know Embermask did it, but starts seeing the writing on the wall and after Deadmoon fakes threatening signs, he decides he doesn't want to die and runs away from Shadowclan. Deadmoon then starts using her position as a cat shaman/seer to spread the idea that the clan's previous authority figures have turned their backs to them and that Starclan is speaking to them directly through her and Embermask. Embermask targets the elders and disabled cars first, telling the clan they're a "resource drain" that drags down their swamp clan where prey is already scarcer. Over half of Shadowclan's cats either agree or are accomplices by inaction by not doing anything about it. As the fervor rises, Blackstorm turns her back to Sunpaw but insists that she's not supporting Embermask and actually somehow opposes his agenda (not true. She's accomplice at best). Marshrose decides they need to leave and him, Sunpaw, Icestrike, Icestrike's sister, and a handful of other cats "sneak out" of the clan - by walking out of the camp in broad daylight, one at the time or in small groups, which isn't noticed until later. Ravencall tells Embermask to take advantage of this and send Bonepaw and Swiftstorm to agitate at the Thunderclan border to set up the stage to tell the clan Marshrose and the others are traitors who've gone to Thunderclan with information on them and that Thunderclan attack is thus imminent, so that Shadowclan will have an excuse to attack Thunderclan. Ravencall tells Embermask that there'll never be peace, or "order" or "safety" in the forest as long as Thunderclan is around right on the other side of the road, living on better land.
- (Book 4) - Marshrose and the others have gone up to the mountains behind the Mothermouth in fear of being pursued. There aren't many others; Sunpaw, Icestrike, Thrushclaw and his mate, their kits Flamedash and Redbreast, Redbreast's mate Tinyclaw, Deadmoon's daughter Scorchtail and his adopted daughter Bullkit, Icestrike's sister, Sparrowflight, and Shadowleap. Despite his disability, Marshrose becomes the group's de facto leader due to being the oldest and most experienced cat besides Sparrowflight (who doesn't want the responsibility of their survival). Life on the mountains is hard and prey is scarce, but they find shelter. Marshrose assumes the authority to give Sunpaw his warrior name, and Sunspot tells Icestrike about his feelings. Icestrike also likes him, but didn't tell earlier because the overall situation always seemed inappropriate when it kept getting worse and worse. In Shadowclan, Embermask has attacked Thunderclan, killing many cats and driving the rest out of their own camp, and young Shadowclan warriors Wheatpelt and Goldendawn don't approve of where the clan is going, but are afraid to openly rebel and instead try to covertly prod Deadmoon and Embermask for information about their plans. Rustgaze also privately questions who's talking to Embermask in his dreams and what his endgame is, but remains in the belief that he's doing the best for his clan by fighting against Thunderclan. Deadmoon tries to turn the clan hierarchy more into something where the leader nd the medicine cat wield dual authority, which Embermask doesn't like, but Ravencall tells him to not kill her until they have another medicine cat. Because the warriors didn't find a trace of Marshrose and the others in the Thunderclan camp Embermask orders to look for them elsewhere, finds out they're in the mountains, and orders an attack. They can't spare many cats because they're occupying Thunderclan, so Marshrose's cats are able to fight them off. Trushclaw throws himself and his brother Batfang (who had joined Embermask) down the mountain and they're both impaled by a sharp rock, though Batfang dies immediately and Trushclaw a few days later. It's discovered that Rustgaze's and Threeheart's apperentices, Bluepaw and Claypaw, are halfclan, and Deadmoon makes Bluepaw infiltrate the rebels, telling her that because of her spiritual powers she will know if Bluepaw won't act as told, and if she steps out of line her sister Claypaw will be killed. While Deadmoon's plotting this without telling him, Embermask plans a campaign against Windclan. Bluepaw is to lead the rebels to the neutral territory around the fourtrees under the guise of trying to get help from Riverclannote , and when they're out in the open without high ground advantage, they'll kill them all. However Marshstar has formed an alliance with two small stray packs (to defeat two other stray packs led by the pack leaders' enemies, somewhere after the mountain battle) that come with them, evening their numbers. Redbreast's and Flamedash's mother is killed in the fight, some other cats from both sides die, and Icestrike seemingly dies when he falls off the bridge into the river. Wheatpelt and Goldendawn flee with the rebels, not getting to Riverclan. Contrary to her claims, Deadmoon doesn't have psychic powers and doesn't know the ambush failed until she's informed. Claypaw plans to escape before Deadmoon gets to her.
