Our Avatar are in a City

It's kinda on life support now,it needs a bit more love and posts;And even if it was dead*takes out a necronomicon*.

Please, if you want Undead, just wait till Exodia's brother, Necros, shows up.

On a different note, and this is a GM-specific part...

Teoinsanity, you're required to always make sure your character's name is in your roleplaying post, as specified in the rules. Basically, assume we can't tell what your character's name is. The lack of this makes your post very hard to read as is. Whether you use script or story format is irrelevant, of course, as long as either of them works. Right now, it looks like you're simply typing on a messageboard, instead of your character talking. That in itself is an issue. Remember, you're playing as a character, and not directly as yourself.

In other words, your messages should look something like this;

"My name is Teo. It's nice to meet you." Teo said with a smile.

or

Teo: My name is Teo. It's nice to meet you. *smiles*

Either way works. The key point of this is so we can always know what your character's name is so nobody ever gets confused. Basically, your writing style is currently incompatible with this roleplay. Your actual roleplaying skills beyond that are fine, however, again, for this specific roleplay.

On another note, I must repeat again that you yourself are not in the roleplay, but the character. Anything you say is how you say it in the game. Any mispellings, well, that's how my character would hear it appropriately, or react to it. There is no autocorrect that exists, since your character isn't typing out a message. What you say happens/is said, respectively. You're... not fitting in well here, which means my previous paragraph right above this one might not be as applicable as I thought it was. Of course, if you can fix these mistakes, you'll fit in with the rest of us just fine.

edited 6th Jul '14 1:54:08 AM by Irene

Sorry

I presume by that you understand what mistakes were made and will work on fixing them in the future, then?

Yes I will

Excellent. Also, it does appear your Grammar/Spelling isn't very top-notch.

It doesn't seem to have any negative effects on your roleplaying here, though. If you're not writing something down/typing something and showing it to the other character, there's no way to properly acknowledge in-game you misspelled something, so that shouldn't even be worried about.

That said, You can go here if you wish to improve your Spelling and Grammar. It's called "Get Help With English", a very useful thread for people who have those kinds of issues when typing. Whether it's because you've had few English classes, are bad at typing, or from another Country, people will gladly help improve your skills.

I'm just bad at typing.

Sorry or double post,but the two posts are different in Time of posting and subject.

This was pretty much the only RP that accepted me,and I was really touched by that,but the thread is close to death,and with me an Irene being the only ones who post regularly these days,we need more people.so lets begin operation:

PR

• 1:we each get a few of our friends to join.

• 2:we get one of the G Ms to make an actual storyline.

• 3:this will bring the thread to the forefront of the forums

• 4:???

• 5:profit.

edited 7th Jul '14 10:48:09 AM by Teoinsanity

We don't need to "bring it to the front of the forums", it's not a contest or something. It's just freeform roleplaying.

That said, I've done my inviting already here and there. If you have an idea for an actual plot, I would like to hear it. A lot of my plot ideas are more or less held back by the lack of pictures of the appropriate characters, to an extent. Like the Omega Psycho Rangers' powered-up forms.

edited 7th Jul '14 3:11:05 PM by Irene

What I meant was that if we bring it to the front of the forums we will get more players,not for a contest.

ANYWAYwhat about a plot where the players just wake up in a forest ,and we have to take down a force of pure evil ?And the rangers are working with it ,only for them to betray it,stal it's power,and go into an omega dark form.

PS:did you draw the rangers yourself?

edited 7th Jul '14 10:55:06 PM by Teoinsanity

I edited some sprites, actually. And thus, got a very reasonable design. The powered-up design adds animal motifs, which means it'll take a while to get just right for each one.

Anyway, that cuts off most of the city(and makes it hard for other players to join into the plot). Perhaps something where a plot could come to them to a degree? Not completely contrived, but a problem in the city itself that'll catch the attention of the more heroic characters.

What about,the city was built over a cave where a evil demigod like wizard made magic,an that's why the city has a magical feel to it.then the rangers revive him,and he literally unleashes hell on the city .

• I can't approve of that since Stonedog actually had the city built. He'd have to okay that.
• The Rangers are good guys, so... I don't know why they'd revive an evil entity.

Oops didn't know they were good guys,but what about the wizard mind controls them,and he triesto mind control the players,but he can't for some reason..

edited 8th Jul '14 12:54:36 AM by Teoinsanity

One, the city could have a evil under it.

Two, For plot. there will be none till i seen a couple more players join.

Three, Irene, I trust you to say ok to plot in the future :D

Yay for evil under the city!can't belive I said that

Why do you think grandmole get annoyed when you wreck there city?

Well,sorry grandmole.

I only have two active characters right now, Ganondorf(who has too strong of a will to be mind-controlled) and Bumba(who however does not have that strong of a will).

Maybe some other player characters could help unleash it by accident?

Well,Teo is too insane to be mind controlled .

The thread is dead,so isay we should move it to the role player guild

...Um, hi. Irene said I should check this out.

Check out the rules from the first post that are linked. Show a character. And we'll approve it if it works. Then playing is possible~

The rules list~

edited 11th Sep '14 9:17:21 PM by Irene

Already read the rules. I'll post a character sheet tomorrow, as I am probably sleep-deprived and I don't want to goof up.

No problem. See you tomorrow, then.

I do work tomorrow, so it might be a while before I or Stonedog sees it.