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1->'''Spike''': [[ArcWords Well, that didn't work]].
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3''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67362/hard-reset Hard Reset]]'' is a ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]]'' fan fiction story by Creator/{{Eakin}}.
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5Twilight isn't having a very good day. An experimental spell blew up in her face, [[BugWar an army of changelings is attacking Canterlot]], and [[BreadEggsMilkSquick she just died]]. Yet somehow, it looks like it's going to keep going downhill from here. Given the chance to correct what's gone wrong, Twilight swears [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong she's going to fix all this]] even if it kills her. Which it will. [[TheManyDeathsOfYou Frequently]]. A DramaticReading can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aE8nLEHdZ4o here]].
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7''Hard Reset'' is notable in that, unlike many GroundhogDayLoop works, the actual loop ends about 2/3rds into the story. While that was the original ending, reader feedback stated that it felt too abrupt, leading to the final third of the story tackling the psychological ramifications of what Twilight experienced. Additionally, it has since spawned two direct sequels, forming what the author refers to as ''The Time Loop Trilogy'':
8* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82419/a-stitch-in-time A Stitch in Time]]'', takes place a few months after ''Hard Reset''. Twilight's attempts to get past the [[ShellShockedVeteran PTSD]] caused by her looping and regain some semblance of normalcy are tempered by the fact that all the alternate timelines created by her spell are slowly causing the space-time continuum to tear apart. Fixing the damage requires a pony that is capable of understanding time magic just as well as she does: Star Swirl the Bearded.
9* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112831/you-can-fight-fate You Can Fight Fate]]'', takes place immediately after ''A Stitch in Time''. Receiving a bloodstained letter from an older Star Swirl, Twilight discovers that not only are the Elements of Harmony sentient, but that they've been creating multiple timelines for some malevolent goal. Twilight must now reunite with Star Swirl and travel across space and time in order to stop them.
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11There are also two side stories within the same continuity:
12* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109290/the-reign-of-queen-twilight-sparkle The Reign of Queen Twilight Sparkle]]'', a DarkerAndEdgier story which explores the AlternateTimeline shown throughout the trilogy, in which Twilight's "perfect run" did not succeed, and that Twilight [[SanitySlippage ends up going insane]]. [[BoredWithInsanity Then sane again]].
13* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/127038/changing-lives Changing Lives]]'', a POVSequel entitled starring Cloud Kicker and Azalea, taking place before, during, and after the main trilogy. [[WordofGod Word of God has this fic as dead as of 2018]].
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15Finally, there's an AlternateUniverse re-imagining of the story called ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/145711/hard-reset-2-reset-harder Hard Reset 2: Reset Harder]]'', written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/horizon horizon]] with Eakin's blessing. After looping for several months, Twilight discovers that she isn't the sole looper; both allies and enemies have been repeating the day as well, making things a bit more complicated. Sadly, the author abandoned it and the story [[DeadFic stopped updating in 2014]].
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18!!''Hard Reset'' provides examples of the following:
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20* AdvancingWallOfDoom / WorldWreckingWave: [[spoiler:The Wall of Horrible Shiny Death, aka, the Elements of Harmony]].
21* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Changelings are portrayed this way. There's a loop where Chrysalis spares Twilight after the two share [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu a surprisingly friendly and hostility-free chat over tea and scones,]] leading Chrysalis to wistfully express her regret more ponies aren't like Twilight, which sends Twilight into a brief epiphany regarding the relationship between their species. DoubleSubverted when Chrysalis promptly pops up again, says she changed her mind, and proceeds to lay eggs in Twilight's head.
22** [[spoiler:After the event, the ponified-changelings are revealed to have been basically oppressed by the queen, according to the changeling Butterscotch, which if it's true, means the only one that was AlwaysChaoticEvil was Chrysalis]].
23* AndThenJohnWasAZombie:
24** [[spoiler:In the canon ending, the Elements of Harmony transform almost every changeling into a true pony permanently]].
25** [[spoiler:In the alternate ending, Twilight willingly becomes a changeling in order to take over the hive]].
26* ApocalypseHow: [[FantasticNuke The Elements]] resort to this if there's a major disruption of harmony and no bearers. Twilight wonders how close to death they came during the first invasion. Under the current scale on that page, it's Planetary/Total Extinction.
27* ArmorPiercingQuestion: from Applejack, during the intervention in "Closure."
28-->'''Applejack''': How’s it sound like you’re doin’ at protecting your friends from gettin’ hurt?
29* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: This is how changeling society [[KlingonPromotion decides upon its ruler]].
30* BatterUp: Twilight gets quite friendly with a baseball bat in one of the loops, which quickly becomes a favorite weapon of hers, to the point [[ICallItVera she affectionately calls it]] "Home Run". [[spoiler:The name even gets engraved into the bat when the rest of the Mane 6 give it to her as a gift in her Thank-You party]].
31* BeamOWar: Twilight finds Celestia and Chrysalis engaged in one. [[spoiler:Celestia will inevitably lose unless Twilight steps in]].
32* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Twilight manages to break the time loop and repel the changeling invasion with no major losses, but suffers immense psychological trauma in the process, which isn't made clear how well she will recover from]].
33* BloodyHilarious: The author didn't originally intend to make the story come off so comically, but Twilight's DeadpanSnarker narrative is both brilliantly in-character and stupendously hilarious enough to make several deaths entertaining to read. It helps that Twilight eventually becomes so desensitized to the idea of her death that she ends up being very nonchalant about it.
34* BodyCountCompetition: Twilight gets into one with herself and becomes quite enthusiastic about beating her previous record of kills.
35* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Twilight becomes a victim of this in one loop after being bitten by Chrysalis, [[FightingYourFriend and subsequently forced to attack Luna]].
