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* Foreshadowing: All the way back in ''Vol 1 - 8: Renegades'' it is shown that Yoshihara is capable of [[spoiler:using The Spin]] when she activates her ranged version of Killer Queen's first bomb. In ''Vol 10 - 1: Training Camp From Hell - Part 7'' it finally pays off.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: All the way back in ''Vol 1 - 8: Renegades'' it is shown that Yoshihara is capable of [[spoiler:using The Spin]] when she activates her ranged version of Killer Queen's first bomb. In ''Vol 10 - 1: Training Camp From Hell - Part 7'' it finally pays off.
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After years of abuse, Yoshihara kills her mother with her Stand.]]
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* DarkFic: This is a pretty grim story.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:The main, overarching villain of this fanfic is a man by the name of Taisuke Yagi, leader of a gang by the name of Damnatio Ad Bestias, a gang that rules the Criminal Underground of Japan with an iron fist. He is also a powerful Stand User, whose Stand, Mr. Blue Sky, was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. His Stands ability, as stated by Jirou when sparing it, is complete mastery over Time and Space. He can Bend Space around him, Stop Time, Rewind Time, Erase Time, and Fast Forward Time. [[AllOfYourPowersCombined Effectively giving him every power a main villain from Jojo has had, and then some.]] His only downside is that he can only do one at a time, and they each have cooldowns, with Stop Time being the shortest, and Erase Time being the longest. It's no wonder why he had the balls to openly threaten All For One with his death, especially with the power his Stand has]].
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:The main, overarching villain of this fanfic is a man by the name of Taisuke Yagi, leader of a gang by the name of Damnatio Ad Bestias, a gang that rules the Criminal Underground of Japan with an iron fist. He is also a powerful Stand User, whose Stand, Mr. Blue Sky, was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. His Stands ability, as stated by Jirou when sparing it, is complete mastery over Time and Space. He can Bend Space around him, Stop Time, Rewind Time, Erase Time, and Fast Forward Time. [[AllOfYourPowersCombined Effectively giving him every power a main villain from Jojo has had, and then some.]] His only downside is that he can only do one at a time, and they each have cooldowns, with Stop Time being the shortest, and Erase Time being the longest. It's no wonder why he had the balls to openly threaten All For One himself with his death, especially with the power his Stand has]].
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* TorsoWithAView:
** During ''Volume 3 - 8: C'est La Vie, Heart Attack - Part 2'' [[spoiler:Yoshikawa Kira, Yoshihara's mother, is defeated when Killer Queen punches a hole through her Stand's chest, which replicates the same wound on Yoshikawa, ending in her death not too long after]].
** [[spoiler:Momo dies from this, courtesy of Jirou.]]
** During ''Volume 3 - 8: C'est La Vie, Heart Attack - Part 2'' [[spoiler:Yoshikawa Kira, Yoshihara's mother, is defeated when Killer Queen punches a hole through her Stand's chest, which replicates the same wound on Yoshikawa, ending in her death not too long after]].
** [[spoiler:Momo dies from this, courtesy of Jirou.]]
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* TorsoWithAView: [[spoiler:During ''Volume 3 - 8: C'est La Vie, Heart Attack - Part 2'' Yoshikawa Kira, Yoshihara's mother, is defeated when Killer Queen punches a hole through her Stand's chest, which replicates the same wound on Yoshikawa, ending in her death not too long after]].
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* EnemyMine: In ''Vol 10 - 1: Training Camp From Hell - Part 7'' [[spoiler:Tomura Shigaraki saves Yoshihara Kira's life from Takiyuma Yangu and the two team up to fight the monster after calling a truce.]]
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* EnemyMine: In ''Vol 10 - 1: Training Camp From Hell - Part 7'' [[spoiler:Tomura Shigaraki saves Yoshihara Kira's life from Takiyuma Yangu and the two team up to fight the monster after calling a truce.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: Yoshihara does this on one particular occasion. In particular, when she is talking to Izuku outside of Aldera Junior High after school about getting into U.A. and about Katsuki Bakugo as he is TheBully towards him.
