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1.The character must personally commit actions that are truly heinous by the standards of the story, which makes no attempt to gloss these over or present them in a positive light. Offstage Villainy doesn\'t count; the story has to show the actions, not imply them. Actions that become inconsequential through Negative Continuity don\'t count either. A Complete Monster is implied to have crossed the Moral Event Horizon either during the story or long before it, but a character can cross the Moral Event Horizon without necessarily being a Complete Monster.
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1. The character must personally commit actions that are truly heinous by the standards of the story, which makes no attempt to gloss them over or present them in a positive light. OffstageVillainy doesn\\\'t count; the story has to show the actions, not imply them. Actions that become inconsequential through Negative Continuity don\\\'t count either. A Complete Monster is implied to have crossed the MoralEventHorizon either during the story or long before it, but a character can cross the MoralEventHorizon without necessarily being a Complete Monster.
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Well, she steals Ariel voice, hoping that she will fail to get her man and become part of her collection so she can bargin her for the trident to rule the ocean. That all sounds CompleteMonster-ish on paper yes. But remember that she \'\'never actually does\'\' any of this stuff. A CompleteMonster needs to walk into a story. I\'m going to vote no on this one.
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Well, she steals Ariel voice, hoping that she will fail to get her man and become part of her collection so she can bargain her for the trident to rule the ocean. That all sounds CompleteMonster-ish on paper yes. But remember that she \\\'\\\'never actually does\\\'\\\' any of this stuff. A CompleteMonster needs to walk into a story. I\\\'m going to vote no on this one.