36* BugWar: A huge changeling invasion that will almost certainly succeed in taking over Canterlot... [[spoiler:if it weren't for the Elements of Harmony being pissed off by that]].
37* TheCameo: Cloud Kicker from FanFic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony pops up in the last chapter. She acts as you'd expect.
38* ChainsawGood: Used in at least one loop for the sole purpose of [[MundaneUtility beating her previous]] [[BodyCountCompetition record of changeling kills]].
39* CrypticConversation: Between Celestia and Twilight regarding some sort of connection between Twilight and Starswirl the Bearded. WordOfGod is that it's a SequelHook.
40* CurbStompBattle:
41** Twilight's initial confrontations with changelings result in her death multiple times. After looping enough times to predict exactly how a changeling will react in battle and gaining enough battle experience, she's the one dealing them instead.
42** This is also invariably the result of any encounter between changelings and an alicorn [[spoiler:unless they [[ZergRush ambush her in the hundreds]]]].
43* DeathByGluttony: Twilight at one point decides to perform an impromptu toxicology study on donuts. [[ForScience For science of course!]] [[spoiler: She manages to eat 23, before being killed by a changeling]].
44* DeathByIrony: At one point, Twilight gets killed by ''friendship''.
45* [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu Did I Just Have Tea with Chrysalis?]]: In one loop, [[RefugeInAudacity Twilight goes straight up to Chrysalis and bluntly tells her she knows what's going on]] and that [[BystanderSyndrome she has no intention to do anything about it]]. Chrysalis binds her, but the two have a friendly chat over tea and scones wherein they exchange embarrassing stories about Shining Armor. [[spoiler:Then Chrysalis kills her]].
46* DisintegratorRay: This is what [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony]] do when enraged.
47* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Twilight kills herself by throwing herself off a castle balcony in a depression, after being DrivenToSuicide by Luna and her friends' deaths]].
48* DespairEventHorizon: Twilight's first "successful" loop[[note]]Elements of Harmony contained, Crysalis dead, central Canterlot holding out, still alive after more than 31 hours[[/note]] [[spoiler: ends with her [[DrivenToSuicide throwing herself off a balcony]] and indulging in pointless violence [=and/or=] wish fufillment for the next several cycles.]]
49* TheDitherer: Twilight becomes a tragic case of this; spending months in the time loop leaves her with anxiety over the littlest choices once she gets out since she no longer has any way to go back and correct any mistakes she makes.
50* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Twilight, in the loop where she first discovers her friends will die if she doesn't prevent it, followed by Luna being killed in an ambush]].
51** [[spoiler: In the sequel, it's strongly implied that she would have ended up this way outside of the loop. Good things her friends intervened]].
52** She gets to this point rather easily; an early loop (once she notices how she hasn't stayed dead) ends with her carefully positioning herself under a soon-to-be-falling wooden beam.
53* DuctTapeForEverything: During at least one killing spree, Twilight binds a changeling with duct tape before casually going over to it and smashing its brains in with [[BatterUp Home]] [[ICallItVera Run]].
54* EmoTeen: Twilight apparently went though a phase of this when she was growing up. Spike is somewhat horrified when he thinks a [[WrongGenreSavvy time spell]] might be causing Twilight to repeat it.
55-->'''Twilight''': I thought we agreed [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain never to speak of that again]].
56* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Twilight in the alternate ending chapter]].
57* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:The Changelings are permanently transformed into the ponies they were impersonating (if any), which includes implanting the original pony's memories (in addition to the Changeling's memories), whether or not said pony is alive. As we learn in later stories, this can and will include the memory of the pony's death]].
58* FantasticAesop: After being killed by the Elements of Harmony, Twilight's reaction is that there's probably a decent friendship report somewhere in the fact that "misusing the power of friendship can not only hurt you, but can make every particle in your body explode at the same time". A valuable lesson for us all.
59* FantasticRacism:
60** Chrysalis implies this is an overarching cause for the enmity between the two races. This racism becomes much more notorious once the changelings [[spoiler:are permanently turned into ponies by the Elements of Harmony, resulting in some willing to take them in with others decrying and rejecting attempts to integrate them into pony society]].
61** After her experiences with them, Twilight herself displays this racism quite strongly, and we can't blame her for it. [[spoiler:She gets over it rather quickly though]].
62* FightingYourFriend: At one point Twilight gets [[BrainWashedAndCrazy brainwashed]] after being bitten by Chrysalis and is forced to attack Luna, who ends up killing Twilight in self-defense.
63* {{Flashback}}: Twilight experiences one during the last canon chapter after Spike unwittingly triggers it by uttering the same sentence Twilight always hears whenever she starts a new loop, showing us [[TimeSkip what happened between the culmination of the last chapter and the time before she has her flashback]].
64* ForWantOfANail: Given the premise, Twilight, naturally, eventually indulges in this for a while, getting into some quite interesting and hilarious situations.
65* FriendsWithBenefits: [[spoiler:Luna offers this to Twilight after inadvertently learning about their liaison in a previous loop.]]
66* GilliganCut: The story makes liberal use of these to show different loops, especially when dying in one results in Twilight correcting herself in the next one (or the relevant one several loops later).
67* GoodIsNotNice: After the Elements of Harmony [[spoiler:permanently transform all changelings into ponies]], Twilight reflects on the morality of this before pointing out that they're not called "the Elements of Niceness" after all.
68* AGoodWayToDie: Subverted. Twilight delivers a scathing rant to Celestia when it's suggested her friends died in this way, and berates Celestia so harshly over her ignorance of death that it renders her speechless. [[spoiler:This ends up coming back to haunt Twilight when Luna gets killed shortly afterwards, and her immense regret over her harsh words likely plays some small part in her suicide]].
69-->'''Twilight''':All my friends died alone.