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* BrutalHonesty: Yoshihara does this on one particular occasion. In particular, when she is talking to Izuku outside of Aldera Junior High after school about getting into U.A. and about how Katsuki Bakugo as he is pretty much TheBully towards him.
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* BrokenBird: [[spoiler:Yoshihara's life before meeting Midnight/Nemuri Kayama was one of constant strife. An abused youth forced to live on the streets for the majority of her childhood, causing her to become TheSociopath in order to cope, shutting off any and all emotions she had and permanently warping her mind to being incapable of having them. Though recently, she is slowly but surely recovering]].
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* BrokenBird: [[spoiler:Yoshihara's life before meeting Midnight/Nemuri Kayama was one of constant strife. An abused youth forced to live on the streets for the majority of her childhood, causing her to become TheSociopath in order to cope, shutting off any and all emotions she had and permanently warping her mind to being incapable of having them. Though recently, she is slowly but surely recovering]].
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Yoshihara Kira's hero costume is a white and green pinstripe suit, inspired by her relative Yoshikage Kira's disguise as Kosaku Kawajiri, and the suit he wears, paying homage to where one of her inspirations comes from.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Yoshihara Kira's hero costume is a white and green pinstripe suit, inspired by her relative Yoshikage Kira's disguise as Kosaku Kawajiri, and the suit he wears, paying homage to where one of her inspirations comes from.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:The main, overarching villain of this fanfic is a man by the name of Taisuke Yagi, leader of a gang by the name of Damnatio Ad Bestias, a gang that rules the Criminal Underground of Japan with an iron fist. He is also a powerful Stand User, whose Stand, Mr. Blue Sky, was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. His Stands ability, as stated by Jirou when sparing it, is complete mastery over Time and Space. He can Bend Space around him, Stop Time, Rewind Time, Erase Time, and Fast Forward Time. [[AllOfYourPowersCombined Effectively giving him every power a main villain from Jojo has had, and then some.]] His only downside is that he can only do one at a time, and they each have cooldowns, with Stop Time being the shortest, and Erase Time being the longest. It's no wonder why he had the balls to openly threaten All For One with his death, especially with the power his Stand has]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Taisuke Yagi''': Oh trust me, sir. If there is anything to say about me and my word, it's that it's solid. Besides, angering one of the world's most powerful men would be a surefire way to commit suicide, wouldn't you say? Besides, all those Quirk-having losers won't even be able to attack who I'm going to send in, on the account that they're a Stand User. Besides, sir, it also allows me the knowledge that I know you won't be able to take their non-existent Quirk if he intrigues you. Because allow me to be honest, All For One, you don't scare me. So even if you were to come after me in the weakened state that you're in, I can assure you that your death will be solidified]].
* BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler:Between All For One, Taisuke Yagi, Takiyuma Yangu, and Tooru, there are plenty of villains to go about, all of which are a great deal more powerful than the other, and all of which do not want to deal with the heroes.]]
* BigBadWannabe: In this fanfic, All for One is not the BigBad, but rather the BigBadWannabe. The true villain of this fanfic is [[spoiler:Taisuke Yagi, otherwise known as Blackwell in the hero world, or as The Boss of Damnatio Ad Bestias; a powerful Stand User whose Stand was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. It is one of the most powerful Stands thus far introduced in this AU, with the only Stand stronger than it being Wonder Of U on an objective level]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Taisuke Yagi''': Oh trust me, sir. If there is anything to say about me and my word, it's that it's solid. Besides, angering one of the world's most powerful men would be a surefire way to commit suicide, wouldn't you say? Besides, all those Quirk-having losers won't even be able to attack who I'm going to send in, on the account that they're a Stand User. Besides, sir, it also allows me the knowledge that I know you won't be able to take their non-existent Quirk if he intrigues you. Because allow me to be honest, All For One, you don't scare me. So even if you were to come after me in the weakened state that you're in, I can assure you that your death will be solidified]].
* BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler:Between All For One, Taisuke Yagi, Takiyuma Yangu, and Tooru, there are plenty of villains to go about, all of which are a great deal more powerful than the other, and all of which do not want to deal with the heroes.]]
* BigBadWannabe: In this fanfic, All for One is not the BigBad, but rather the BigBadWannabe. The true villain of this fanfic is [[spoiler:Taisuke Yagi, otherwise known as Blackwell in the hero world, or as The Boss of Damnatio Ad Bestias; a powerful Stand User whose Stand was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. It is one of the most powerful Stands thus far introduced in this AU, with the only Stand stronger than it being Wonder Of U on an objective level]].
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:The main, overarching villain of this fanfic is a man by the name of Taisuke Yagi, leader of a gang by the name of Damnatio Ad Bestias, a gang that rules the Criminal Underground of Japan with an iron fist. He is also a powerful Stand User, whose Stand, Mr. Blue Sky, was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. His Stands ability, as stated by Jirou when sparing it, is complete mastery over Time and Space. He can Bend Space around him, Stop Time, Rewind Time, Erase Time, and Fast Forward Time. [[AllOfYourPowersCombined Effectively giving him every power a main villain from Jojo has had, and then some.]] His only downside is that he can only do one at a time, and they each have cooldowns, with Stop Time being the shortest, and Erase Time being the longest. It's no wonder why he had the balls to openly threaten All For One with his death, especially with the power his Stand has]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Taisuke Yagi''': Oh trust me, sir. If there is anything to say about me and my word, it's that it's solid. Besides, angering one of the world's most powerful men would be a surefire way to commit suicide, wouldn't you say? Besides, all those Quirk-having losers won't even be able to attack who I'm going to send in, on the account that they're a Stand User. Besides, sir, it also allows me the knowledge that I know you won't be able to take their non-existent Quirk if he intrigues you. Because allow me to be honest, All For One, you don't scare me. So even if you were to come after me in the weakened state that you're in, I can assure you that your death will be solidified]].
* BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler:Between All For One, Taisuke Yagi, Takiyuma Yangu, and Tooru, there are plenty of villains to go about, all of which are a great deal more powerful than the other, and all of which do not want to deal with the heroes.]]
* BigBadWannabe: In this fanfic, All for One is not the BigBad, but rather the BigBadWannabe. The true villain of this fanfic is [[spoiler:Taisuke Yagi, otherwise known as Blackwell in the hero world, or as The Boss of Damnatio Ad Bestias; a powerful Stand User whose Stand was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. It is one of the most powerful Stands thus far introduced in this AU, with the only Stand stronger than it being Wonder Of U on an objective level]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Taisuke Yagi''': Oh trust me, sir. If there is anything to say about me and my word, it's that it's solid. Besides, angering one of the world's most powerful men would be a surefire way to commit suicide, wouldn't you say? Besides, all those Quirk-having losers won't even be able to attack who I'm going to send in, on the account that they're a Stand User. Besides, sir, it also allows me the knowledge that I know you won't be able to take their non-existent Quirk if he intrigues you. Because allow me to be honest, All For One, you don't scare me. So even if you were to come after me in the weakened state that you're in, I can assure you that your death will be solidified]].
* BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler:Between All For One, Taisuke Yagi, Takiyuma Yangu, and Tooru, there are plenty of villains to go about, all of which are a great deal more powerful than the other, and all of which do not want to deal with the heroes.]]
* BigBadWannabe: In this fanfic, All for One is not the BigBad, but rather the BigBadWannabe. The true villain of this fanfic is [[spoiler:Taisuke Yagi, otherwise known as Blackwell in the hero world, or as The Boss of Damnatio Ad Bestias; a powerful Stand User whose Stand was recently revealed in ''Vol 9 - 4: Training Camp From Hell - Part 2''. It is one of the most powerful Stands thus far introduced in this AU, with the only Stand stronger than it being Wonder Of U on an objective level]].
