Webcomic Yeah... I don't think this is worth anyone's time.
So my friend, Jerry Springfield told me about this webcomic and after reading his review, I decided to check out the comic for myself and there is absolutely nothing interesting about this comic. Like the writing is very bland and despite the creator's best efforts the characters are really one dimensional and have no redeeming features. The jokes are not even funny, like it does not live up to being a comedy webcomic like it claims to be, because when you reach the last panel of the comic you don't know if there is a punchline or not. I even skipped ahead to see if this picks up anywhere. (Spoiler alert, it never does). So yeah the writing is terrible and makes no sense, and there barley is any comedy, almost like the creator is trying to talk down to the audience like we're all idiots.
The art style is also pretty bad too. I know you don't have to be the greatest artist in the world to make a simple comic strip, but that doesn't mean you have to draw like a preschooler and use MS paint. From what I heard, the artist might have some ego issues and refuses to improve on it and looks for dumb reasons or excuses on why he wont improve. Like if he wants his art to be slightly more professional, maybe watch some tutorials on youtube or buy a book on how to draw cartoon characters. I'm not a great artist myself but even I know that you gotta practice on your art if you want to be an artist and if you want people to take you seriously. Like art is subjective sure, but there are still rules/guidelines that even Picasso had to follow like color theory, perspective, form, anatomy, lining and etc. I mean those are ESSENTIAL to all artist. And if you don't want to improve you could always beg your friends who are better artist to illustrate the comic for you. Just a suggestion.
So yeah in conclusion, this comic is bad. The writing is boring, the humor is unfunny and falls flat, the characters are horrible and the artwork is garbage. The creator of this comic does absolutely nothing to make up for this comic's poor quality because he is likely blinded by his own ego or is just too stupid. He's pretty much the Michael Bay of comic making.
So yeah, thanks for reading, I have been Brendaniel.
Webcomic This comic makes Sonichu look better.
I have had the total misfortune of reading this comic and let me just say it was an awful experience. I just want to list off everything wrong and why this comic sucks so much.
1. The plot doesn't make any sense. I doubt there is even a plot at all considering it's all over the damn place.
2. The artwork is absolutely awful and childish. The creator obviously never practiced on his art. I know most artists try to have their own distinct styles but I seriously recommend that the creator goes back to school if he wants to get anywhere as an artist. Because it looks more like something a 5 year old drew after discovering MS Paint on Mommy's computer.
The artist obviously doesn't know how to do proper perspective hence why his backgrounds look weird, and he can't even do basic anatomy which is why his characters look ugly with awkward looking bodies. Its obvious that he has never seen a woman before either considering he cannot draw even breasts and never adds hips on his female characters, making them look like skinny males with moobies. He manages to fuck up even the simplest designs. Like I said I highly recommend that the creator maybe take art classes and practice more if he wants to get anywhere. He's not even worthy of being called an artist.
3. Even if the art wasn't at a third grade level, the comic overall still sucks. The creator can't even make up for it in writing, because the jokes are so bland and not funny. His comics are so boring, stupid, uninspired and insulting at times, as if the creator is trying to talk down to the reader.
The creator often uses dark or mature themes as a desperate attempt at comedy, but they come off more disgusting and disturbing than funny. They don't even qualify as shock value because the creator never ever ever finds subtly. Mature TV shows like South Park or Robot Chicken make dark humor work because they're more subtle with there work, and the writers are slightly more intelligent, and know how to write decent comedy instead of this mindless shit.
He also needs to stop using songs in the comics because that never helps. This isn't Shrek you know.
4. The creator can't take criticism well (Even when someone is trying to help him improve better). Every time someone criticizes his work he always looks for stupid excuses to justify his work instead of discussing criticism. Like why he won't improve on his art or his writing. He also gets really butt hurt when someone on twitter called him a "poser" or "talentless hack". Maybe people will stop calling him that if he stops trying to get involved with something he doesn't understand, or can't even do. He either needs to A) Take these constructive criticisms to heart if he wants to get anywhere with his comic or his work, or B) Stop all together because he's not getting anywhere.
He's worse than Norman Boutin, the author of the Empress Theresa novel.
So in conclusion, "Cycle of Luv" is a terrible comic with really bad art and bad writing. Don't waste your time reading this as there are plenty of better webcomics out there, and having to sit through this hurts my brain and made my eyes bleed.
And Mr. Lucasthedoctor if you are reading this, this I'm sorry for sounding so harsh, but it's the truth. Your comic is in dire need of improvement so either you can learn from all your critics, or you need to stop making content all together because all you are doing is embarrassing yourself.