70* GoryDiscretionShot: For some of the more gruesome deaths. Averted for others, such as the time where Twilight describes her neck being snapped, or how a death was relatively good because she barely had time to feel her [[EyeScream eyeballs boil]].
71* GroundhogDayLoop: Resets every time Twilight dies to the point the initial "save-point" spell was cast, although without certain actions taken, the loop basically lasts around 3 hours before [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony destroy the world]].
72** GroundhogPeggySue
73* ICallItVera: Twilight becomes quite attached to her baseball bat, [[ShoutOut eventually calling it]] [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica "Home Run".]] Note that in-story, Home Run is considered a typical Equestrian name.
74* [[IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim If You Kill Her, You Will Be Just Like Her]]: Averted. [[spoiler:Celestia disappears rather than attacking Chrysalis when mocked over Luna's death, which Twilight explains is because she is better than this. Twilight then reminds Chrysalis that while this may be true for Celestia, it definitely isn't true for ''herself'', before proceeding to cast a dark spell that results in an agonising and protracted death as a punishment]].
75* IgnoredEpiphany: Subverted. Twilight comes to believe that she's been approaching the situation incorrectly and that she's meant to bring about peace between ponies and changelings after the honest fun and good time she had with Chrysalis in the "tea party loop". Just as she resolves to do this, [[spoiler:Chrysalis reappears moments after having left, nonchalantly states she changed her mind and cheerfully kills Twilight]]. Twilight promptly changes her mind about peace.
76* ImaginedInnuendo: Probaly because she has a certain reputation, Twilight misinterprets the advice Kicky tries to give her.
77-->'''Kicky''' Here’s a free piece of Azalea advice. When you get your sandwiches, give her your pickle.
78-->'''Twilight''': I don’t know what that means, but it doesn’t sound like something I’d be comfortable doing in public.
79-->'''Kicky''': That wasn’t a euphemism, Twilight. Azalea loves pickles. Offer her yours and you’ll score major marefriend points.
80* IronicEcho: Twilight's last thoughts before being vaporized by the Elements of Harmony are [[TemptingFate "this is definitely going to work"]]. Cue Spike's comment moments later after the loop restarts...
81** This story has a few, some ironic, echoes of past statements by the characters.
82* IWantGrandkids: Twilight's mom. The fact that [[spoiler:Twilight is gay]] has absolutely no effect on this. [[spoiler:Aside from thinking of the possibilities that two uteri could have in this regard.]]
83%%* KaizoTrap: Several of them. We actually learn the main ones pretty soon into the story, though there are others.
84%%** [[spoiler:Chrysalis will overpower Celestia without Twilight's intervention]].
85%%** [[spoiler:The changelings will kill the other Mane 6 if Twilight doesn't send Luna over to save them]].
86%%** [[spoiler:Without the Mane 6 together to exhaust the energy of the Elements of Harmony, Celestia will be forced to contain them while Luna leads the war effort, resulting in Luna getting ambushed and killed]].
87%%** [[spoiler:And of course, if nothing is done to stop the invasion and the rising disharmony produced by it, the Elements of Harmony will destroy the world]].
88* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: In at least one loop, Twilight goes on a changeling killing spree after [[KleptomaniacHero having stolen]] from many shops, ranging from [[MiniDressOfPower slinky dresses]] to expensive earrings.
89* KickTheDog: [[spoiler:Chrysalis in one loop takes on the form of the (now dead) Luna for the sole purpose of mocking Celestia]].
90* KlingonPromotion: In order to become Queen of the Hive, the challenger changeling must depose and consume the reigning queen in single-combat. [[spoiler: Twilight does precisely that in the Alternate Ending]].
91* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Twilight's reaction to Spike bringing up her [[EmoTeen emo phase]] when growing up.
92* MacGyvering: Twilight eventually learns how to use common household items to put together high-grade explosive charges. [[TheManyDeathsOfYou After many tries of course]]. She puts these to good use to reduce a hallway and a large squad of changelings to a mess of molten rock and agonizing stragglers.
93* [[TheManyDeathsOfYou The Many Deaths of Twilight]]: Some are [[BloodyHilarious rather funny]], while some... aren't.
94** Some highlights include: having her [[NeckSnap neck broken]], being stabbed, [[EatenAlive eaten]], [[DisintegratorRay vaporized]], [[DisneyVillainDeath falling to death]], having her head [[YourHeadAsplode crushed by a falling beam]], [[StuffBlowingUp blowing herself up]] making homemade explosives, [[BodyHorror having eggs laid in her skull]], and being killed while [[DeathByGluttony incapacitated after a donut binge]] [[ForScience in the name of science]].
95** The sequel mentions a few more, including [[OffWithHisHead being decapitated]], [[KillItWithFire immolated]], eviscerated, [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice run though]], and [[LudicrousGibs diced to pieces]].
96* NeckSnap: Twilight ends up as a victim of this as part of her many deaths. Somewhat disturbingly, she carries on with her narration while describing the sensation of having her blood vessels snap and burst...
97* NoodleImplements: A weather vane. All that's mentioned is that Twilight seems to have enjoyed whatever Luna did with it...
98** [[RunningGag It continues to come up throughout the trilogy, too.]] Still don't know what it was used for, which may be for the best.
99** ''Changing Lives'' reveals that it has something to do with the weather vane generating an electromagnetic field and setting off nerve endings through the body. Cloud Kicker has experienced it, and notes that Azalea will be walking funny for two days afterwards, "three if it was a copper one".
100* NoodleIncident:
101** Spike mentions a time where Twilight [[EmoTeen dyed her mane black]] and called herself 'Darkness Nightshade'. She is [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain not amused]] at having this brought back up.
102** Celestia has dealt with Twilight's existential crises in a less literal sense before:
103-->'''Twilight''': Princess, can you tell if I’m real?