- (Book 5) - Icestrike is found from the river by a Riverclan patrol, and finds out Thunderclan's survivors have fled to them. He mentions Ravencall, the name he heard when Embermask was initially trying to recruit him, which elicits shock from the older Riverclan cats. Icestrike speaks to Splashnose, who tells him who Ravencall was and what he did. The question is what he intends to do to his Shadowclan supporters once they've done their job, and what he's planning for Riverclannote . Splashnose suggests that he's trying to get them killed by the end. What he'll do to Riverclan is an open question, but Splashnose assumes it'll involve murdering him, Goosefoot, and Nightstar in the very least. Embermask allies with the other two stray packs' leaders, Wolf and Tuna, in order to gather the necessary manpower to attack Windclan, while Deadmoon's apperentice Lilyheart bones Tuna and ends up pregnant (breaking Embermask's law), but figures she can hide the kits' parentage. Almost the whole Shadowclan mobilizes to attack Windclan, enabling Claypaw to sneak away. Rustgaze sees her go, but doesn't tell anybody. Deadmoon gets mad when she notices she's gone, and Embermask finds out she's been acting behind his back, and kills her. He then orders everybody to go to attack Windclan, and chase down and kill as many cats as possible. The rebels finally decide Marshrose needs to go and get the nine lives, after earlier disagreements on it and worries that Starclan could refuse because of his paresis. When they're down at the Mothermouth, Claypaw arrives to tell them about the attack on Windclan and Marshstar sends Sunspot, Scorchtail, some others, and the stray packs to help Windclan. Windclan's driven out of its camp, but Riverclan and Thunderclan also arrive, outnumbering Embermask and his allies. His accomplices by inaction also start folding. Icestrike reveals to them who Ravencall actually was and where he was from, and what he planned to do to Shadowclan while he was alive. This shocks them and causes doubt, but Embermask goes into denial and multiple cats stick with him. The ones who still want to fight lose and are driven out, while Lilyheart runs away with Tuna's pack. Embermask and his remaining supporters, and Wolf and his pack, are chased all the way to the city limit where they decide to give up the chase and go back to the battlefield. Windclan's leader has died of her wounds and lots of other cats have died (or in Shadowclan's case, died and gotten exiled. Though they had the highest population at the start and the other clans had less). The clans agree on peace and close cooperation until at least the next full moon in order to recover and rebuild faster, and be ready immediately if Embermask and his allies come back. They return to their camps, Shadowclan and Thunderclan walking together until the Thunderclan camp for security because the city is right next to their territories. Shadowclan's thinking abiut what to do to it's Embesmask's turncoats/accomplices by inaction.
- (Book 6) - Next full moon, Marshstar meets the other leaders for the first time. He allows himself to be carried until almost at the fourtrees, but insists on walking (by heavily leaning on his deputy) where the other clans can see him because he wants to look strong and dignified. The deputy walks him to the speaker rock, which he climbs on his own and greets the other leaders. They notice something's up, but assume it's a wound. Shadowclan has less than 28 members left, when you count the other stray pack which joined the clan(while the pack led by Tuna's enemy went back to wherever they came from), and the cats are privately worried such a small number might not be viable without taboo-breakingnote , and the other clans have also lost a significant number of cats this year to disease and the battles. When Shadowclan returns to their camp, they encounter Rustgaze who wants to come back to Shadowclan. They decide to take him with them now and discuss it later, because having him where they can keep an eye on him constantly feels like the best idea, and he can't possibly overpower them alone. In the city, Embermask has allegedly had a kit (despite being a male tortoiseshell, which are usually infertile), named Cinderkitnote .
I haven't figured out entirely what happens from there, but Embermask remains convinced Ravencall cares about him and deserves his help, and basically becomes bandits/terrorists with his pack (and also seeks revenge against Lilyheart for having a kit with Tuna and ditching Embermask's pack). In the end, Sunspot kills Embermask while Cinderfur, Bonepaw, and possibly some others escape. It remains unclear whether Ravencall might have actually cared for Embermask, or if his paternal role to Embermask was just a tool. Wolf also dies, but not before trying to betray Embermask, and Lightningtail learns Embermask killed Deadmoon.
I don't know how to actually resolve this conflict, because how do you get permanently rid of ghosts? The Warrior Cats canon already did the ""the deadfight the living and each other and can die a second time"", and possession and the like have also already been done by the Erins.
Edited by Nukeli on Jun 1st 2022 at 10:52:47 PM
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I have some kind of plots for the first "series" of my Warrior Cats fic.
It consists of six "books" that try to be Original Flavour (also in lenght, they're supposed to be around 62,000-65,000 words long, like conflicting sources measure Into the Wild). As for the "books" themselves, you can notice from the summaries that parts 2-3 are less plot summaries and more lists of things that i want/need to happen. I'm also trying to use this thing as practice for when i'll start writing my own original fictionnote , so i need this to actually be good.
Ideas? Opinions? Advice?
Edited by Nukeli on May 8th 2022 at 6:44:44 PM
~ * Bleh * ~ (Looking for a russian-speaker to consult about names and words for a thing)