This is discussion archived from a time before the current discussion method was installed.
Camacan I think the original sense of this article has become a bit diluted. It wasn't original meant to mean a cheesy opening sentence. It was meant to refer to any overcomplex purple prose, especially when backstory is dumped into every nook and cranny and the point gets lost somewhere in all the adjectives and subclauses. I'm not too happy with the laconic version.