104-->'''Celestia''': Twilight, have you been reading philosophy books without proper supervision again? Because we’ve talked about that.
105* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: In one loop, Twilight is [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu taking tea with Chrysalis]], and it seems to be going rather well, and Twilight thinks she can [[HeelFaceTurn redeem Chrysalis]]. [[spoiler:Subverted when Chrysalis comes back and tells Twilight she's [[ILied changed her mind]] and will now proceed to [[FaceFullofAlienWingWong lay eggs in Twilight's skull]]]].
106* NotInFrontOfTheParrot: Fluttershy talks [[spoiler:about Twilight being gay]] to her animals while petsitting Rose's parrot. When she returns said parrot to her in the Ponyville marketplace, it escapes and ends up outing her to the entire town.
107* PayEvilUntoEvil: In one loop, Chrysalis maliciously and cruelly taunts Celestia by [[spoiler: taking on the form of the recently-deceased Luna]], prompting Celestia to vanish in a rage rather than taking revenge. Twilight states this is because Celestia is better than Chrysalis. Before leaving, she mentions she is ''not'' better than Chrysalis, then [[spoiler:uses a dark magic spell to kill her while making sure she suffers the most excruciating pain imaginable until the very moment she dies.]]
108* {{Paperworkaholic}}: In the final chapter, Twilight Sparkle is having a rough time recovering after escaping the GroundhogDayLoop. Princess Celestia puts Twilight in front of a stack of paperwork roughly twice as tall as she is to cheer her up.
109-->'''Twilight's Narration:''' I love her so much sometimes, I don't even know how to properly express it.
110* SaveScumming: Twilight's key to victory, in classic Groundhog Day style.
111* ScrewYourself: A pony named [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony Cloud Kicker]] all-but states to have done this with a changeling [[spoiler: that was permanently transformed into a real version of herself due to the Elements of Harmony]].
112* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Twilight becomes determined to do anything and everything in her power to save everyone she can.
113* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: Chrysalis' way of [[KickTheDog Kicking The Dog]]
114* ShapeShifterModeLock: Not just any changeling, but [[spoiler:almost every changeling.]] They become permanently locked into the form they had when [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony were used on Chrysalis]]. This is not merely a change in appearance; they were turned into a true pony in every single way, meaning no more HiveMind or emotion eating.
115* SheepInSheepsClothing: During one of the early loops, Twilight and "Celestia" are accompanied by guards heading to the vault where the Elements of Harmony are kept, only for Twilight to expose Chrysalis causing all but one of the Royal Guards to transform into Changelings. The unfortunate Pegasus who thought he was escorting his Princess was then torn to shreds.
116* ShellShockedVeteran:
117** ''Hard Reset'' ends with [[spoiler:Twilight becoming one after the loop is finally broken. She has clearly received immense psychological trauma during their ordeal, to the point of suffering from nightmares, flashbacks, being terrified of making mistakes and becoming reclusive.]]
118** The first chapter of ''A Stitch In Time'' ensures that [[spoiler:she's improving, though not totally recovered.]]
119* ShoutOut: Of sorts: the Author's Note at the end of the first chapter reveals that the WebComic/SkinHorse arc "Choose" inspired this story.
120* SidetrackedByTheAnalogy: When Twilight first enters the vault where the Elements are stored, she observes the "incalculable" wealth inside, only to correct herself and immediately start working out the best way to determine the value. She does manage to stop herself before she gets too distracted though.
121* [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay Something Only Celestia Would Say]]: Subverted. In an early loop while engaged in a BeamOWar with Celestia, Chrysalis (as Celestia) convinces Twilight she's the real one by telling her to attack them both, knowing Twilight would believe this is something only the real Celestia would say.
122** Inverted in an earlier loop, where 'Celestia' commands Twilight; the true Celestia never would have done so.
123** Interestingly, during the aforementioned BeamOWar, Chrysalis commands Twilight to attack them both when she hesitates, cluing in the audience to the trickery if they’re paying particular attention.
124* SpottingTheThread: Twilight notices 'Celestia' making a few mistakes when they discuss retrieving the Elements of Harmony. After [[PullTheThread pulling too hard on the thread]], Chrysalis drops the disguise and kills her.
125* TemptingFate: Twilight confidently believes that her plan to disarm the Elements of Harmony [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong cannot possibly fail and harm her]]. [[DeathByIrony It does]].
126* TookALevelInBadass: Twilight takes several over the course of the story. Celestia help you if you're a changeling on her bad side.
127* WeMeetAgain: Twilight uses this when she first discovers Chrysalis has returned, before chiding herself for not coming up with anything more creative to say.
128* [[WhileRomeBurns While Canterlot Burns]]: Twilight indulges in this after several loops and pursues some decidedly non-important things, ranging from [[KickingAssInAllHerFinery trying on new dresses]] and attempting to determine the LD[[subscript:50]][[note]]the median lethal dose; the amount of a substance required to kill 50% of a population and a standard measure of toxicity. If Twilight was really intending to calculate this, it would take a considerable amount of REPETITION, as one instance is not a statistically significant basis for calculation. Besides, it's not the donuts that killed her on the one run through.[[/note]] for donut frosting and sprinkles, sleeping with Princess Luna, and [[ComingOutStory telling her parents that she's actually gay]] in order to gauge their response.
129* [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Why Don't You Just Kill Her?]]: Averted. Having apparently learned from [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 last]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 time]], Chrysalis doesn't bother with any EvilGloating and immediately kills Twilight in an early loop by [[NeckSnap breaking her neck]].
130* WrongGenreSavvy: Spike in one loop recognises there's some sort of time spell going on by noticing Twilight's different behaviour and attitude, but believes she's cast an age spell on herself instead of being stuck in a time loop.
131* ZergRush: [[spoiler:Luna ends up being killed this way unless Twilight convinces her to fetch the mane cast]].
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134!!''A Stitch in Time'' provides examples of the following:
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136* AffectionateNickname: Star Swirl called Luna "Lunatic." Twilight says that sounds kind of cruel for a nickname. Celestia says it didn't come to mean "crazy pony" until ''after'' [[SlapSlapKiss Luna and Star Swirl's extremely tumultuous relationship]].
137* BadassBoast: Twilight actually delivers one of these. To Azalea, in fact.
138* BadDate: Twilight, after a major argument with Azalea, ends up dating another mare. It doesn't go well. Then again, given Twilight's experiences up to that point with mind-altering substances, it was inevitable. It leads to the InsultToRocks moment below.
139* BlindDate: Applejack sets up Twilight and Azalea, and despite some early difficulties the two really hit it off.
140* EveryoneHasStandards: As in ''Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony'', [[EthicalSlut Cloud Kicker]] has lines she won't cross, as does her former changeling [[ShapeshifterModeLock double]]. When Twilight tells them about Algae Bloom and her attempt to get her liquored up, Cloudy promises to have a frank discussion with her about respect and consent.
141** Ironically, Algae argues the same in ''Changing Lives'' when talking to Kicky. "Enlighten me, how many ponies have you raped, exactly? With all those mind control tricks of yours? Tell me how you can still look down your muzzle at me and lecture me about 'rules' after that. At least all the ponies I've been with said yes." Which comes across as utterly hollow once you've read the chapters where she has no problem trying to get obviously reluctant ponies drunk enough to say yes.
142* ExactWords: After Twilight returns from her journey to [[spoiler:the alternate universe]], she tells a white lie to Azalea that it wasn't so bad. Azalea replies, "I'm glad. Tell me all about it." [[spoiler:Because Twilight is still affected by Changeling venom, she is forced to tell the whole horrifying story, up to and including her alternate self becoming the Changeling Queen, until Azalea finally interrupts.]]
143* FallenHero: The antagonist, [[spoiler:Changeling Queen Twilight]]
144* FalseUtopia: The antagonist has created one of these in her timeline to delude herself into believing that everything turned out fine after all. When the mask is torn away, she is [[UnstoppableRage not happy about it]].
145* FeeFiFauxPas: Twilight expresses her distaste for Cloud Kicker's lifestyle, specifically "the way she’ll jump into bed with anypony with a pulse". Azalea's reaction to that tells her all she needs to know.
146* GameOfNerds: Twilight followed through on learning baseball. 'I really have been studying it since the girls gave me Home Run back at the party. If somepony had just told me it was ninety percent statistics I would have started following it sooner.'
147* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each chapter title incorporates the word "time" somehow.
148* InsultToRocks: Twilight to a would-be date, Algae Bloom, who makes [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony Cloud]] [[EthicalSlut Kicker]] look like Rarity. Algae mentions briefly how her job at a pet store consists mainly of cleaning the "slimy plants" out of the tanks. Once Twilight has had enough of her, she launches into a [[ShownTheirWork lecture on cyanobacteria]], describing its function in ecology, explaining why being described as pondscum wouldn't be as insulting as another mare would think, then telling Algae that she's not even worth its attention. And then she installs a new BerserkButton if Algae ever tries going too far on future dates.
149* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler:Starswirl's letter]] mentions how Luna believed the Elements were a necessary counter to Celestia’s power in case she, unchecked, became a tyrant. "I have spent the last two decades appreciating the irony."
150* MercyKill: In what is perhaps the darkest moment of ''A Stitch In Time'', Twilight discovers [[spoiler:Luna. Under the effects of Queen!Twilight's mind-control venom, she has become little more than a Sex Slave]]. Twilight's traveling companion makes the decision to euthanize said pony. [[spoiler:[[FromBadToWorse Said traveling companion was Starswirl, who is Luna's husband.]]]]
151* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: A few of these. Starts off with Twilight realising that she had, during the earlier story, started treating everyone as disposable tools. This includes herself.
152-->''Whenever I made some little mistake I’d cut my own throat open to jump to the next loop if I thought it would save me an hour.''
153* NoFourthWall: The chapter narrated by Pinkie Pie.
154* RunningGag: Pinkie's inability to understand recursion, to the point where when she ''does'' get it right, Twilight reflexively starts to correct her. [[spoiler: It's also a subtle hint that the individual using it [[ShapeShifter isn't Pinkie Pie]]]]
155** Twilight seems to [[NoodleIncident consider weathervanes in ways that don't involve wind patterns, still.]]
156** Quills and Sofas's legacy continues on.
157-->'''Applejack''': You might be surprised what you can find over at [[spoiler:Lingerie & Refrigerators]] off Main street.
158* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Starswirl's [[WriteBackToTheFuture second letter]].]]
159* ShoutOut: The Author references one of their earlier works, when Twilight mentions using ventriloquism in a [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/31925/ "magical sparring match with Luna that got a little out of hoof"]]
160* StableTimeLoop: [[spoiler:While in the alternate timeline, Twilight gives Starswirl the alias "Shooting Star", his daughter - Twilight's ancestor - who Celestia had told her about earlier. After returning to his time, Starswirl sends a letter telling Twilight that he named his daughter Shooting Star after the alias she "made up" for him.]]
161* SurpriseIncest: Technically speaking. [[spoiler:After sleeping with Luna in the original story in one timeline, Twilight is somewhat disturbed when she finds out she's descended from Luna and Star Swirl by about 40-50 generations, though Luna isn't bothered due to the very small degree of relativity this involves]].
162* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech
163** Twilight gives one to Starswirl.
164** Twilight has this with her {{jerkass}} of a blind date Algae Bloom, in reference to Algae's earlier remark about how her pet store job mostly consists of cleaning "slimy plants" out of the tanks. Twilight decides she's had enough after coming back from the bathroom and finding another drink already waiting for her.
165-->'''Twilight''': Cyanobacteria.
166-->'''Algae Bloom''': What? Is that some kind of nerd code word?
167-->'''Twilight''': What you scoop out of the fish tanks. They aren’t plants, they’re cyanobacteria. You know, pond scum.
168-->'''Algae Bloom''': Oh. So what? What’s the difference?
169-->'''Twilight''': Proper classification is important, and those are two completely different things. Just because you don’t appreciate them doesn’t mean they aren’t good and important things. They provide something like twenty or thirty percent of Equestria’s oxygen, and they’re essential to the nitrogen cycle too. None of us would even exist without them.
170-->'''Algae Bloom''': Well to me they’re just squicky, worthless ooze.
171-->'''Twilight''': They survive almost anywhere, you know. From salty ocean water to rocky desert soil. You can try to kill them over and over again but they just always seem to bounce back. I just wanted you to know so that if some other mare in the future thinks it’s clever to tell you that you’re pond scum because you’ve treated her the way you’re treating me, it’s not as much of an insult as you think. If anything, [[InsultToRocks it’s an insult to the cyanobacteria]]. Frankly, you aren’t worth cyanobacteria’s attention.
172-->'''Algae Bloom''': It's a good thing you're a hot piece of flank, because I don't know how anypony could put up with how weird you are if you weren't. Seriously, you should just shut up and have a few more drinks.
173-->'''Twilight''': Yes, I'm weird. I say and do crazy things sometimes. Things nopony understands, not even me. But some ponies, not horrible little stupid ones like you, mind, some ponies try. They don't know me, but they want to and they see that all those weird things are actually pretty wonderful. They look past how messed up I am. I thought I had to push one of them away because she doesn't see what I'm really like, but I was wrong.
174-->'''Algae Bloom''': Where are you going now?
175-->'''Twilight''': To get her back. Oh, and by the way? It's not as if it ever would have been fine, exactly, but you picked the worst possible time to try to get me liquored up so you could take me to bed. [[BerserkButton I happen to just have adopted a zero tolerance policy for mares who try to warp others' minds for their own pleasure]], and if I ever hear from anypony that you've been getting fillies drunk and taking advantage of them they will never find your body.
176-->'''Algae Bloom''': Wow, I didn't realize you were going to turn into such a psycho bitch over a drink.
177-->'''Twilight''': Don't worry, it takes more than that to bring out my worst. A lot more. You don't even meet the detection threshold to register as something bad happening to me. If you ever do, you'll know. Briefly.
178** Starswirl gives one to Azalea after she walks out on Twilight, who had just told her about Queen Sparkle. At first, it's only [[InnocentInaccurate vaguely described]] by Pinkie when she takes over the narration. We see it in detail in ''Changing Lives'', and it is ''vicious''.
179* TooMuchInformation: Twilight's reaction when Cloudy starts explaining [[spoiler:falsely]] why her former changeling double has been named Kicky.
180* TraumaButton: "Well, that didn't work."
181* WalkOnWater: Twilight and Azalea, thanks to a spell cast by Twilight.
182* WartsAndAll: Extending from how Twilight spoke highly of Starswirl in the show. When she meets him? Jerk. She eventually chews him out and leaves him in the lurch. This mirrors her attempt to date, too. [[spoiler:Twilight even admits that had she not been on the other end regarding Azalea seeing her as larger than life and Twilight begging her to come back, she wouldn't have extended the same to Starswirl.]]
183* WhatTheHellHero: During their intervention for Twilight, Rainbow Dash calls her out for letting the rest of them die when she'd already figured out a perfect victory plan, just so she could go back and take the opportunity to sleep with Luna. Twilight concedes the point, admitting that she treated the others, and herself, as disposable tools during the time loop.
184* WriteBackToTheFuture: Starswirl, after Twilight sends him back. [[spoiler: Twice, the second time with a grave warning.]]
185
186
187!!''You Can Fight Fate'' provides examples of the following:
188
189* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler:Twilight and Azalea have at least one as of the epilogue, and with Twilight pregnant with another]].
190* BadassBoast: Twilight delivers one to [[spoiler:the Regalia]].
191-->"I’m Twilight Sparkle. You were scared of me before, and you have no idea how right you were."
192* BittersweetEnding: Not in the main story, but the "bonus" chapter at the end. [[spoiler:The character previously known as Changeling Twilight has existed for trillions of subjective years, and learned the value of forgiveness. She finally dies for good, as her universe ends, with her granddaughter by her side.]]
193* BookEnds: "Well, that worked."
194* BoredWithInsanity: [[spoiler:Princess Sparkle]] claims this, almost by name. [[spoiler:While she may be sane, that doesn't mean she isn't evil....]]
195* ConvectionSchmonvection: {{Invoked|Trope}}. [[spoiler:Discord]] threatens to turn the convection back on if Twilight doesn't abide by his instructions.
196* CosmicPlaything: Twilight comes to consider herself this after having discovered Star Swirl's letter at the very beginning of the story. [[spoiler:She's certainly got its attention, at least.]]
197-->''The multiverse hates me. It’s the only rational conclusion I can draw that fits all of the available data.''
198* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Everything that [[spoiler: Alternate!Discord does to his Mane Six. It starts out tame enough, turning them into fruit, but then he literally wrings the blood out of Applejack, who he turned into an orange, and then drinks it. He then chops up the other five into chunks and then eats them. It should be noted all six of them are alive throughout the entire process and able to feel everything that's happening to them]].
199* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Twilight succeeds in saving the world, marries Azalea, starts a family, and ascends to become a princess]].
200* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Nightmare Moon]]. She is still shrewish and vicious and murderous, but she's quick to step into line with the protagonists when she realizes that her own existence is on the line.
201* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Changeling Twilight]]. While still amoral to the extreme, she's no longer puppy-kicking evil. This is because she's had plenty of time to deal with it. [[spoiler:And by deal with it, we mean plot her ultimate revenge.]]
202** [[spoiler:Subjective millennia later, she learns the value of forgiveness and truly gets over it.]]
203* KirkSummation: Twilight delivers one as she reminds the Elements just what [[CallBack harmony actually is]].
204* LotusEaterMachine: The Regalia pull this on Twilight. [[spoiler:They think of it as their reward to her, and the others, for coming pretty close to what they think is a perfect world.]]
205* MathematiciansAnswer: Courtesy of [[spoiler:everyone's favourite master of chaos]]; the AlternateUniverse version.
206--> [[spoiler:'''Discord''']]: Do you know what’s especially fun? Acid.
207--> '''Twilight''': The chemical substance, or the hallucinogenic?
208--> [[spoiler:'''Discord''']]: Yes. Provided you don’t mix them up. Actually, especially when you mix them up.
209* MythologyGag: The last few chapters are not subtle with their hints that Twilight is soon to become an alicorn. This never becomes plot-relevant, and was inserted mainly because it was a recent canon revelation at the time of the fic's publication.
210* NoodleIncident: Twilight and Luna discover some sort of plot during the epilogue that decidedly falls into this territory.
211--> "But... but... [[NoodleImplements enchanted spatula]]! We have to do something or the cultists will cross-pollinate with the mutant porcupines."
212* SaveScumming: Starswirl has an amulet that can bring him back five minutes if he's killed. Since it takes an hour to recharge, he can't use it with nearly the same wild abandon as Twilight did in the first story.
213* TimeAbyss: Twilight's alternate, Queen Sparkle. She never escaped the time loop; after the events of A Stitch in Time, she is first driven insane and then [[BoredWithInsanity driven sane again]]. By the end of the story, she has lived hundreds of trillions of subjective years until [[spoiler:reality has degraded enough that [[TimeStandsStill time stops]] within her lifetime, ending the loop]].
214* WackyCravings: [[spoiler:Twilight ends up suffering from them in the epilogue. Azalea apparently went though a similar ordeal during her pregnancy]].
215
216
217!!''The Reign of Queen Twilight Sparkle'' provides examples of the following:
218
219* AllTakeAndNoGive: Queen Twilight's 'relationship' with Luna
220* AloneWithThePsycho
221* AnAesop: "Dear Princess Celestia, today I learned that a true friend is a pony who will help you do what’s necessary no matter what. Even when it hurts somepony else, even when it hurts them, a good friend is a pony who will understand that the ends justify the means. One who will make sacrifices for you when you ask it of them. One whose obedience is never in doubt."
222* AndIMustScream: subjected to total sensory deprivation for several days, Pinkie destroyed her vocal chords trying to produce audible sound
223* AxeCrazy
224* BatmanGambit: several, to make her friends to destroy their elements
225* BerserkButton: Queen Twilight is ''not'' a monster and she ''is'' loved
226* BreakTheCutie: Queen Twilight breaks her friends to make them destroy the elements
227* BreakTheBadass: Queen Twilight's 'wife', Luna
228* DarkerAndEdgier: While a lot of the darker parts are implied or occur off page elsewhere in the trilogy, this story is not shy about showing what kind of horrors went down under Queen Twilight's rule
229* DespairEventHorizon
230* DesperatelyCravesAffection
231* EmotionEater
232* FaceFullOfAlienWingWong: Queen Twilight and Luna's 'child'
233* FateWorseThanDeath: several
234* Hallucinations
235* HairTriggerTemper
236* IRejectYourReality
237* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope
238* LoveHungry
239* MaskOfSanity
240* MindRape
241* RageAgainstTheReflection
242* SadisticChoice: Queen Twilight pretends to offer several to her friends as part of her gambit for destroying the elements
243* SanitySlippage
244* ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Queen Twilight finds her unicorn form harder to maintain over time
245* StepfordSmiler
246* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
247* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness
248* TotalitarianUtilitarian: Queen Twilight initially tries to run Canterlot for the benefit of Changelings and Ponies
249* Yandere
250
251!!''Changing Lives'' provides examples of the following:
252* BedTrick: Revealed to be standard operating procedure for hungry changeling drones - Kicky and [[spoiler:Scootaloo]] bluntly admit to having slept with Cloud Kicker while disguised, and/or sleeping with other ponies while impersonating her. For her part, Cloud seems to realise that the changelings were too under Chrysalis's control to be held responsible for it, but she's still pretty pissed when she realises that [[spoiler:a changeling almost destroyed her friendship with Blossomforth in this way - and that said changeling was Kicky.]]
253* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Algae gives Cloud one claiming that she is who she is because she was molested by her father, [[SubvertedTrope then bursts out laughing at her for believing it]].]]
254* GilliganCut:
255-->'''Cloud Kicker''' ''[[TemptingFate I just hope if she does see Twilight]], [[ForegoneConclusion the conversation goes well.]]''
256-->''cut''
257-->'''Azalea''': Twilight haaaaaaaates meeeee!
258* HarmlessVillain: Elizabeak, one of the former Changelings. Unlike Kicky and [[spoiler:Azalea]], who have the memories of the ponies they were impersonating, or [[spoiler:Scootaloo]], who has her friends, she remains fanatically loyal to the Changeling cause and the next Queen. But, being trapped in the body of a small chicken, she can't do anything about it.
259* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Cloud's reaction when she learns that [[spoiler:Azalea {{Mind Rape}}d her into giving up information on the defences of the Kicker clan compound while she was sleeping]], which haunts her for some time afterward.
260** [[spoiler:Azalea]] reveals that most if not all of the Changelings went through this after being transformed into ponies, and many of them were DrivenToSuicide. [[spoiler:Cloud was what stopped Azalea from doing the same.]]
261* RetroactiveWish: When Cloud introduces [[spoiler:Kicky]] to Lyra, her narration says that she "would give anything for something to interrupt this awkward moment." Cue Rose's parrot flying past, being chased by Fluttershy, saying, "Bwawk! Twilight Sparkle is a lesbian! Bwawk!" Cloud then wishes for a million bits to fall from the sky into her lap, but decides it must have been a one-time thing.
262* TooMuchInformation: Rainbow's reaction to Cloud telling her about the weather vane trick. Progresses to IgnoringBySinging when Azalea starts explaining the science behind it.
263* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:Blossom tears into Kicky when she finds out she was the changeling who slept with her while impersonating Cloud, almost destroying their friendship.]]
264-->'''Blossomforth''': So let me see if I’m understanding this right. You’ve been a pony for months now. I understand that you wouldn’t have told me before you transformed, but what about after? Have I ever judged you for what you used to be? Ever treated you like you were less than my very best friend?
265-->'''Kicky''': I... no, Blossom, you’ve been great, but—
266-->'''Blossomforth''': How did I taste?
267-->'''Davenport''': Blossom, don’t.
268-->'''Blossomforth''': I asked you a question, Kicky. How. Did. I. Taste? Were my feelings for Cloud strong enough for you? Did they make a good snack?
269-->'''Kicky''': ...Yeah. They were very strong.
270-->'''Blossomforth''': And you were hanging around town for all the time afterwards too, right? So how did I taste to you then? How did I taste when I woke up alone that morning? Or when I thought Cloud had decided to pretend that nothing had happened between us?
271-->'''Kicky''': You were pretty sad, as I recall.
272-->'''Blossomforth''': You recall wrong. I wasn’t sad. I was devastated. Do you have any idea how many nights I spent laying awake in bed trying to figure out what was ''wrong'' with me? Playing that night over and over in my head trying to figure out if I made some sort of mistake? Never knowing if I’d said something I shouldn’t have and too scared to ask Cloud, because I was afraid she’d just end up confirming that something about me wasn’t good enough for her? Cloud didn’t know, but you did! You knew! All you would have had to do was take me aside some time during those first couple days and explain. I would have forgiven you! Heck, it would have been a huge relief to know for sure, but did you do that? Or did you wait until this all got dredged up again for me because you’re a bucking coward?
273-->'''Kicky''': Um... better late than never? (''Blossomforth slaps her'')
274
275!!''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94339/6/eakins-rapid-fire-pony-fics/the-legend-of-the-enchanted-spatula The Legend of the Enchanted Spatula]]'' provides examples of the following:
276
277* NoodleIncident: This fic explains nothing. The only reason for this thing to exist is because of a NoodleIncident in ''You Can Fight Fate'' that Twilight doesn't get to go on, and this fic explains none of it. Now we have to wonder about jam, ferrets, quiches, and how Luna will keep herself from telling Twilight about this.
278* WeShallNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: A somewhat (literally) smoldering Celestia's decision on the matter.
279
280!!''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/145711/hard-reset-2-reset-harder Hard Reset 2: Reset Harder]]'' provides examples of the following:
281
282* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler:The reason Celestia has to kill Twilight after she uses the incomplete TrustPassword is because one way she could have gotten it is via a MindProbe using forbidden magic, and if so then she has become a grave threat to Equestria, and it's impossible to rule this out to Celestia's satisfaction. However, since she ''could'' be telling the truth, she does tell her the complete password before killing her. If she's a looper, she'll have better luck next cycle. If not, Celestia has saved Equestria from grave danger.]]
283* LittleBrotherIsWatching: Once Twilight let Spike in on what was happening with the time loops, he's been reining in many of her more ''anti-social'' solutions.
284* MentalWorld: Chapter 11 takes place entirely within [[spoiler:Twilight's]] mind ...
285* MindProbe: ... because once the princesses learn that [[spoiler:Twilight was on good terms with Cadence (who in this timeline was behind Luna's fall into evil), Luna mentally invades under the assumption that that's the only way to discover Twilight's true goals.]] Unfortunately for everyone, [[spoiler:Twilight ''isn't'' actually a sleeper agent.]]
286* MySkullRunnethOver: The information Twilight receives from [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony]] severely overloads her brain, causing several deaths before [[spoiler:Luna removes the memories]].
287* RippleEffectProofMemory: Simultaneously subverted and played straight, in different ways. The story explores the premise of multiple ''intersecting'' [[GroundhogDayLoop time loops]], with the catch that only the first looper to die in a particular iteration will remember its events. At the same time, Twilight's unchanged memories of her original past become increasingly troublesome as the story progresses.
288* TimeCrash: The story earns its "Reset Harder" title by having [[spoiler:Luna and Twilight cause ''literally infinite damage to spacetime'' after Luna permanently kills Twilight. That deprives the time loop of its looper, causing a recursive failure.]] Fortunately, [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony]] are there to give them a second chance.
289* TrustPassword: When Celestia hears that Twilight is a fellow time looper, she tells Twilight a password to unlock secret knowledge in Celestia's brain. When Twilight repeats the password to Celestia later on, [[spoiler:she's paralyzed by a powerful spell, and Celestia immediately kills her]][[note]][[spoiler:(being required to assume that Twilight must have gotten the password by using some forbidden arts to probe her mind and is thus a threat to Equestria)]][[/note]] [[spoiler:after revealing that the "secret knowledge" is the rest of the password. It's repeating the ENTIRE combination that convinces Celestia of Twilight's story.]]
290
291----
292-->'''Spike''': Well, that didn't work.

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